Caliban of Sycorax Posted February 29, 2012 Share Posted February 29, 2012 Linky. I'd appreciate some critiques on how to improve my playwriting. I'm working on a new one right now so I'd like to know any tips. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted February 29, 2012 Share Posted February 29, 2012 First. . .why are both pieces in bold? Now, for the individual ones. . . Surrealist piece: This really isn't my thing, and I'd probably end up slapping my boyfriend if he did that to me. . .but that's because I tend to overanalyze stuff. Ubu Roi: I got a good giggle out of this one. Moderates shall rule the world! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted March 6, 2012 Author Share Posted March 6, 2012 Bold is because when I write scripts, I bold character names before I write lines. The forums did weird things to them and I don't know how to fix it. This really isn't my thing, and I'd probably end up slapping my boyfriend if he did that to me. . .but that's because I tend to overanalyze stuff. Surrealism is about a painful psychic transformation, and that's what I tried to go for. I got a good giggle out of this one. Moderates shall rule the world! Glad you like it. I write it at about 1 AM. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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