Thor Odinson Posted August 31, 2013 Author Share Posted August 31, 2013 That's... probably not the best way to draw the deltoid piece like I referenced in the Avengers photo, but it's that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackavar Posted August 31, 2013 Share Posted August 31, 2013 Cool Thor design! I really like how you did the scalemail and the hair in this one. Out of curiosity, what are some of the coloring techniques you mentioned in your post? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted August 31, 2013 Author Share Posted August 31, 2013 I did a sketch, and then instead of putting flat colours down I started out by putting in some shadows, working my way up to the lighter areas then going back and making the shading more coherent. (It's really so I don't have to keep a sketch layer on top to see what I'm doing but it worked out pretty well) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackavar Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 Haha, that's kind of like what I do too. I think it worked out great for you in that pic! Hope to see more of your work. Your gallery is great because and it's full of glorious muscles. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myke Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 That's... probably not the best way to draw the deltoid piece like I referenced in the Avengers photo, but it's that. pretty sure she means these which as far as I can tell are light beams reflecting off the arm Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 4, 2013 Author Share Posted September 4, 2013 might be my messy erasing if it's off the arm lol Anyway have a work in progress It's inspired by a (far better) artist's little altair in a haystack picture and is pretty much a class doodle but then Amelia wanted me to make it neat so have vector little ezio in a haystack waiting to give you a Free Hug I will shade it when I next get time gotta do some hw now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted September 4, 2013 Share Posted September 4, 2013 http://31.media.tumblr.com/b0da09b6e05a247fedc8407a33f5abf4/tumblr_msdg6yOZ6n1rgeqp5o1_500.png nope totally did not copy description from my tumblr post nope /lazy i want to say this is completely amazn because of the shading, but that's the most awkwardanest pose i ever see in my lyfe you probably know people who are more qualified than me to expound on why, but i could go into detail later if you want. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 4, 2013 Author Share Posted September 4, 2013 Oh I know the pose is awkward It's just when I noticed I was too far along to be assed to fix anything at that point so I just left it since I did this mostly for the design anyway Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myke Posted September 4, 2013 Share Posted September 4, 2013 haystack thing reminds me of a shimeji (you should make one) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 5, 2013 Author Share Posted September 5, 2013 Huh I should I want the one you have though goddamn that's cute Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myke Posted September 5, 2013 Share Posted September 5, 2013 can't remember the source lol have a bonus cesare so they can fight for screen dominance Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 10, 2013 Author Share Posted September 10, 2013 (edited) Sadly those require Java 6 and I'm running Java 7 and I can't downgrade because I program with Java 7 so :< I guess I'll just make my own! anyway Someone take the pencil away from me at 12 am Loki's proportions are so off but I can't be assed to fix it right now Just a quick doodle that stemmed from my Thorsassin design, now I have a whole Thor/Loki Assassin's Creed AU where Thor is Assassin and Loki is Templar and all I can do to make Loki look like a templar is give him a huge ass templar cross on his cape because templars don't really have a type of "uniform" like Assassin eagle hood/coats I'll fix their anatomy (esp Loki) when I colour it or something meanwhile please suggest pose fixes god knows I need them and I can't be assed to fix things when I'm halfway through colouring it so let it be now Also I'm going to move thor away from loki a bit on the final version i didn't plan this out very well Edited September 10, 2013 by Ezio Auditore da Firenze Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Myke Posted September 10, 2013 Share Posted September 10, 2013 bring thor's far arm in so he's reaching for loki's neck rather than his elbow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackavar Posted September 10, 2013 Share Posted September 10, 2013 ^That. Also, bring Thor's near arm, especially the forearm, down so that it looks like he's aiming to stab Loki rather than high-five him on the forehead or something. This isn't really a pose suggestion, but I think the scene would look much better if you made the viewing angle on the two characters more extreme. Like, side views on both, or putting the camera behind one of the characters--it depends on what you want to convey. Since you're planning on moving Thor even further away, Loki perhaps shouldn't look like he's already started his attack. Have him look like he's winding up, maybe put the spear(?)head behind him. And plant both feet on the ground. I'm not acquainted with how to use weapons, but I think his stance would look better that way. Also, where is Thor coming from? Depending on the answer, your poses could end up very different. It looks great so far though and has a lot of potential. Looking forward to the final result! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 10, 2013 Author Share Posted September 10, 2013 Thor's either doing a brotherhood trailer-style jumpcharge, in which case I'll probably reference that more, or he came from a roof or a tree standard asscreed style. Will do my edits when I get home from class today. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 10, 2013 Author Share Posted September 10, 2013 Got some time inbetween class so here's some pose fix redlines. I'll play with switching viewpoints when I actually get home in another 4 hours or so, but would this be better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samias Posted September 10, 2013 Share Posted September 10, 2013 I realize this suggestion is going to be a complete Loki redraw, but I felt the best pose for him would be holding the spear tilted up, anticipating Thor leaping down on him. It seems like the most effective use of the weapon is to ensure your enemy lands on it. Not sure what to say about assassin Thor except that he feels a little flat compared to Loki. The position of his legs and feet doesn't have a sense of dimension. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 10, 2013 Author Share Posted September 10, 2013 (edited) With Loki I was going by Blackavar's suggestion where Thor kinda just came out of nowhere and he still has to wind up first, so he's still kinda taken by surprise here. I'll probably change Thor's leg positioning to look more like those in the brotherhood trailer, though, if I can find a good enough frame freeze. Or if I can get a good enough screenshot of air assassinations. That's kind of what I'm going for with Thor. Edit: on second thought, though if I'm going by brotherhood trailer style I might be able to fit in the pointed up spear version in since the brotherhood trailer wasn't air pounce by surprise Edited September 10, 2013 by Ezio Auditore da Firenze Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 10, 2013 Author Share Posted September 10, 2013 Have a sketchdump from today's classes because I'm such a good student while I work over Thor and Loki Included: Ezio eating pizza, Ezio with a rose, Ezio with his hair down, Ezio tying his hair back up, a bunny, and some statistics notes and operating systems diagrams. Why do I draw better when I don't try Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted September 10, 2013 Share Posted September 10, 2013 Your damn chibis are so cute dammiiiit Also the back view is very nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 16, 2013 Author Share Posted September 16, 2013 Welp i'll eventually get to the thorki assassins but school is a thing dammit Anyway so I'm in this 3D game programming class and we make our own models so for this assignment I made my standard fat bunny No textures yet because we haven't gotten to that I just learned 3D so Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 20, 2013 Author Share Posted September 20, 2013 Arright After some advice in skypechat etc New and improved Thorki Ass Creed AU, anything before i start colors Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samias Posted September 20, 2013 Share Posted September 20, 2013 Loki's looking pretty sweet, though as you work on it his eye contact should be stronger looking towards Thor. However, Thor's thigh looks a bit short. You could maybe bring in his foot tighter towards his leg and lengthen the thigh and bring the kneecap out further. I might be tempted to also bring up his right arm to form a stronger silhouette and to make the arms less parallel. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 20, 2013 Author Share Posted September 20, 2013 (edited) really messy fixes Oh well i don't use lineart anyway so messy away~ Edited September 20, 2013 by Ezio Auditore da Firenze Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samias Posted September 20, 2013 Share Posted September 20, 2013 Hm... still not completely sold on that leg, but it's looking better. I'm about to go to bed but if you're willing to wait until tomorrow I can do a quickie draw-over if you'd like. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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