Lost_Soul_Renault Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 Well here's a poem I've been workingone for the past half a year... so far I have: ---------------------------------------------- Lightning that strikes before it hits the ground Darkness cries out before the sound Truth despairs in face of light How will I survive the sacred night? -------------------------------------------- What do you think of it so far? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hibari Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 Sounds good. What's it for? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost_Soul_Renault Posted July 15, 2008 Author Share Posted July 15, 2008 Sounds good. What's it for? hmmm? Oh I write for fun! Poetry included! This one I'm taking my time with! tweeking each line until its perfect! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desdemona Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 That's a very nice poem. :) Are there any more lines to it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost_Soul_Renault Posted July 15, 2008 Author Share Posted July 15, 2008 That's a very nice poem. :) Are there any more lines to it? not as of yet ;) It will be a few pages long by the time I'm finished with it. which probally won't be for another year or so at the current rate I'm going with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted July 15, 2008 Share Posted July 15, 2008 It's pretty good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Florete Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 Sounds like a good start. Do you know where it's headed? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 It will be a few pages long by the time I'm finished with it. which probally won't be for another year or so at the current rate I'm going with it. Sounds like the Shahnameh. A lot. Which is a good thing. I love those first few lines, btw. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Knight Posted July 16, 2008 Share Posted July 16, 2008 that's deep man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost_Soul_Renault Posted July 31, 2008 Author Share Posted July 31, 2008 Sounds like a good start. Do you know where it's headed? not really... I'm building this like a puzzle, but I have nothing but the edges to guide them together... Perhaps It'll be like: the only truth is that there are no truths, that would be my goal. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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