Alabaster Posted November 15, 2012 Share Posted November 15, 2012 Iono but the hat looks made of steel to me xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted November 15, 2012 Share Posted November 15, 2012 (edited) I honestly have no idea what the body is supposed to be doing ._. EDIT: Oh! It's a bird. I had no clue XD Edited November 15, 2012 by L95 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted November 15, 2012 Share Posted November 15, 2012 The collar (scarf?) of her outfit is waaaay too straight. It looks like you put a random stripey rectangle over top of her face and doesn't contour her body at all D: I like the bird a lot but at the moment his little hat is blending into her hat a lot. Nih is right about her hat too, its shaded kind of like armor, I think it could use a few more intricate folds. The hat might be a bit high on her head as well? Hats usually rest just above the ear. I disagree with the "make the body bigger" statement by the way. The position of the bird makes it seem like her body should be more of a profile angle, but she's currently actually more at a 3/4 view. He appears to be sitting on her collarbone sort of? So IMO either move the bird to the right, or take OPV right shoulder in by a few pixels to turn her body in the right direction. I'd do the second thing since her head facing kind of doesn't match the position of her body right now. I really appreciate/respect the fact that you're working on such a complex sprite and I hope you can resolve the issues that it has *o* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 15, 2012 Author Share Posted November 15, 2012 It's not a scarf, it's like a really big turtleneck... thing. I will get to work on those other things though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted November 15, 2012 Share Posted November 15, 2012 It's not a scarf, it's like a really big turtleneck... thing. I will get to work on those other things though Ooooh so it was a collar. Also I thought the little emblem you put on her hat was a part of the bird's hat. Ignore what I said about his cap then u3u Bird y r u wearing a hat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted November 15, 2012 Share Posted November 15, 2012 Still think you should do something about how stark the collar is compared to the skin. It doesn't really go together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted November 16, 2012 Share Posted November 16, 2012 Still think you should do something about how stark the collar is compared to the skin. It doesn't really go together. Yeaaaaa, I agree, I wasn't retracting what I said about the straightness of the collar, it still should be contouring her neck/curving up her face a bit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 21, 2012 Author Share Posted November 21, 2012 (edited) bird hat lady Eisenwane (still really bad!!) weird veil thing lady Helena Edited November 21, 2012 by haisaiagaa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 23, 2012 Author Share Posted November 23, 2012 this is suffering Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted November 23, 2012 Share Posted November 23, 2012 Change the color on the shirt, at first I thought she was naked and wearing a random collar. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 23, 2012 Author Share Posted November 23, 2012 She's not wearing a shirt. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kramy Posted November 23, 2012 Share Posted November 23, 2012 Yet? or ever? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 23, 2012 Author Share Posted November 23, 2012 Ever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted November 23, 2012 Share Posted November 23, 2012 So the line going down her middle is a weird bra, then? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 23, 2012 Author Share Posted November 23, 2012 It's a necklace-pendant thing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted November 23, 2012 Share Posted November 23, 2012 head looks huge compared to the body? I kinda like the shading, but it doesn't feel much fe-like xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 23, 2012 Author Share Posted November 23, 2012 (edited) Yeah, she doesn't really look like something that would fit in FE. :< And I will try to make her body a bit bigger. Or her head smaller edit: did not want to post again since it's already at the top Edited November 23, 2012 by haisaiagaa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 24, 2012 Author Share Posted November 24, 2012 There is something wrong with her head, but I don't know what. Can someone help? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted November 24, 2012 Share Posted November 24, 2012 The way you have the hair makes the head look too thin and too tall, especially left opv, but I can't tell if it actually is or if the hair just makes it look that way. And on the right opv where the hair goes behind the ear, the separation between the hair that goes forward and the hair that goes back kinda looks off. I can't really be more helpful than that though, its like I see what it is but I'm having trouble describing it to you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Feaw Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 asdf You're getting pretty good at this o 3o. Just wanted to let you know that you've got another "fan" =). Keep it up~~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted November 26, 2012 Share Posted November 26, 2012 Yeah, she doesn't really look like something that would fit in FE. :< And I will try to make her body a bit bigger. Or her head smaller edit: did not want to post again since it's already at the top Neck shading is really flat/nonexistent. There's also an unshaded hair strand on her right side. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 28, 2012 Author Share Posted November 28, 2012 http://puu.sh/1v8IO Assuming you're talking about this, that's not hair. It's just the veil. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted November 28, 2012 Share Posted November 28, 2012 I was... well, shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samias Posted November 28, 2012 Share Posted November 28, 2012 I'm no spriter, but I think the veil's contact with the hair is visually problematic in an obvious way. The way the veil contacts with the hair creates what is known as a 'tangent', in which the viewer can't resolve whether or not the veil is touching the hair or behind the hair because of the way the lines converge. I think either the bottom part should not be visible, or you should make all the cloth visible all the way down and disappear resting on her shoulder, so you don't have the conflict with the hair's outline. Or thin the hair and have it hang straighter instead of flaring out at the bottom. Anything so that the outline of the veil and the outline of the hair don't combine like they are now. All the problem points I circled. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 28, 2012 Author Share Posted November 28, 2012 Made fixes~ And changed her hair/head size Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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