hinabear Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 http://xhinata.deviantart.com/art/Nephenee...Battle-75902832 Tell me what you think and how I can fix it! ;D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurion_Emblem Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 it looks good...I suck at drawing, so I can't offer any suggestions... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hanz Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 I quite like it myself. Not exactly an art person so I don't think I could help in any way though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CGV Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 sweet picture. go nephenee! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nacho Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 I think it looks great, especially the way you did the shading on the helmet. If I could change it, I'd shrink the hand just a little so that it's not as big as her head lengthwise, and fatten up her arm a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meteor Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 Her hand seems pretty big, and her nose is almost non-existent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CGV Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 for the whole "how you can fix it thing", don't. I think it looks badass, and since Neph is a fave of mine and I want her pics to looks good, it looks pretty cool Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seraphim Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 Oh, I absolutely adore the way you colored her. What program did you use? :) Maybe you could move her mouth down a little more, and add more to the part of the helmet where her hand is. Right now, her head looks kind of flat. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinabear Posted January 30, 2008 Author Share Posted January 30, 2008 Her hand seems pretty big, and her nose is almost non-existent. Ohh I was going for the big hand thing! Cause since Nephenee is kinda tough in battle, but shy personality-wise, I didn't think her hands would be small...she is also from the countryside with Brom so I expected them to do lots of farm work <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinabear Posted January 30, 2008 Author Share Posted January 30, 2008 Oh, I absolutely adore the way you colored her. What program did you use? :)Maybe you could move her mouth down a little more, and add more to the part of the helmet where her hand is. Right now, her head looks kind of flat. Thank you! I used Sakura Micron pens (with a nib width of 005) for her line art on regular A4 printer paper. I scanned it in at 300 dpi and CGed her on Photoshop CS 2. ;D And yes, I should move her mouth down a bit more... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aurion_Emblem Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 you can quote more than one post at a time, and reply to them as such 1 reply to 1 2 reply to 2 if you didn't know, Hinabear, because I notice you double post your replies a lot...and generally, it's not a good thing to double post...there is also the handy edit function, which further prevents double posting... this is not a personal attack, but double posting is frowned on, and there is usually no need to double post (unless you are trying to raise your post count), because should someone post something from the time that you started to post to the time that you post, and you wish to reply to that, you can "*edit*" your reply in... so now you know for the future Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NTG Posted January 30, 2008 Share Posted January 30, 2008 Ooh, great job ^_^. I like your shading too, with the helmet, hair clothes and fur. Like others said, I also think the mouth could be moved down a little, or maybe it's just the position/shape of the nose that makes it look a little weird. Overall, I love the colours and the background choice! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CGV Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 next you should draw Neph totally kicking someone's ass! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinabear Posted January 31, 2008 Author Share Posted January 31, 2008 you can quote more than one post at a time, and reply to them as suchreply to 1 reply to 2 if you didn't know, Hinabear, because I notice you double post your replies a lot...and generally, it's not a good thing to double post...there is also the handy edit function, which further prevents double posting... this is not a personal attack, but double posting is frowned on, and there is usually no need to double post (unless you are trying to raise your post count), because should someone post something from the time that you started to post to the time that you post, and you wish to reply to that, you can "*edit*" your reply in... so now you know for the future Ahh yes I figured it out, thank you Aurion...Actually I am very busy with college right now, so I had no time to investigate the ins and outs of forums since I dont go on them much. I guess it was easier/faster for me to just hit the reply button and give a quick reply lol Ooh, great job ^_^. I like your shading too, with the helmet, hair clothes and fur. Like others said, I also think the mouth could be moved down a little, or maybe it's just the position/shape of the nose that makes it look a little weird. Overall, I love the colours and the background choice! I love your drawing of Claire too! What program do you use? next you should draw Neph totally kicking someone's ass! Hahaha I'm actually really bad at drawing more than one person, but I can do it if its in chibi form ;D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Florete Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 I love your drawing of Claire too! What program do you use? Don't you mean Clarine? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CGV Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 im sure whatever drawing you do with Neph doing the ass-kicking, it will be gnarly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senerio Posted February 9, 2008 Share Posted February 9, 2008 Great picture. I love the chibi art style. :) Do you take requests? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thingslayer Posted February 13, 2008 Share Posted February 13, 2008 She looks cool ^.^ reminds me of saint seiya. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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