Princess Peachar Posted June 12, 2012 Share Posted June 12, 2012 I'd also probably make the near deltoid a weeeeeeee bit smaller. Kinda pushing looking like a shoulder pad. Just looks a little disproportionate to the rest of her arm size. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted July 2, 2012 Author Share Posted July 2, 2012 Fe7x stuff :) Troab -> Valk Generics I'll probably fix/change the hair on the mid one, seems overly rounded in the back atm. Weak - Mid - Strong - Subboss Comments and crit would be appreciated :) Young Brendan, needs a fair amount of work but i guess its fully shaded so thats what mattered most for deadlines and such, cnc please :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 Valkyrie one: The first one is the best. The other one's armor looks kinda caddywompus and the staff looks like it needs some shading. plus the head piece on the last one rubs me the wrong way. But pretty awesome! Brenden: Nice! His hair needs some shading methinks... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 for Brendan, the shoulder pad on his left (right OPV) seems like it's on his actual shoulder, whereas the one on the opposite side seems more toward his neck, like a backpack strap, almost. Not sure which one you're going for, but one of them should probably be switched. IMO. :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warg Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 Brendan's beard looks weird, aside from that the sprite looks really cool Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 The breastplate's angle is gah her body's not turned that way! Also, young Brendan having a scar makes me wonder if instead of in combat, he got his face cut falling down the stairs when he was little. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BwdYeti Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 He's already about 30, he's not new to the occupation ~'3'~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 (edited) Oh, well in that case Vamp, his skin shouldn't be so baby smooth. Also, that line under his mouth should be slanted, just like his piehole. Unless he's had his face disfigured! (I coulda sworn I posted this already...did some mod get pissed off and delete it? lol) EDIT: The lines on his spikes are too flamboyant. They look like edges to turn the conical spikes into prisms! Edited July 4, 2012 by April Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted July 4, 2012 Author Share Posted July 4, 2012 (edited) @Boney: The line looks silly any time I slant it :/ I guess 'foreshortening' works as a makeshift answer? Brendan update Also Fe7x, Melanie (Mykes design) Further cc is always appreciated and I'm working through the stuff you guys have said ;) Updated the troab generics hair so it was less 'round/spherical' also reverted to the previous bangs I'd made for it. Edited July 4, 2012 by Vampire Elf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solum Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 (edited) I just love Melanie. She has a really nice design I am not good enough to find details you could clean. For the generic mugs( because i tried to do some swordmaster generic mugs), I find that without headband/ helmet, they all look like Lowen. You work is beautiful but I wonder if give random simples eyes souldn't better than darked eyes. Of course you haven't to take this question seriously, just because this mug is awesome! x) Nothing to say about Brendan who keeps his charism and you did very well with this one too =) Edited July 5, 2012 by Solum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted July 5, 2012 Share Posted July 5, 2012 Hey, did you make Abelia for FE7x? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted July 5, 2012 Author Share Posted July 5, 2012 Hey, did you make Abelia for FE7x http://puu.sh/FXQZ Nayr initally made a half finished base, I customed over it though, so I'd say yes, her pose is currently really awkward though, hence the decontructed one to the far right which I will finish eventually, also wanting to touch up the weird shoulderpad :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted July 5, 2012 Share Posted July 5, 2012 (edited) Yes, I was going to mention her terrible pose xD she looks like she has a half broken neck and the shield looks more like a hunchback or something lol As for melanie The tip of her hat where it meets the forehead skin seems to need shading, or rather it seems too light. It's nothing big but it could probably be darkened or something. Edited July 5, 2012 by Adolf Klokler Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted July 20, 2012 Author Share Posted July 20, 2012 Niime Update Chester Update, still working on him Melanie Update, to fit more with her character Cybil Update Brendan Update Elle Update Hassar Update Bennet Update Vaida Update, had a hand from Merc on the back Overloadedededead Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted July 21, 2012 Author Share Posted July 21, 2012 (edited) Why make me double post :O Deacon, the FE7X Trial 3 Nabatan Minstrel, Sorry guys, won't be playable in the final game so I probably won't fix him much, feel free to cc for future reference though. Edited July 21, 2012 by Vampire Elf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eCut Posted July 21, 2012 Share Posted July 21, 2012 Everything looks sexual. <3 I do like the old Melanie more, though that is just a personal preference. I do think the new one's sleeves has too many wrinkles/folds though; it kinda looks like she has her sleeves wrapped around her arm and pinned back (if that makes sense). I also think the dark line that goes down the middle of her top could use a bit of AA/ a bit less of the 3rd colour on the outline of the right (opv) side. The dark blue and light blue looks a bit too bold I think. Why isn't Deacon playable in the final game? :o He totally doesn't look like a bard (if that's what he is) but he is cool non-the-less! I think his hair shading looks a bit messy compared to what you usually do (too much shading maybe?) and I think his clothes as too many folds. He is very cool though. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xiltas Crysten Posted July 21, 2012 Share Posted July 21, 2012 Looks great as usual :) My personal favo char would be Chester, he reminds me a bit of a more grown-up Azel. @eCut: I believe I've heard that there are no commands for "Dance" or anything in the RPG Maker. Also Bennet reminds me somewhat of Marcus, and Deacon... well, I agree, he doesn't look much like a bard, but still awesome. His beard looks a lot like mine... only that mine is brown, with a lot of red pigments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted July 21, 2012 Share Posted July 21, 2012 @eCut: I believe I've heard that there are no commands for "Dance" or anything in the RPG Maker. Actually this is XNA regardless, not RPG Maker which turned into FEXP IIRC yeti said there would be a different bard in the actual game, the command works fine since he's in TR3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted July 21, 2012 Share Posted July 21, 2012 These are such eye candy man. You sprite hair like some magical pixel god, and I particularly love the more realistic style you have for these. Chester/Vaida are my favorites~ Anyways, I picked out a couple of things that stuck out to me as I was browsing. I drew on top in red to kinda illustrate my points Vaida: This is gorgeous of course but the shading in her hood doesn't seem to properly reflect how it would be gathering at her neck. I drew those lines to somewhat illustrate which direction I think the hood would be falling. I think if you minimalized the shading on this hood it would look perfect Deacon: Given, you might not even edit this guy, but his chestplate looks like he strapped a tray to his shirt, it doesn't really seem to contour to the shape of his body as armor usually does. I also agree with eCut on his hair looking a bit sloppy, the shading at his hairline is too much Melanie: This is kidna minor and might just be her expression, but her chin seems a bit narrow and the slantedness of her mouth makes the chin itself look slanted Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted July 22, 2012 Author Share Posted July 22, 2012 (edited) Thanks for all the cc Mew and others :) I'll work through it :) Mid strength Mage knight, part of the Troab/Valk tree of generic for 7x Edited July 22, 2012 by Vampire Elf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted July 22, 2012 Share Posted July 22, 2012 I think the cape should show around the bottom of the neck and at the chest like the battle sprite, but that's just opinion of design. Oh, and blackened eye shapes don't match. A square is not an oval! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrainFreeze Posted July 22, 2012 Share Posted July 22, 2012 I think I'm in love with your mage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted July 23, 2012 Author Share Posted July 23, 2012 (edited) And I think the Troab generic tree is pretty much done! Credit to Lumi for the majority of the work on the Strong MK, http://puu.sh/KSV2 Edited July 23, 2012 by Vampire Elf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 I like the split progression (like how both ends are badasser forms of the troub.). Staffs in portraits is a cool touche. Seemingly flawless, as always.Totally not the right place to ask this, but since there are mageknights, will there be Greatknights, Wyvern Knights, and other second tier only classes that aren't necessarily types of knights in FE7x?. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted July 23, 2012 Author Share Posted July 23, 2012 Great-knights definitely, not sure about Wyvern knights, no summoners. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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