Life Posted February 28, 2016 Share Posted February 28, 2016 (edited) Since I'm aiming for publication, let 'er rip. As for the tense change, that is intentional. Just to let you know. It does sound a bit sloppy in the way I did it (I may even remove the entire first part and just elongate the second) but this is the first edit. Edited February 28, 2016 by Pharoahe Monch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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