Primefusion Posted December 20, 2011 Share Posted December 20, 2011 The cloth on her right shoulder OPV seems kind of odd. It's like there's an invisible hand scrunching it there. Since it's floating freely it seems like the cloth would be about the same width throughout. I'm really digging the hair though, nice job. The sprite's a cutie for sure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted December 20, 2011 Share Posted December 20, 2011 Interesting concept Free! oAo >jellyfishu Though the right eyebrow isn't really working. It looks kinda off and... weird. Try adjusting it a bit maybe? owo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted December 20, 2011 Author Share Posted December 20, 2011 The cloth on her right shoulder OPV seems kind of odd. It's like there's an invisible hand scrunching it there. Since it's floating freely it seems like the cloth would be about the same width throughout. I'm really digging the hair though, nice job. The sprite's a cutie for sure. Soo maybe compress it slightly next to that gold piece thingy (I dunno what it'd be called XD) and sort of widen it towards the middle/bottom? And thanks! Interesting concept Free! oAo >jellyfishu Though the right eyebrow isn't really working. It looks kinda off and... weird. Try adjusting it a bit maybe? owo Thank you! Yes, I've always hated that eyebrow XD It's hard to tell what to do with the hair coming in the way because when putting the eyebrow lower (which I was trying to get one pixel lower since any lower would make it seem like no eyebrow) the small strand almost ruins the perspective I guess. Like it kinda looked to me like it is supposed to be shading going around the strand rather than an eyebrow. Do you think there'd be a way for me to put it in without making it look just like shading? =o (I think I'm getting a bit of an idea atm but not too sure) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primefusion Posted December 20, 2011 Share Posted December 20, 2011 Soo maybe compress it slightly next to that gold piece thingy (I dunno what it'd be called XD) and sort of widen it towards the middle/bottom? Ya, right now the cloth is going like this: =< It's sorta straight and then fans out, but it should really be going < > where it shrinks when it gets closer to where it's pinned on her clothing and fans out in the middle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted December 20, 2011 Author Share Posted December 20, 2011 Yeah I see. Okay I'll work on that (and I also realize that I don't think it's even supposed to curve back up when it loops around her shoulder because it's supposed to completely wrap around her back and over to that part of her other shoulder..... or that's what I think I had in mind) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrainFreeze Posted December 20, 2011 Share Posted December 20, 2011 I like it! But I also like the face or mouth and eyes on the original: But that's just me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted December 20, 2011 Author Share Posted December 20, 2011 The angle of the hair better fits the newer one though =o And if I want to make it look more like myself then the second would also fit =] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted December 23, 2011 Author Share Posted December 23, 2011 Okay so I've finished this one a while ago, actually... This is for the silverblade hack. Everybody say "Hiya Hika!!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted December 24, 2011 Share Posted December 24, 2011 How many left over colors did you have? I think he'd look good if his shirt and hair were different colors. Use the eye the same color as a random thing trick And why does Lloyd look so good as any axe class? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted December 24, 2011 Author Share Posted December 24, 2011 (edited) It has been requested that the hair and at least some part of his body were black Also I counted and there aren't any colors left Edited December 24, 2011 by Freohr Datia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted December 24, 2011 Share Posted December 24, 2011 You could make the pad part of the pad (not the spikes or strap) black. And find a set of shades that work for the eyes and the shirt. It just looks odd to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted December 24, 2011 Author Share Posted December 24, 2011 Hmmm, well for the clothing all he wants are white and black. Maybe a white shirt? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted December 24, 2011 Share Posted December 24, 2011 I'm not sure how silver would look against white. Maybe a striped shirt, though I'm guessing he's not a pirate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cymbeline Posted December 25, 2011 Share Posted December 25, 2011 Okay so I've finished this one a while ago, actually... This is for the silverblade hack. Everybody say "Hiya Hika!!" There's a. . . transparent pixel on his chest (at least I think so, since I pasted it on Paint and it along with the background went black). In any case, there are only a few things I think should be fixed: the shading around and on his right eyebrow, as well as the shadow under/next to his hair to the left of his right eye. Some of the skin next to shirt shading looks too light, but perhaps that is just me. Anyhow, hope this helps (and I like his design). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted December 25, 2011 Author Share Posted December 25, 2011 Ahh it is transparent XD And alright, thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted April 27, 2012 Author Share Posted April 27, 2012 Ummm idk why this thing won't let me use transparency anymore.... =[ I'm not doing anything different from what I usually do... But here. Bumped back up after 4 months XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrainFreeze Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 That is really cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted April 27, 2012 Author Share Posted April 27, 2012 Thanks =3 He looks like he should be some kind of lord or something =o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 (edited) That mane. You're gonna need a custom animation with hair.if you want him to not wear a helmet. With a shawl attatched to it. Not bad, can't see any errors except neck length maybe. Doesn't seem to complex though, and I don't know, nothing really pops for me I guess. I think I like your girls better. But maybe that's just cause I can't sprite females. speaking of which, fix those image links, I want to see your personal mug. Edited April 27, 2012 by deranger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted April 27, 2012 Author Share Posted April 27, 2012 (edited) Okay sure I can fix the neck... Good thing I wasn't looking for improvement much ^~^;; I've been having so much trouble getting into spriting that I just asked some people to choose random characters for me and they were all males XD I agree I feel much more comfortable spriting females, I think... But yeah mostly I was just wanting to get something done and I'm happy I finally sprited something after 4 months XD Oh yeah stupid iranblog I'll see if they're still saved on my laptop or not XD But if not then I'll go dig up that flash drive Oh and I forgot that I don't make animations, nor do I hack so luckily I won't have to worry myself about it XD I don't think I posted this version yet, but here was my attempt to show a bit more than the other tinier version. I really think that trim looks awful at the very bottom XD If anyone knows how to make that look better.... (or if it's just me then please tell me so I can quit worrying about it x3) Edited April 27, 2012 by Freohr Datia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 Ummm idk why this thing won't let me use transparency anymore.... =[ I'm not doing anything different from what I usually do... But here. Bumped back up after 4 months XD This is pretty cool. That hair piece on (our) left is a little strange though. Maybe its just me. It looks like it could be a little closer to the rest of his hair on that side. As for the lady sprite: i took a look in Paint and she really looks fine. I dont see the problem with the trim. theres a piece of green between her hair strands that should be transparent though She looks great and her hair is amazing! Wow you've gotten really good! <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted April 27, 2012 Author Share Posted April 27, 2012 This is pretty cool. That hair piece on (our) left is a little strange though. Maybe its just me. It looks like it could be a little closer to the rest of his hair on that side. As for the lady sprite: i took a look in Paint and she really looks fine. I dont see the problem with the trim. theres a piece of green between her hair strands that should be transparent though She looks great and her hair is amazing! Wow you've gotten really good! <3 Okay I'll try bringing that in then. It might have a lot to do with how Valter's head is tilted to the side while this guy's isn't. Well I hope so then... Oh uh could you tell me where that is? I can't find it =3 Thanks =o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 Wait...hang on....I think my eyes went buggy because i think that may actually be a part of her armor...(the green part i mentioned) But ill show you anyway. [spoiler=O_o] Is that a part of her armor or just a spot of background missed? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted April 27, 2012 Author Share Posted April 27, 2012 Heehee, it's part of the cloak-scarfy thingy =3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 Oh ok! NEVERMIND THEN!!! Carry on. (srsly though im in love with her hair! Its so nicely made!) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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