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I (probably) fixed it

Also, to anyone wanted to use it, the Kirito sprite is free-use as long as you credit me somewhere and you don't do anything that violates a copyright or something that could get me trouble

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Very nice Kirito, actually... actually very nice gallery in general, I am finding it hard to find most of these sprites in any way cringe-worthy. :)

One suggestion on the Kirito, to me his neck looks a little odd at the moment. Its one pixel too thick in my eyes. Try moving the right most neck in one pixel to the left, and see what you think. (tried that myself, liked it... but this is your thread, and your sprite so not gonna bother posting it)

Anyways, you do some very fine work. Definitely will be following.

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Animations looks good. Dodge on the guy could use some repositioning. Screws with perspective/determining what's closest to the camera right now. Maybe more frames on it too to make it smoother. As is right now, though, apart from the dodge neither would stick out of a hack in a bad way.

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Now do Shion

Asuna seems to have pretty large eyes... maybe it's just me.

Her right shoulder (opov) connecting the arm and the chest looks bit caved in.

And her tied up hair area need fixing. BAD.

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Looks better.

Now that I had another look, her neck is pretty long.

Also, the hair out line, when you consider the top where it meets the tied up area, it doesn't match to the free hair beneath it in outlining wise, making it feels unusual.

I'll point it out in my edit. 1sec

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See the blue arrow and blue circle.

Looking at the darkest hair shade on that particular spot makes her hairline feels larger than usual compared to what outline displays.

Might want to consider less darkest color and more 2nd shade.

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