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how do i start one of these again New concept! Legault! Go! dont hate me please __________________________________________________ Unit: Legault, The Hurricane Help Description: Original member of the Black Fang who hates corruption. Appears in Fire Emblem: The Blazing Blade Summoned Quote: "Name's Legault, seems like you have quite the ragtag group with you. Guess I'll tag along." Status Screen Quotes: [3S]: "I'm called the Hurricane, y'know, cause I'm fast." [3S]: "I miss the old Fang..." [3S]: "Don't know why you chose me of all people, but I won't complain." [3S]: "Pfffffft." [4S]: "In the Black Fang, I was the House Cleaner. Awful job." [4S]: "I'm not the strongest or the smartest, but I fight the dirtiest." [5S]: "Lloyd, Linus, Uhai, and poor little Nino..." [5S]: "My oh my... Fools aplenty. That includes me, too." Home Screen Quotes: "What's on your mind? As the de facto leader of this merry band, I can't have you going and working yourself to death, now can I?" "Don't worry, as long as I'm on your side, I won't rob this castle blind. Probably." "I've heard disturbing rumors that our enemy is being controlled by a greater force. I only hope these are false, otherwise, I don't know if I could do my job." "Back in my world, I used to be a member of a band of mercenaries called the Black Fang. Until a sorceror named Nergal tainted the group beyond repair." "Have you seen a little girl about this tall, with bright green hair recently? She's sorta like a niece to me, since her 'mother' was an insufferable witch." Levelling Up: "Please stop laughing." (+0, +1 Points) "This is fine." (+2, +3 Points) "Maybe too much?" (+4, +5 Points) Turn Action: "Really?" "Sure." "Why not?" Critical/Special Trigger Quotes: "And a one, and a two, and a-" "Looks like you slipped up." "Time to clean house." "No use running." Death Quote: "Oops." __________________________________________________ Movement Type: Infantary 5S Level 1 Stats: [No IV's/Weapons/Skills] 17/8/11/3/7 5S Level 40 Stats: [No IV's/Weapons/Skills] 39/27/36/18/27 __________________________________________________ 5S Skills: Weapon: Hurricane Dagger ///Exclusive/// [Mt: 7, Rng: 2, After combat, enemies within 2 spaces of foe take 7 damage. For each foe affected, unit gains Def/Res +3 through next actions. Assist: N/A Special: Growing Wind [Before combat this unit initiates, foes in a wide area near target take damage equal to (unit's Atk minus foe's Def or Res). Charge: 5] A: N/A B: Seal Def 3 [After combat, foe suffers Def-7 through its next action] C: Spur Spd 3 [Grants adjacent allies Spd+4 through their next actions at the start of each turn] __________________________________________________ Comments: So, once again, I've based Legault off of his initial appearance in Blazing Blade, with a low defense stat, but high speed and resistance, alongside decent health and attack. For his kit, I based it heavily on his 'Hurricane' motif, much like how Jaffar's is based on his as the 'Angel of Death' ow the edge, as well as having Seal Def to compensate for how his dagger doesn't directly debuff enemies, but instead relies on the enemy team being grouped up as a means of getting the maximum possible value off of the Def/Res bonus. Anyways, please leave all your criticisms and comments below, and be sure to leave a request for what unit you want to see next! Changelog:

And you all thought that after the first [God awful and completely imbalanced] unit concept I'd just disappeared off of the forums. Unfortunately, I'm still here :w:. Anyways, I did my reading on how to properly balance out stats based on unit archetypes, and have decided to have a go at creating a concept of a unit that, while not incredibly important to the story, was a great help [Read: Carried me alongside Ike] through the harder difficulties of PoR. That, of course, being Zihark, a Daein citizen who filled the role of the Navarre archetype in PoR. With that said, please feel free to be as critical as you can in the review of this concept, as long as it remains constructive. I will take any and all criticisms to heart. Lastly, leave who you want as the next unit concept in your reply, and I'll get around to a few requests in the coming days. __________________________________________________ Unit: Zihark, Blade of Unity Help Description: An ex-vigilante of Daein who believes in unity between the Beorc and Laguz. Loyal to his allies. Appears in Fire Emblem: Path of Radiance. Summoned Quote: "I am Zihark, an ex-mercenary for the kingdom of Daein. If you stand on the side of unity and peace, I shall be your blade." Status Screen Quotes: [3S]: "People say I look severe, but that's not my intention." [3S]: "Er, do you have any mending equipment? My shoulder guard is starting to tear." [3S]: "I wish only for peace among all beings, regardless of heritage." [3S]: "Haha!" [4S]: "I know all too well the sting of society's persecution. It is a pain I would wish upon nobody." [4S]: "I've been told that I'm... perhaps too trusting." [5S]: "This is the fifth cause for which I've fought. I think." [5S]: "I'd rather not bring up past relationships. The topic is... painful to think of." Home Screen Quotes: "My, what a wonderful base of operations! Then again, all I've seen in comparison are grimy barracks and camps." "All these heroes from different realms getting along is inspiring, to say the least." "Even if it was a matter of life and death, I could never turn my blade on an ally. I can only hope I am never at odds with your Order of Heroes." "Do you have need of my services? I'm sorry to say that beyond the battlefield, all I'm good at is preparing for the next battle." "I wonder if I could find Lethe or Mordecai around here? Have you seen them come out of that summoning device of yours?" Levelling Up: "Well, how disappointing." (+0, +1 Points) "A refreshing change." (+2, +3 Points) "I hardly knew I had it in me!" (+4, +5 Points) Turn Action: "Where to?" "What next?" "Alright." Critical/Special Trigger Quotes: "That is enough!" "May you find peace." "A quick death, then." "Hold still!" Death Quote: "I'll... be waiting..." __________________________________________________ Movement Type: Infantry 5S Level 1 Stats: [No IV's/Weapons/Skills] 19/8/10/5/4 5S Level 40 Stats: [No IV's/Weapons/Skills]| 44/34/38/20/15 __________________________________________________ 5S Skills: Weapon: Killing Edge+ [Mt: 11 Rng: 1, Accelerates Special trigger (cooldown count -1) Assist: N/A Special: Astra [Increase damage dealt by 150%. Cooldown count: 5] A: Attack +3 [ATK +3] B: Desperation 3 [If unit initiates combat at < 75% HP, unit's follow up attacks occur immediately] C: N/A __________________________________________________ Comments: This took much, much longer than expected. Mainly because I was trying to fill in the quote categories as best I could, but hey, that's what you have to do if you want to make a full blown unit as I endeavor to. Anyways, thanks for taking a look, please make any requests for other hero concepts, and please crtique this concept as best you can, as long as it is done in a constructive manner. Thanks! <3 Changelog: EDIT 1: Removed Vantage, Added Desperation. DEF/RES -2, ATK +4. Reason: In game, Zihark is rather fragile, yet has a decent HP pool to make up for it. I tried to reflect that here, by making him a very offensive Myrmidon who gets eaten alive by mages. Removed Life & Death 3, Replaced with ATK + 3. Current Requests: None - Feel free to ask for any unit in particular!