-X- Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 (edited) Interested in getting better at spriting, I figure I'll post some of my work here for comments or criticism. I mostly do mugs, and most of my mugs are of women as for some strange reason I find myself unable to do guys (go figure.) I've been spriting for a while now, and as some of my early work would possibly burn the eyes, I'll save you the torment of looking at it You can guess the bases if you wish, but for the first two, I really can't remember, it's been a while. The hair took a while to get right, it may still not be right. This is probably my favorite. My latest, there are random pixels of purple on the armor that I ask you ignore for now, this is still a work in progress, but let me know if you see any obvious problems I missed. I really suck at making clothing/picking out clothes, so I haven't done much work in that area to be honest. Comments/Criticism definately welcome = D, thanks for any feedback Edited January 30, 2009 by -X- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hibari Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 Are these all custom? Like from the ground up so to speak? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-X- Posted January 30, 2009 Author Share Posted January 30, 2009 They all have some extent (however small in some cases) of custom work, but no, not from the ground up. I just like to make rather clever (IMO) splices as to make the bases extremely difficult to identify. Also on another note, On the last mug, I am well aware of the lack of border in some places...I just haven't figured out how to make it look good with the outline yet : P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hibari Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 Had me fooled. I like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuli Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 Nice splices. ;D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-X- Posted January 30, 2009 Author Share Posted January 30, 2009 (edited) Thank You all for your comments, I really appreciate it =D Edited January 30, 2009 by -X- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shuuda Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 Pretty decent I must say. However, I would recommend you to start doing more editing/splicing with their bodies. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 At this level, you might like to try making a full-custom mug. Even if it doesn't turn out well, you can always simply try making another one until it looks better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-X- Posted February 3, 2009 Author Share Posted February 3, 2009 Well Lachesis, I will admit I have been tampering with a full custom in the recent week or so....and I really have to give the people who do such things credit, maybe I'm just making it harder than it has to be...but I find that I'm not quite skilled in that area :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 i know how you feel X...im having a hard time finishing a sprite i started since most of it requires mostly full custom work.. D: its difficult... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riariadne Posted February 16, 2009 Share Posted February 16, 2009 I think the base for the second picture is Lucius! Anyway, that's some good work there. I like it =D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bohemund Posted February 16, 2009 Share Posted February 16, 2009 I think I like your "favorite" too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-X- Posted October 8, 2011 Author Share Posted October 8, 2011 Haven't made anything posted in a long time, but for some random reason or another I decided I wanted to learn how to map... This is my first (technically second but the first one burned my eyes) time actually making a legitimate map with Mappy, I am very inexperienced with mapping so I welcome any constructive criticism :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primefusion Posted October 8, 2011 Share Posted October 8, 2011 Not too shabby of a map, the design seems pretty good. However, you've got these huge expanses of nothing but standard grass tiles. Try adding some light grass or roads to make it "pop". Oh, and the water seems spammed. There should be like 5-6 water tiles you can use in the tileset to make it flow a little better. Oh, and you've got a funny tile next to the southern most bridge. Looks like a light grass tile but it needs more grass tiles connected to it to work properly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-X- Posted October 9, 2011 Author Share Posted October 9, 2011 (edited) Thanks for your reply prime =) I added in some light grass, and I thought for the most part I kept the water tiles separated but I guess they all look so similar that I couldn't tell. But I did attempt to add some variation, and I removed that one stray tile near the bridge..not sure how I managed that Edit: Updated picture, I saw one straight line of the same water tile I edited out Edited October 9, 2011 by -X- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted October 9, 2011 Share Posted October 9, 2011 JPG is baaaaad. Don't save as BMP and upload to BotoPhucket - it auto-converts to JPG. Also, top delta has some suddenly disappearing cliffs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted October 9, 2011 Share Posted October 9, 2011 I wouldn't put two of the same cliff(or any kind) tiles next to each other, there are like 5 different tile you can use for the second. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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