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gonna put it here because requantizing is fun and wrys from hell is even more fun (warning: giant image)

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Had to rearrange the spoiler, since SF updated

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Looking pretty good there! The body is pretty well done. You have a little wonky trim on the near pauldron... but we can pretend that it's just battle damage. My only real issues are these three things listed:

1. The circlet isn't centered on his head as it looks like it is in the OA.

2. The hair can be a pit messy and noodly in some areas and could use a cleanup.

3. The far eye is huge compared to the near eye. It's giving him o _0 face.

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I was trying to go for a smug face, but I guess it's nowhere near what it should've been, anyway, now I'll finally edit Palla and Alm.

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On 3/11/2017 at 6:12 AM, Glaceo said:

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Wow this map looks really good! Your mountains are really outstanding. There's a couple things I just wanted to point out, though - first , the roads on the very left side of the map are very... square. It kinda clashes with the rest of the map a bit. Other than that, the map looks great, except for the palette. It's a bit blindingly white - mostly in terms of brightness. If you reduced the brightness and upped the contrast, that would probably fix it. Great work, man!

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On 25.03.2017 at 6:09 AM, KaBombz said:

Wow this map looks really good! Your mountains are really outstanding. There's a couple things I just wanted to point out, though - first , the roads on the very left side of the map are very... square. It kinda clashes with the rest of the map a bit. Other than that, the map looks great, except for the palette. It's a bit blindingly white - mostly in terms of brightness. If you reduced the brightness and upped the contrast, that would probably fix it. Great work, man!

thx 4 comment

Anyway, I just noticed those roads, I guess I was too tired/lazy to check those out, and since I'm too lazy even by this day, I'll fix it when the day comes.

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The girl's body is pretty good! Cute.. but also the face is kinda derp and small? Makes her head get swallowed by the hair. Speaking of the hair, the bangs could use a little touching up as to not just be straight lines.

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