Snowy_One Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 Topic for feedback. Originally I was going to have this written as a story completely lacking in dialogue. I've done short stories like that before, often taking pesudo-rythem as an unintentional result, but I figured keeping up something like that for multiple chapters might get a bit too grating. I'm hoping that this time, free from having to follow a set path or make opening for OC's, I can write a good story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blah the Prussian Posted March 7, 2015 Share Posted March 7, 2015 Huh. This first chapter was interesting. The guard seemed supernatural somehow, correct me if I'm wrong. Presumably the kingdom is in some state of civil war at this point. You get bonus points for not doing the FE cliche of the token evil empire invading. Assuming this is even a FE fic, of course. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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