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Hiro Dark

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  1. Ahhhh, gotcha. Still, sounds like it'd be fun to read, and if focusing overmuch on this chapter is giving you this much trouble then taking a bit off for another creative outlet-even one linked as this is-is always a better move than banging your head against a wall.
  2. Certainly! You've got a great writing style, and it'd be cool to see how you'd handle the story and game. Would it still be using Dakota as the protagonist or a Corrin closer to the game's depiction of personality?
  3. [spoiler=Just gonna put this in a spoiler tag 'cause I'm not sure what should and what shouldn't be spoilered and better safe than sorry] Hullo! I stumbled upon this story on a random google search a few months back(looking up gameplay mechanics for Fates I think, unimportant), and I have to say I was hooked from the moment I started reading. The only reason I'm only now responding to the thread is because originally I wanted to at least keep pace with the Birthright campaign and not read past the chapter I was on, but real life ended up getting in the way of me actually finishing that save and at this point I'm a lot farther on Revelations than that anyways, so I just decided to come back and binge the entire story thus far. And I have to say, you completely blew me out of the water, especially with what you did with conquest and how you tied the whole thing together! I especially like the cascade of climactic action-every time I thought you were writing the absolute final part of the Conquest storyline, you ended up just making that more rising action for a damnably satisfying payoff, and it definitely looks like you'll be gearing to one up it even further with the Revelations story. There's honestly a lot I could say about how much I'm absolutely loving your take on the Fates story and what all you're doing, but it's probably nothing you haven't heard before and to be entirely honest I'm already more than gushing anyways, so I'll stop my rambling compliments here and just leave you with well-wishes and the knowledge that you've got another faithful reader/trade partner for Dakota(not sure how much you'll be doing with that further on down the line since as of the latest chapters Dakota has a very good reason not to be using many Bond Units or the like, but I'm Xorhi if the circlet I threw at you yesterdayish went through).
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