Ken Zomg Posted December 9, 2010 Author Share Posted December 9, 2010 (edited) Kinda looks like Trak from AW:DC. Or Gage from AW:DoR. Emotionless Blue Nation Sniper Dude from AW:Darker and Edgier. His grip on the gun really bothers me. And there's...something wrong with the feet, they just don't look natural somehow. Apart from that, *kisses the screen* Holy crap, I thought you were a stranger! But thanks, that helps a lot! I'll edit this tomorrow if I have time. He will probably look less like Gage once I color him. :) I hope. Edited December 9, 2010 by Ken Zomg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted December 9, 2010 Share Posted December 9, 2010 (edited) Hey, Trak's awesome in a 'Only I can repay Ed back...by slaughtering an entire village of civilians' kinda way. Is it maybe possible to flip the gun and have the hand on the ... thing? I think it'd look more controlled and natural that way. This kinda looks as if it's just suspended in midair and he's keeping it on his shoulders through sheer luck. Edited December 9, 2010 by Grimsworth of Natal Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Zomg Posted December 9, 2010 Author Share Posted December 9, 2010 (edited) Gage's cool though. And I'm not just saying that because he doesn't wear a shirt. Leave it to Lumi to say something like that. I main him on WiFi. Not the best choice lawl... Anyway, like this? I'm going for a haughty, "this is mah manly gun" kinda thing, so I figured it being on his shoulder would work. Or maybe I'm not drawing it right. :/ Also, I'm trying not to completely copy from Gage. Edited December 9, 2010 by Ken Zomg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted December 9, 2010 Share Posted December 9, 2010 (edited) I wasn't trying to disparage Manly Topknot Guy either. His theme is probably the most rousing, but it's not as powerful as Ed's, O'Brian's (or Finn's or Zadia's, if memory serves). I don't play multiplayer, but if I did I'd go for Forsythe/Carter. Epic fanfare, and even more epic 'stache. That wasn't what I meant, but that would probably look as good or better without having to do as much work. Edited December 9, 2010 by Grimsworth of Natal Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Zomg Posted December 9, 2010 Author Share Posted December 9, 2010 Haha, I love Tasha's theme. It makes me want to destroy everything. I like the character as well, for obvious reasons she destroys the big-ass cannon. TASHA 4 THE SAIN SHOW Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted December 9, 2010 Share Posted December 9, 2010 If I had a CO theme, I'd get Flogging Molly to cover Scarborough Fair. Instant win. Yeah, but Zadia's just kinda...kinda like Skrimir, only marginally less retarded and a fair bit more badass. Regardless, no theme can ever...and I mean EVER...be as bad as Flower Chick's. EVER. EVER. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 9, 2010 Share Posted December 9, 2010 That and Tasha's a pretty bland character, who's only motivation is "REVENGE, REVENGE, I MUST HAVE REVENGE". I like Waylon's theme :3 As for the drawing, I think it doesn't work on yours (The gun) because of the way you've drawn it. Gage is holding his gun at a diagonal angle, but your character's arm is completely straight, which, I think, would be kinda uncomfortable. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted December 9, 2010 Share Posted December 9, 2010 (edited) That and Tasha's a pretty bland character, who's only motivation is "REVENGE, REVENGE, I MUST HAVE REVENGE". I like Waylon's theme :3 As for the drawing, I think it doesn't work on yours (The gun) because of the way you've drawn it. Gage is holding his gun at a diagonal angle, but your character's arm is completely straight, which, I think, would be kinda uncomfortable. Yeah, I liked it when they utterly lampshaded it, as well as Trak's...economical personality, in a couple Tactics conversations. "I'm Zadia! I like beating the shit out of Laurentians!" "Yeah. You do." All of the the themes are badass except for Catleia Isabella's (gaaarrgh) and ... well, one of the kids has a bad theme if I remember right, the other has one that's just...weird. Haven't heard Stolos' yet, though. And I like how Finn's is called 'Coward's Flight' :P It's weird how the International translation got the best names (bar Ed. I mean...Ed.) but the US translation is just so much better everywhere else. Except New Wolfington. New. Fucking. Wolfington. Are you shitting me. Edited December 9, 2010 by Grimsworth of Natal Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Zomg Posted December 10, 2010 Author Share Posted December 10, 2010 (edited) ...yeah. Better? Edited December 10, 2010 by Ken Zomg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 The grip concept is better, but I feel the palm should be more...on top of the gun rather than... Yeah, it's hard to explain. Someone more qualified? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 I believe what Furet it trying to say is that it looks like his hand is resting against the gun, rather than resting on it, which wouldn't work unless there was a wall behind him for the gun to rest on in the first place. Otherwise, the gun would just fall over. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 Yeah, what seph said. ...I wish I could describe things better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 Yeah, what seph said. ...I wish I could describe things better. You just stick to writing, I'll stick to art... ...Which still doesn't make sense, because as an writer, you should be able to describe things well *rants off somewhere else* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Zomg Posted December 10, 2010 Author Share Posted December 10, 2010 (edited) I just understood what you meant. (I'm kinda slow at interpreting text) Man did I try to make it look like his palm was over the top surface of the gun. So, should I make his fingers come out towards the viewer? Great, I actually have to use foreshortening in this picture Edited December 10, 2010 by Ken Zomg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 I think you'd have to. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercakete Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 Still much better than it floating behind his shoulders. Everything else is great, though. =D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 That and his left (not OPV) arm needs more shown bend to it. like more wrinkles in the clothing and stuff and a change in thickness of certain areas of the arm. making a line to indicate the bend also works. Right now it just looks like that arm's too short. For the hand, start by drawing a trapezoid and accentuate the knuckles. It will show the bending a lot better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Zomg Posted December 11, 2010 Author Share Posted December 11, 2010 (edited) Also, here's another guy I'm gonna draw. OHHAAHA ANOTHER LONG-HAIRED SWORDSMAN, LIKE WE DON'T HAVE ENOUGH OF THOSE SF COMMUNITY: NO ACTUALLY WE DON'T HAVE ENOUGH OF THOSE, 20 OF THEM ISN'T ENOUGH BLRARHGH Edited December 11, 2010 by Ken Zomg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 Duuuuuuuuuuuude, the first one looks SO much better now. Like, wow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercakete Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 Yep; looks much better. ^_^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Zomg Posted December 13, 2010 Author Share Posted December 13, 2010 (edited) Yay color. Just need the goggles and the gun and that's it. (I don't color very often) I think the hair could look better though. Any suggestions? I'll also give (draw) a cookie to anyone who can make a mug of this guy. EDIT: Oh yeah, and I'm also going to make an SF community picture for Christmas. If you want to be in the picture, just tell me and if I don't hate you I'll consider adding you! I'll also need permission from any female members to take "liberties" when drawing them. (because I'm such a gentleman) sexy Christmas outfit sexy Christmas outfit sexy Christmas outfit sexy Christmas outfit whoooaaah yeahhh Another edit, lol. I'm gonna need a photo reference or something. Something that tells me what you want to look like for the picture. oh, what the heck did I get myself into Edited December 13, 2010 by Ken Zomg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 13, 2010 Share Posted December 13, 2010 (edited) Throw me in the picture, dude Also, totally gonna make a sprite of this guy. I need something to do during tomorrow's stream :3 Oh, need a picture: I'm the caveman on the right. Fiancée on the left~ I don't think she'd want to be in the picture, though XD Also, just for reference, my beard is QUITE a bit longer than this, atm. This picture is around 6 months old. I'll give you a newer picture if I can get one. Atm, my beard is around 1 and a half inches XD Edited December 13, 2010 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Zomg Posted December 13, 2010 Author Share Posted December 13, 2010 (edited) All right! Thanks a lot, Seph! For the group picture, I'm thinking something like this Because I think a flat-front angle with a bunch of stuff happening would be less dynamic. (the front shot was my first plan, I might make one of those huge pictures where there's crazy stuff happening all over, with easter eggs and such) XD Don't expect to see much progress this week though, as I am epic super busy this week. The next two weeks after next week, however, I'll be on break, so I'll have time for it. I'm thinking for the setting, it's going to be in the Serenes Forest office building XD And there's a Christmas party! Yaay. Edited December 13, 2010 by Ken Zomg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 13, 2010 Share Posted December 13, 2010 That's sounds like an excellent idea! 8D Can't wait to see how it turns out if you get more people who want to be a part of it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted December 13, 2010 Share Posted December 13, 2010 (edited) I want in. [spoiler=Me and my sis] I'm the guy on the left. But don't put my sister in, she'd kill me. EDIT: For those of you who want to know, I deleted it a minute ago because it was waaaaaaaaay too big. Edited December 13, 2010 by Camtech086 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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