Levy Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 For the most part I thought I might sprite for a possible rom hacking project. Here are the first 2 characters Ariella and Jack. Parts Used Ariella:Elbert,Eleanora,Isadora, and Ewan Jack:Beta Forde and Kyle,Alan, and Raven Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 Nice rainbows, I guess. I also like the username and memorable thread title, that's how you get the ladies. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyron Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 They need more coloration the armor and hair being the same color looks off that aside they look good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samias Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 (edited) You should seriously redo the colours on that Eleanor splice. There is almost no value contrast between those two shades, especially as trim colours. Trim colour in FE is always high contrast, usually because the trim is using light tones from the skin. Plus, that combination of blue and red is hard to put together anyway and usually look pretty bad together. The hairline has also been mucked up and is flattening the entire face as a result. The 2nd splice also has some pretty gross colours and has all the mistakes of the first splice, plus he has an odd area on the front of the hair where his bangs are cutting cut off awkwardly. [spoiler=Your first sprite reduced to b&w] There's very little shade variation here whereas any official sprite will have a lot more light grey value to make each piece of the armor stand out and read clearly. Edited February 13, 2013 by Samias Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levy Posted February 16, 2013 Author Share Posted February 16, 2013 You should seriously redo the colours on that Eleanor splice. There is almost no value contrast between those two shades, especially as trim colours. Trim colour in FE is always high contrast, usually because the trim is using light tones from the skin. Plus, that combination of blue and red is hard to put together anyway and usually look pretty bad together. The hairline has also been mucked up and is flattening the entire face as a result. The 2nd splice also has some pretty gross colours and has all the mistakes of the first splice, plus he has an odd area on the front of the hair where his bangs are cutting cut off awkwardly. [spoiler=Your first sprite reduced to b&w] There's very little shade variation here whereas any official sprite will have a lot more light grey value to make each piece of the armor stand out and read clearly. Hopefully fixed some of stuff you mentioned mainly the trim and colors.Also an awkward part of the bangs was removed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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