Chocolate Kitty Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 Hi, I've never actually posted in this section(or if I did it was ages ago), but I'd like to request for someone to give continuous feedback and suggestions for my writing. Note: I don't want someone to write my script for me or something similar. I've usually never bothered to get anyone else's opinions, but I figured I might as well, it can't hurt. If anyone is interested, please send me a PM(preferably with your dialogue writing experience) or post in here the same thing(if you have any that is). I think that's all, thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendor Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 I might be able to help. I was an editor for my high school newspaper although I never edited, critiqued dialogue Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted November 21, 2013 Author Share Posted November 21, 2013 Hmm, if that's the case, then you're not exactly what I'm looking for, sorry. Thank you, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendor Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 (edited) sure thang see ya in the shower Edited November 21, 2013 by The Booty Wawriah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted December 2, 2013 Author Share Posted December 2, 2013 no one else then it appears Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted December 2, 2013 Share Posted December 2, 2013 Depending on how much work you're asking to be editorialized, I could volunteer for 5 pages once a week or something similar. I don't have any dialogue examples worth presenting though. Most of my stuff is either a one-time review feedback on story beginnings (which is either enough to crush expectations or get people off the ground and on their way), and self-critiquing my own work (which is pretty terrible and monologuey). I have the usual HS AP-level English and some self-help creative writing books after that. I'd just be looking for plotholes, noting how the flow and mood of the story is, checking basic spelling and grammar, along with giving any specific feedback you were looking for. If you're interested (anytime) just go ahead and send me what you want reviewed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted December 3, 2013 Author Share Posted December 3, 2013 Hmm, all right, I'll compile what I have and send it your way when I deem it ready. Thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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