Tangerine Posted February 1, 2016 Share Posted February 1, 2016 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aoL3EF3O9nbgH-7qtX1t-_pcN-dIHcskMRCj0dPJa4Y/edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazy Foxie Posted February 3, 2016 Share Posted February 3, 2016 Instantly love this because it's FE3 :) The Zeke part was very well done and an interesting perspective I hadn't really considered before. Thanks for the read! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balcerzak Posted February 7, 2016 Share Posted February 7, 2016 Something feels wrong to me about just a pair of unconnected stories. If you were going to do a bunch of short tales across the spectrum, I feel it would work better with more of them. Also the timing in the second one seemed a little forced, a little too convenient, as if done for dramatic effect. As far as the tales themselves went, I found I far preferred the first, but the second definitely did some good work too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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