Gin_Devil

Just as the title says, it's feedback for my fanfic, Fire Emblem Truly Awake.

I figured I'd share the Fire Emblem Fanfic that I've been working on, Fire Emblem Truly Awake. It's a self insert story that I've been working on for a couple of years now, and just posted chapter 27 earlier today. Feel free to give me criticism, though I'd prefer constrictive criticism. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10055108/1/Fire-Emblem-Truly-Awake

Is there any other place to download this? Every time I try to go to the website I get an Error 500.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7598220/1/bA_b_bbrandeds_b_bpath_b Tell me what you think if you read it please.

Not sure if its already been asked but. I'm new to hacking and I plan on hacking one of the gba games. What stuff will I need, I plan on changing stats making new maps, and a whole new story. Also is their a way to take s sprit say Lyns and put it in the game?

OK just curuius (sorry can't think of how to spell it). I never really paid any mind to what Yodel said.

I was thinking some new maps. Even out the growths of 8. And id need all the sprits from 6 to 8.

What I was thinking was a cross over or something.

The thing. I have no clue what its called the think that allows to hack the games.

Sorry its a old habit.

Just finished the first chapter. It was very good and I say it is one of those hard to find fanfics that are very good. The only thing that confuses me is that when you say god. I always saw it that Elimine was their version of god.

Hey gunlord wasn't expecting to see you on here. Also I decided to give your story a try.

I was expecting the waha kitty. To have his essay here (not trying to piss you off waha kitty.) Also I'm new here as well., just got here a day or two ago. Welcome. (If their are any grammar errors sorry to who ever gets offended.

Sorry miss read what you said.

Its not that I have a problem writting. Its that accent of hers she has in radiant dawn ill have a problem writting.

Sorry about that being the most painful 15 minutes of your life. Also I am english and its the only language I know, just grammar and spelling aren't my strong points. I planned for his percinality to change as the story goes along. Also I plan on making fights hard on him after this chapter. I'm also not that good with fights I'm going to try to get better.

Ok will try not to get on you bad side waha knitty.

Yea I know I have a problem with both and also sure I would like someone to proof-read it.

It might be that I used for fan fiction and gamefaqs so you might know me off of one of those.

I started writting this a bit ago. And I would like to know what you all think about it. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7379757/1/Path_of_a_Branded

I'm new here and I was wundering if theirs anything that I should know.