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Feedback for Comsic Whispers


Yula
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I decided that I'd like to get some feedback, however, there will be a few rules.

One, do not ask me to do the common internet form of writing where each line of dialogue is treated as the end of a paragraph. Comments like this will be ignored.

Two, No Furry bashing. If there is any Furry bashing in this topic, I'll call for a mod to close it.

Three, No arguing.

The story can be found here: http://serenesforest.net/forums/index.php?showtopic=55289

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