Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 9, 2008 Author Share Posted July 9, 2008 (edited) Chapter 8 (At the home of Mikue Zoraman) Zoraman: 20 years in the Senate 20 FUCKING YEARS, then this Dragmire comes out of no where, and steals all of my party's presidential endorsements! (Suddenly someone drops down through a ceiling panel) Zoraman: (Runs to desk and grabs a Letter-Opener) ???: Don't kill me I'm a friend! Zoraman: Who are you? ???: My name is Link Cassidy, and if you lose this election, this nation is screwed. ------------------------------------------- (20-Minutes Later) Zoraman: So Dragmire thinks he's some sort of, ancient wizard evil thing. Link: Yah, pretty much... Zoraman: And can we prove this? Link: No not really. Zoraman: And I shouldn't call the Cops and have you arrested why? Link: Because they work for Dragmire. Zoraman: Right...I'm calling security. Link: Hang on! (Link walks over and picks up a small figurine of Zoramens desk) Link: Who gave this to you? Zoramen: Senator Dragmire, When he got elected to the Senate, Why? Link: (Rips a small circuit board out of the bottom) Yeah this is a listening device. Zoramen: WHAT! Link: I'm gone (Link runs out of Zoraman's house) --------------------- (3 Minutes later in Zoraman's drive way) Link: (Running away from the house) ???: Going somewhere Boy? Link: What! ???: Listening Device. How'd you spot it? Link: Shit ???: FLAME CHOKE! (The man charges at link and starts blasting dark magic into him) Link: Jesus, I...Can't...Breath... WHAT.... Dragmire: Oh yes boy you must learn the price of meddleing. Link: Tri...Force! (A beam of light shoots out of Link's hand and blinds Dragmire) Dragmire: Gah, TELEPORT! Link: Crap...... To Be Continued.... Edited July 9, 2008 by Dr. Toa Lord Sothe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted July 9, 2008 Share Posted July 9, 2008 Yay, Triforce!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 10, 2008 Author Share Posted July 10, 2008 Yay, Triforce!! Thanks, Kiryn, anything else you like about it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knife Posted July 12, 2008 Share Posted July 12, 2008 Nice, give me more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 12, 2008 Author Share Posted July 12, 2008 Nice, give me more. I'm working on it, I needs me some inspiration! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knife Posted July 12, 2008 Share Posted July 12, 2008 B) new character There's your inspiration. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 12, 2008 Share Posted July 12, 2008 B) new characterThere's your inspiration. Ooo. Good inspiration. Also, good story so far Toa Lord Sothe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 12, 2008 Author Share Posted July 12, 2008 B) new characterThere's your inspiration. :P Ooo. Good inspiration.Also, good story so far Toa Lord Sothe. It actually goes against my usual writing process. 1. write story 2. post story 3. get flamed for story lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 15, 2008 Author Share Posted July 15, 2008 Chapter 8 1/2 Zoraman: Alright, I've gotten you a job in my office tommorow youll start work at the Senate. Link: Then I break away from the crowd and spy on Dragmire. Zoraman: Exactly, meanwhile, I'll be gathering allies among the senate. Link: Great, excellent plan, just one question Zoraman: What? Link: Do I get paid for this day of work at the senate? Zoraman: You mercanery prick! Link: Hey man world saveing or not I gotta pay the rent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 :PIt actually goes against my usual writing process. 1. write story 2. post story 3. get flamed for story lol *Follows formula* [jk] WUT?!?! THIS SUUX!!![/jk] In actuality it's nice to see Link get paid for saving the world. It's like people ask him to risk his life and everything and all he ever gets is a pat on the back. Like he's some kind of dog. Link the hoboero of time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 15, 2008 Author Share Posted July 15, 2008 Chapter 9 Zoraman: Alright, Take these to Senators Goldeen and Darbus, Then deliver this to Senator Dragmire, Mail this to Senator Dotar, and have the Notary send me those papers from Senator Ralis. Link: You do realize I'm not really your assistant? Zoraman: You are for today, so chop to it. Link: Alright could you repeat your orders, I lost track after "Take these" ____________________________________________________________ (3 minutes later) Link: Senator Goldeen, These papers are from Mikue Zoraman, It's about that new Energy Bill Goldeen (: Hah yes *Takes Papers and throws them in garbage can* Link: ... Goldeen: Special Fileing Cabinet. Link: ... To Be Continued... This was just meant to be a little chapter to show Zoraman's senate standing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knife Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 If you don't mind, can you post a short character synopsis? I'm kinda confused on the rolses of each character. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 This has potential, I think it needs longer episodes though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 15, 2008 Author Share Posted July 15, 2008 A Serenes Forest Exclusive! Character Profiles!!!!! Name: Lincoln Cassidey Age: 19 Counter-Part: Link Bio: Link was born in rural Termina, He moved to Hylia City when he was 16 and was forced into a hard life of kill or be killed on the poverty stricken south side of Hylia. Name: Gary Dragmire Age: 57 Counter-Part: Gannondorf Bio: Gary Dragmire is the descendant of Gannondorf he was born into the dukedom of Gerudo but then abandoned his title to run for Senate. He is obssessed with his Ancestor's legacy and is always searching for links to old Hyrule. Name: Mikue Zoraman Age: 32 Counter-Part: MM Zora Bio: Zoraman is the Zorian party front-runner for the presidential elections. He was origanally an ally of Dragmire until Dragmire stole his Senate Party endorsement votes. Sorry the other's who have counter parts haven't been revealed yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 Okay. -twiddles thumbs waiting for somebody to write stuff- TLS, have you read my Zelda fic? :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 15, 2008 Author Share Posted July 15, 2008 Okay.-twiddles thumbs waiting for somebody to write stuff- TLS, have you read my Zelda fic? :D The one about the other Hyrule Princess? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 Yep. I like this one, too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 16, 2008 Author Share Posted July 16, 2008 Chapter 10 (At the home of Mikue Zoraman) Zoraman: I've called you all here today to... Link: Wait only one person came Zoraman: Anyway we need to beat Dragmire in this election... (A large tan guy in a suit stands up) Darbus: Listen Mikue we're friends but I'm voteing Dragmire I'm sorry. Zoraman: Link tell him your story Darbus: Story? Link: Alright, so I guess it all started when these thugs jumped me outside a Pawn Shop. ____________________________________________ (40 minutes later) Link: ...And then the cop shot my land lady, so I ran after a limo due to a psycotic voice in my head, stole a sword from Dragmire, and then I tried to find a Senator and Zoraman was the first one I found in the phone book. Link: Wanna hear it a third time? Darbus: No I think I got it this time. Zoraman: So now you see why we can't let Dragmire be elected. Darbus: Yeah but, are you sure? Darbus: Dragmire is a great Senator, can we really go after him on corruption charges based on the words of a child. Zoraman: Darbus, there was a hearing device in the figurine he gave me. Darbus: Alright fine, I'm in Zoraman: Great we can... Darbus: SHiIII *Darbus falls to the ground* Zoraman: Darbus! Link: Mkue let's get out of hear Zoraman: What just happened? Link: I don't know (Link runs for the door) (Sniper Fire blasts through the windows) Link: Oh Crap Zoraman: Link I'll distract them you go out the back. Link: Fine, good luck man Zoraman: Hey, if I die you don't get severance pay Link: Well crap you better not go and die then Zoraman: Makes me sad that's the only reason you'd miss me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 Snipers. In the Zelda world. This is certainly very interesting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 17, 2008 Author Share Posted July 17, 2008 Chapter 11 (On the Hylian streets) Link: 'Home Free' Thug 1: Hey Mutha' Fucka' been a while Link: Crap... Thug 2: Yeah man next time ya' think were dead ya' betta' make fuck damn sure were dead! Link: Sorry, I was to busy screwing your wife to bother. Thug 2: *Hits Link with the butt of his gun* Thug 1: *Kicks Link to the Ground* Thug 2: Alright let's kill the fucker and be done. *Thug 2 takes out his Gun* Link: Shi... BANG!!! Thug 2: Frack... Thug 1: What the... BANG Thug 1: You'll pay... *A blue haired man holding a glock comes out from a doorway across the street* ???: Get in the car! Link: Who are you? ???: GET IN THE CAR! *Link gets in a red sports car* ________________________________ (3 Minutes Later) *Link and the tall Blue Haired man are in the back seat, a small black haired kid is driveing* Link: Who are you? ???: My names Isaac I'm with a personal security firm. Link: Why did you save my ass? Isaac: Zoraman had us follow you after we dealt with the snipers. Link: Mikue's okay? Isaac: Yeah, so where should we drop you? Link: 333 East 21st Street. Isaac: Alright, Senario drive him up there I have some buisness to attend to. Senario: Right Cheif. To Be Continued... PS: One cookie to anyone who guees who Isaac is bassed off of Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 17, 2008 Author Share Posted July 17, 2008 I seriously am debating weather or not to finish this or not. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 Please do, I'm reading it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 18, 2008 Author Share Posted July 18, 2008 (edited) Please do, I'm reading it. I know but there seems to be a lack of interest and all that shit. Ya know what screw it I'm gonna finish this fic, More for myself then anyone else!!! Now to confront that damn writers block!!! Edited July 18, 2008 by Toa Lord Sothe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted July 19, 2008 Author Share Posted July 19, 2008 Chapter 12 (At the home of Ariana Cassidy) *A Blonde girl enters her apartment* *Phone Rings* Ariana: Hello ???(On Phone): Hello my name is Police Cheif Viscan, Your brothers in a lot of trouble, we were wondering if you'd seen him Ariana: I'm sorry we don't speak Cheif Viscan(On Phone): Alright if you see him call us Ariana: Sure bye. *Hangs Up Phone* ???: So how have you been? Ariana: Jesus Christ! *Pulls Glock out of her Purse* ???: Hold fire! Ariana: I'm broke pal, just get the hell out of my apartment! ???: It's me Link! Ariana: ...Link? Link: Yes, Jesus women you pack heat! Ariana: What the hell are you doing here! Link: Running for my life, listen I don't have time to explain. Ariana: Oh yeah, you up and leave don't make contact for a year then run into my home and say "I can't explain" Link: Sorry, listen do you have any money on you? Ariana: Why of all the nerve!!! Link: Please Arie, listen I'm in deep shit I need... Ariana: I'm calling the cops back RIGHT NOW Link: Ariana, I need help Ariana: Fine *Hands Link some One Rupee Bills* Link: <_< Ariana: Sorry It's all I have! Link: Great Robbing from the Poor to give to the Poorer Ariana: Hey Link, It's been a hard year with Gram and then you left it's just... Link: I'm sorry, I promise I'll come home when all this shit is over. Ariana: Thanks. To Be Continued... Filler!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 19, 2008 Share Posted July 19, 2008 Methinks Issac is MARTH. Sorry about not posting and stuff but I've been busy. Lots of long shifts at work, going out with friends and playing wii. And when im here Im trying to update my story and such. But good. Keep it going! (YAY THE THUGS CAME BACK!) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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