Hawk Posted October 24, 2013 Share Posted October 24, 2013 Several months ago, I finished writing up an original sci-fi called Shadow: Ultimatum and made a complete edition that has from Prologue, 24 Chapters, and an Epilogue that spans around 63 pages, I think. Anyway, I decided to make this thread for feedback of my story and to give myself some motivation for the story's sequel (I haven't even written chapter 3 for months lol). Few things to keep in mind. One, this is the first story I ever completed in my life so there's bound to be pacing issues or such. And two, english is my second language, so expect some grammar mistakes or misspellings. Criticism is welcome, but please do not present it in a very bad tone. For example, ''This story has some errors and here's what I think you should fix'' is good. ''This story is shit and you're shit'' is not. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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