Thank you everyone for all of your kind comments! I really really appreciate them!! I'm just happy you all liked it, and each comment means a lot to me :) I made the song except for the overarching melody.
I made all of the song from scratch in Garage Band, and my sister did the singing for me since I had a cold that day lol. I wanted to make it unique, but yet still be Aqua's song - hence the Enya style. At the time, the only english translated part of the song that I could find was that little bit of Aqua singing on the trailer for Fates and I didn't want to do the Japanese lyrics, so that's why the song ended where it did. I wasn't sure if I should continue it or not, honestly, but now that the full lyrics/song are out I'm tempted.