RoyStorm

Alright, because I have been keeping Alesha next to Richard the entire time, because I assume there is going to be age support convoys between them! XD

Also, a quick question. Does the hack have support conversations?

These are handful of things I've noticed. But before I get to explaining the problems, let's talk about the good thing I've noticed. First I have to applaud you for you unique choices for certain characters, like Kraig. Although he is the son of a King (albeit adopted...and found inthe mountains...), he is more akin to that of a bandit, which is interesting, and not something I expected. Next is the inclusion of playable soldier units. That is something that was never available in the actual games (I don't think so at least), so it was a bit unique (don't in how many hack may or may not have this feature). And the humorous introduction of my main character made me laugh. It was unexpected and I could relate, I feel the same way he does about those devil spawns. Also, the bosses move? This makes them feel more human, and adds to the challenge of fighting them. Whether it's actually a glitch or intentional, I would keep it. It's unique. Now, the first image show a glitch where it showed dialouge we saw earlier, instead of what should have been there. The next few are grammatical errors. The lines SHOULD be (in order): -"I think that's the third time I've seen that tree..." -"You should have practiced more..." -"I should have trained Kraig better when he was younger" (restructured for a more natural sounding sentence, as it looked and sounds very unnatural) -"It is I who should be apologizing. When Susanne and I couldn't have kids" (Me and Susanne is grammatically incorrect) - There is a slight problem with this next line, I cant offer any replacement yet, but a King, especially given the setting of the game, wouldn't say 'guys'. I would understand if a bandit or Richard, Fiona, or Lee said it, given where they come from. But not from a King. It just stood out. -"I would have relinquished..." Now, when Fiona leveled up, I noticed this. Instead of her name it says her class. I am not sure if that is intentional or not, but I brought it just in case. Now, I forgot to heal Kormac, and I tried to throw a Javelin at the bis of the map. Stupid idea, as he was my last character that could move. So he died, and then suddenly...Ike! I am not sure if it is just a placeholder, or you didn't expect anyone to actually die...or both...but it is the biggest thing I noticed. But that aside, I am really enjoying the game so far!

I have only just got to chapter two, but as far as I can tell it's pretty good. I have noticed a few typos and glitches, but I will address those, as well as some observations I have made once I get further along the story

The best father is "clearly" King Desmond, I mean he totally takes care of his son and is a good fatherly figure. Jokes aside, I can't think of the best dad, but I can name oje of the worst: Nergal, according to Hector's Story (albeit, he doesn't technically know it) He was the father of Ninian and Nils, and sent them to the Dragon's Gate after something happened to their mother, I cant remember all the details. Anyway, after being corrupted by the dark magic, while trying to open the Dragon's Gate to get his children back, he forgot why he was opening it in the first place, only knowing that he needed more power and he needed to open it. He then proceeds to abuse these children and force them to nearly die opening trying to open the Dragons Gate, and manages to trick Eliwood into killing/nearly killing Ninian. Father father of the Year, people.

Yay i'm not alone! "You doubt my power?! I am Psycho Mantis! The world's most POWERFUL practitioner of psychokenisis and telepathy alive! You like Hideo Kojima games, don't you?" "Did you say nerd?"

I could also use an invite link. Vnesh#5356

My name is Roy. Well, it's not my name, it's more like an...Alias...I guess. I don't know. Anyway, I am new to the forums, but not to Fire Emblem. I am a huge fan of the series, but never played Ike's games because they are so gosh darn expensive! Trying to cut back on swearing, hence me using such a stupid term like "Gosh Darn". But I Digress. I am a not so subtle reference to the Young Lion himself, while "Storm" is another story for another time. God, gotta love typing at 5:07 AM with no sleep and being a damn mess due to being ADHD. ANYWAY, I think this entire postpretty much sums me up. Crazy, all over the place, with no rhyme or rhythm, just saying whatever garbage comes out of my mouth. Anyway, hello SF!Here is all my info: Online name: RoyStorm (also known as: RoyStormageddon, Vneshniy Nebo, and Who_Child) Real name: Michael Parker DoB: December 28th, In the not too distant future~ Favourite FE Game: Blazing Sword Favourite Game (other than FE): The Entire Metal Gear Series. Favourite FE Character: Tied between Roy and his father, Eliwood. Least Favourite game: A lot. Bubsy, Aquaman: Battle for Atlantis, Sonic '06, The Zoo Race, and who could forget that flawless gem, Ride To Hell: Retribution. Sports: Track Online friends:The_Wet_Turd1 Favourite music: Prefer orchestral or instrumental video game music, sometimes tv music and movie if it's good. Favorite Composers: Murray Gold, Koji Kondo, Harry Gregson-Williams, John Williams, and Norihiko Hibino. Favourite artist/band: Linkin Park, because I am so edgy. (Also Starbomb!) Favourite song: Depends on my mood. Country:America, the country thag is utterly fucked. MSN/Yahoo/AIM: N/A Hobbies:Being a tumor, drawing, writing scripts, and playing games Good Point: I am a loyal friend, (good looking too), and I am actually quite intelligent. Bad Point: I talk way too much, and say and do a lot of shit I end up regretting, I also don't listen well and get distracted easily, most likely due to ADHD Favorite Show: The Filthy Frank Show