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You are right, also I didn't include lovers because it was married characters both playable but your point stands. Though I personally wasn't considering anyone who can be S or A ranked in a romantic way. Astolofo and Igrene doesn't really count (as you said its complicated) Isadora and Harken is not set in stone. Saizo and Kagero had some sort of relationship before the start of the game.

True. Traditional RPGs often have you starting out small and slow, building your power and reputation and eventually reaching some position of authority (NWN2 is a good example of this). Fire Emblem doesn't have that luxury as it would drag the plot and gameplay down way too much and because of that I honestly have no idea why they insist on having you be some unknown random amnesiac who always knows next to nothing about the place they have lived in their entire lives. Kris was a step in the right direction as they have an actual place of origin, the village of Sera, clear motivation for joining the Altean Knights, their grandfather, and an actual goal which is up to the player. Kris as Marth's bodyguard is a decent idea, shame how it turned out. As for the tactician thing it doesn't really work with the amnesiac who knows nothing about the world, why would you put the fate of yourself and your army in the hands of such a person, its downright weird, a good example of a tactician would be Soren who is very well informed, knowledgeable and most important of all, pragmatic. The teacher angle also doesn't work when students spend more time teaching Byleth about the world, than they do them, plus same reasons I gave for tactician.

I know because people will expect them to actually do something with Mark, and if they want my opinion (they probably don't) they should cut him out and focus more on Lyn and give her a bigger presence during the later game. But I think that they won't mess with Pent and Louise, having them actually married is quite a unique thing for FE, which is really weird when you think about it.

I went with Robin. Kris is a close second, my reason for not giving them first place would be all the pointless dialogue, where the important characters are saying something and Kris finishes the conversation by saying "Yes" or "I agree" or "friendship is magic". Robin is an actual character and as it was mentioned before in this thread that if they were not an avatar they could be a tactician like Katarina is, and it would change nothing. Kris would take first place if they focused the b plot of the story (The Assassins & Katarina gaiden chapters) on Kris and had them have a larger role in that part and kept his presence in the main plot to a minimum. As for the rest: Mark is utterly pointless and should be removed from the game if they decide to do a remake, Corn is just ugh, definitely a difficult character to like, it helped a bit when I switched to fem!Corn on all the routes, there is something about dumb anime girls saying dumb stuff makes it more digestible to me. Byleth is ok I guess, dont have many opinions on that one.

Lore reasons, plays a part in the whole Bern part of the story in Blazing Blade, Eliwood, Hector and Lyn have to retrieve it, important part of Zephiel's backstory. In Binding Blade, Guinivere's reason for leaving Bern and trying to prevent the war as in using it as a deterrent. So yeah the amount of rewriting to make your idea is a bit too much, considering this is supposed to be a translation.

Thanks for the great patch, had a blast going through the game. Keep up the good work.

Hi, first of all thank you for this patch. I haven't encountered any bugs or glitches. Here are some suggestions I hope you find useful. Chapter2 1.Guard: "constant surveillance." under constant watch or guard, would sound better 2.Elen: "we were captured,imprisoned." maybe just captured or imprisoned 3.Dieck: "enough chitchat." enough small talk 4.Elen: referring to Guinivere as "your highness" while the fact that she is a princess is supposed to be a secret maybe switch to my lady or milady 5.Roy: "Princess Guinivere from Bern?" of Bern 6.Roy: "you are of high status" you are highborn Chapter3 7.Narcian: "should you fail, I personally will order" I will order, or I will see to it Chapter4 8.Erik: "My nation has never been anything but a burden" instead of nation just The League or Lycia 9.Erik: "we need some backup. take some troops" take your troops or take your squad Chapter5 10.Saul: "Bern's head church" The Church of Bern Chapter6 11.Narration says that Thria is south-east while on the map its not enough to the south just east would be fine 12.Narration: "Quiet rest for his troops." quiet rest for his army 13.Cath: "The north hall has all the valuables, but with that security" those guards 14.Cath: "time to pilfer what i can now that security is busy" the guards are busy 15.Sue: "you aren't with the castle" you aren't with Wagner 16.Wagner: "useless guards" useless dolts 17.Roy: "here in a battlefield" here on a battlefield Chapter7 18.Roy: "General Cecilia was my teacher" tutor or instructor Chapter8x 19.Narration: "with Bern coming full force" with Bern bringing its full might, bringing their army 20.Lilina: "Exactly. He is my ancestor." our ancestor, Blazing Blade established both Hector and Eliwood as Roland's descendants 21.Roy: "Wow... That sword has quite the story to it" just without the wow maybe hmm or something Chapter9 22.Narration: "Roy and company brace themselves for further attacks" instead of Roy and company The Lycian Army 23.Narration: "presently, they are colonies of Etruria." subjects instead of colonies, I didn't find anything pointing to Etruria colonizing the isles 24.Narration:" inevitably, varied bands of rogues traveled there hoping to loot the mines" various instead of varied, and looting the wealth instead of mines 25.Cecilia: "did you hear of the tragedy that occurred in Etruria last year?" Roy: "Prince Myrddin, next in line to be king, abruptly passed away last year." just one mention of last year 26.Cecilia: "but I'm sorry, I didn't have the clout to prevent this..." influence instead of clout 27.village/silver sword: "we can't fight against them like the resistance force" just a "can" at the end of the sentence 28.Scott: "the outlook isn't good" "it doesn't look" good he is pirate after all i think it would fit better 29.Sin: "we were no equal for Bern" we were no equal to Bern 30.village left: "the only people here are women and children. All the workers have been taken north to the mines." all the men instead of workers Chapter10A 31.Narration:"all of these islands are rich in minerals" without all of Chapter10B 32.Narration: "the local lord oppresses the resistance" fights instead of oppresses or suppresses the resistance 33.Guard: "he's apparently in hiding in the nearby village" he is apparently hiding in the nearby village 34.Zinque: "I apologize for the wait, madam Melady" lady instead of madam 35.village/orion's bolt: "We civilians have to deal with the consequences of their actions" we villagers 36.Gonzalez: "there is village near mountain" in route B its a different village and he is already in it or just at the entrance 37.Souther cavalier reinforcements are called "Bandit" aren't these supposed to be Etrurians like Klein who also appears from the south, the bandits come from the north Chapter11A 38.Roy: "even if doing so means souring our relationship with Etruria..." relations instead of relationship , or alliance 39.Melady: "you are not a Bern native" native of Bern Chapter11B 40.Bartre: "en garde" "come at me" he says that to Karla in Blazing Blade (support) and it fits his character better 41. high nobility when describing Arcardo, just nobility would be fine Chapter12 42.Narration:"high nobility" again just nobility would be fine Chapter13 43.Roy: "whats the latest?" Any news 44.Guinivere: "my brother..." just "brother..." 45.Guinevere: "let me free, Melady" let me go Chapter14 46.Randy: "my sword is unmatchable" unmatched Chapter15 47.Soldier: "Commander Raith, i have an update on the girl we captured" news instead of update 48.village/hammerne: "wield it wisely" use it wisely seeing as you can't equip a staff Chapter16 Soldier: "head Wyvern general Murdock is here" without the "head" Chapter18Illia 49.villager: "they say hes on a level all his own" in a league of his own Chapter18Illia and 19or20Sacae 50.Niime: "I live in the mountains where i study arcane magic." elder instead of arcane or just magic or just the arcane 51.Niime: "I wield dark magic" again "elder" Canas points it out in Blazing Blade and Niime is his mother so she thought him 52. Roartz and Arcardo are referred to as revolutionaries, and that what they are doing is a revolution. I thought that rebel and rebellion were more appropriate so here is a list of all the places it was mentioned. Chapter12 Soldier: "a revolution has broke out in Aquileia, capital of Etruria.The ones leading the revolution are high chancellor Roartz and lord Arcardo." Soldier: "They are with the revolutionaries against their will because the king was taken hostage." Chapter13 Narration: "she also forms a loyalist group to combat the revolutionaries.The revolutionaries, however, have Bern on their side." "King Mordred has also been taken hostage giving the revolutionaries another edge:" "With so much power, the revolutionaries easily push the loyalists out of Etruria" "Roy learns that Cecilia has been forced back by the revolutionaries" "the loyalists are under attack by both the revolutionaries and Bern's military" soldier also mentions revolutionaries Chapter15 Narration: "now, they turn toward Etruria to confront the revolutionary forces" Narration: "if she falls into the hands of the revolutionaries or Bern" Chapter16 Narration: "the revolutionary forces are fortified in Aquileia" "turning popular opinion against the revolutionaries, forcing them inside the castle" Yoder also mentions revolutionaries four times Chapter16x Narration: revolutionaries Chapter17Illia Narration: Revolutionaries twice Chapter17Sacae Narration: Revolutionaries, Revolution edit:numbers