Tactician Robin

First three critiques are done! I tried to read each one fairly with the same mindset and put in some of personal thoughts in here. If you have any further questions or clarifications, please let me know! ^_^ @Emperor_Siegfried @Anacybele @Ottservia

Alright, I see what you are trying to say. I do appreciate the feedback as I'm always trying to improve. Next time I'll make the character's motivations and feelings a bit more crystal clear and cut down the room for reader interpretation.

Aye, I was going for more of an internal conflict than an external one but probably didn't convey my message across clearly enough. I apologize for that one and will do my best to improve for the next writing. Feedback is greatly appreciated! ^_^

Thank you for the feedback! I'm very used to writing completely original pieces but I wanted to try something very simple here first for my first ever entry. I appreciate this and will use this to continue my growth in writing in the future! As for everyone else, I haven't hard time to read everyone's story yet. As a busy university student, I hope you all understand and I'll try to read a few each day.

I also would like to bring to everyone's attention my italics didn't transfer over for my story, so the thoughts of my character were hard to pick up on. I fixed this, so no more worrying!

The possibilities of evolution are endless for this one!

Originality comes from the heart, not the subject matter. Three people can write a story on Awakening all with their own twist on it. It's fun to see what others think on the same topic as it can help you expand and grow as an author. Now, I wrote my story on Awakening for the same reason of Ottservia as it was the first thing that came to mind with the prompt. Nothing more than a stroke of the stars and moon aligning for the three of us.

Fire Emblem Awakening seems to be a popular theme for this prompt. Well, time to read up about our favorite sheep herders once more!

The ducks are in the row! Here it is! If I messed up please let me know and I will change it as soon as possible. Title: Simply a Hunter Words: 2337 Fandom: Fire Emblem: Awakening A little background on this would be this takes place right after the defeat of King Grangel and at the beginning of the two years of peace Ylisse achieves. You follow my original character, Hunter, who is the second born son of Robin and Olivia and his struggles with coping with the future (I promise, this is the only pairing you need to know!). Please enjoy! =w=

I thought this day would never come, but here we are. I immensely enjoyed Rune Factory 4 on the 3DS and I cannot wait to get my hands on Rune Factory 5! My only question would be what dragon would be featured in the game as if I remember correctly, the first four Rune Factories built off the lore from the first game, which mentioned four dragons. But all in all, I am glad it is the same development team as after what happened to Harvest Moon, I don't want Rune Factory to dive down in that same hole.

Alrighty, thank you! I'll read the rules and make sure I have all my ducks in a row.

Hello wonderfully literate people! I've never really posted around before but this seems like a lot of fun! Is it okay for a newcomer to jump right in?

Well since I decided to be more active again, I'll compile a list of all the 5 stars I have gathered. Day 1 player here, with many highs and lows to show for. Duplicates = Red

Do you remember the specific enemies of the map by any chance? Personally, I've never experienced this problem and this map was in the Branded King's Tempest.