Eyes in profile don't work like that; they should be in a triangular shape, lest it looks like the figure is a fish with eyes on either side instead of in front.
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You should also try to define the nose a bit more, since it looks like she just has a lump there. Also, with the cloak,it's not gonna wrap around when it comes to the boob area like a tight shirt. It will fall over it and not hug it. Follow the example of the cloak when you drew it on the other arm, since that's falling normally. You should also check your hands. Both of them are different sizes, so you might want to fix that too. It helps when you're drawing to occasionally flip the image to see if it looks right flipped over and fix things that way too.