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  • 3 weeks later...

Is it just going to be males x Robin (F) or are you going to branch out?

I really like it so far, but I guess it's in the eye of the beholder as always. Stylistically, you were spot-on, and thematically, everything was well-placed.

I would've liked it to be a bit longer, but that's just me. They are shorts, as you said.

Keep writing, please!

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