This looks like a really great concept. However when I clicked the download link and download the file there was only a readme in the folder after I extracted it...
Seems good so far... However I was wondering why Brequet has Countermagic as a skill unless skills are generated randomly, so Never mind this question. But it doesn't do anything for him if it isn't random..
So Far chapter decision seems good... I do think the lord character does struggle slighty…. Maybe might be a good idea to let him have 1 range bow for more utility... But I do think it has potential... Cant wait till you make the story.