this is all just personal preference so take what i post with a grain of salt or a bottle.
- i'd give either lethality or astra to severa cause while sol is great for healing, another skill that hits hard can't hurt. (i'd replace the breakers)
- i think luna would work better on avatar than astra since it has a higher chance of triggering and it should do pretty massive damage too (though depeding on your mag and str stats, ignis might do well too)
- i... want to say replace pavise with luna... and replace aegis with lancefaire, but insurance against bows and (wind) tomes could come in handy if she does get hit... so maybe keep aegis.
- ooh the one thing you can keep in mind is to get bowbreaker for the pegasi sisters. it's a lvl15 bow knight skill and i'd replace aegis (for lucina) and renewal (for cynthia) with that.
- i... want to give morgan luna/ignis.
- i want to give yarne lethality somewhere.
- maybe replace astra with luna for noire? (or ignis if her stats are close)
- luna for inigo (i sound like a broken record even to myself) maybe replace DG+ since it's only +10%?
- do you plan on having laurent getting hit enough to make use of wrath and vengeance? if not i'd replace them with lethality and lifetaker
- hmm i don't really have anything to say for gerome, haha...
overall i think our play styles are really different, i like to stack damage orientated skills, but you seem to be more orientated towards defense?
also, armthrift, if you're not panning on forging your peeps' weapons i'd say leave AT out and replace it with luna another skill.
also also, if you did want to make some of your guys pairup bots, i'd suggest avatar, yarne, gerome and laurent due to their lack of galeforce. skills though... avatar can get solidarity, dual support+, hex, anathema. laurent can get the latter 2, dunno about the yarne and gerome though.
sorry i can't really rate your guys though, our play styles are too different.