Vicioushero Posted August 8, 2016 Share Posted August 8, 2016 (edited) Name: Freya Height: 6'1" Level 4 Axe Knight Leadership ★★★★★ HP - 33 (70% Growth) Affinity - Dark STR - 13 (35% Growth) MAG - 0 (2% Growth) SKL - 11 (45% Growth) SPD - 7 (50% Growth) LCK - 0 (35% Growth) DEF - 12 (40% Growth)RES - 0 (40% Growth) CON - 13 MOV - 8 Axe - B Sword - E Skills - Charge, Daunt Items - Pugi, Iron Sword Recruitment: Enemy, have main lord character girl/guy talk to her in chapter 4. However, she starts out dismounted. She doesn't uncover her horse until chapter 4x. I imagined you're trying to save a village from bandits/enemy soldiers. Around turn 3 or 4 she exits from a village. Intoxicated and looking for a fight, she'll attack enemies and player units alike. Though not making much sense (mostly spouting nonsense and claiming her horse was stolen by a duo of thieves), the lord unit manages to calm her down by promising to help find her horse (and maybe claiming that they think the enemy side took off with it). Edited August 15, 2016 by Vicioushero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 8, 2016 Author Share Posted August 8, 2016 (edited) Name: Ser Duglan Height: 5'11" Level 6 Free Knight Leadership ☆☆★★★ HP - 38 (40% Growth) Affinity - Anima STR - 10 (45% Growth) MAG - 0 (5% Growth) SKL - 13 (35% Growth) SPD - 14 (35% Growth) LCK - 5 (40% Growth) DEF - 6 (45% Growth)RES - 4 (35% Growth) CON - 9 MOV - 8 Sword - C Skills - Awareness Items - Iron Sword, Torch, Vulnerary Recruitment: Automatically from the start of chapter 7. You find your band in a tavern, stuck before a notoriously hazardous forest. It's known for bandits, wild beasts, dangerous terrain, and lost travelers. When the lord unit does the obligatorily thoughtful decision and turns around (for the safety of their men), Ser Duglan conveniently confronts the party and asks to serve as their guide. Obviously the encounter here will be a fog of war scenario. Ser Duglan, with his trusty torches, will lead the group through the treacherous forest. Afterwards, he'll explain that he was told to come here because of fate or some higher order, and that he'll fight for you. Probably because he fought alongside the lord's father/mother or sumthin. You know the deal. Edited August 15, 2016 by Vicioushero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 9, 2016 Author Share Posted August 9, 2016 (edited) Name: Chandi Height: 5'5" Level 1 Sword Fighter Leadership ★★★★★ HP - 17 (80% Growth) Affinity - Fire STR - 5 (35% Growth) MAG - 2 (13% Growth) SKL - 7 (50% Growth) SPD - 9 (60% Growth) LCK - 8 (45% Growth) DEF - 4 (25% Growth)RES - 1 (20% Growth) CON - 6 MOV - 8 Sword - D Skills - Elite Items - Wo Dao, Slim Sword Recruitment: Fight her with your lord and let her win in either chapter 5, 7, 9. She's a wandering swordwoman looking for a master, but reluctantly allows you to be her teacher because you did well enough in the duel. You have plenty of chances to recruit her, but it will only get harder to do in later chapters because her stats don't scale. You can't face her without weapons neither, smarty pants. Basically you just gotta hope she crits. You don't die from the duel, of course. Edited August 15, 2016 by Vicioushero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dangerus Posted August 9, 2016 Share Posted August 9, 2016 Holy crap these look awesome. My only critique is that the images appear small until you click them. I suggest making the images appear larger at least. Do you have an art page as well? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rezzy Posted August 9, 2016 Share Posted August 9, 2016 Very nice, I especially like the third one. I second making the images a bit bigger on the page. Take my criticism with a grain of salt, but the second characters pants look a bit off. Almost a little too wrinkly, more like crinkled paper than baggy pants. Maybe someone better versed in the natural folds of clothing could explain it better than me. But overall, very nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 10, 2016 Author Share Posted August 10, 2016 (edited) Name: Blayek Height: 6'4" Level 5 Lance Armor Leadership ★★★★★ HP - 40 (85% Growth) Affinity - Wind STR - 10 (35% Growth) MAG - 0 (1% Growth) SKL - 8 (45% Growth) SPD - 2 (30% Growth) LCK - 2 (20% Growth) DEF - 13 (65% Growth) RES - 5 (20% Growth) CON - 15 MOV - 4 Lance - C Skills - Wrath, Ambush Items - Heavy Spear, Javelin Recruitment: Automatically from the start of chapter 1. I imagine Blayek as an ex-outlaw. Once a feared criminal, Blayek was defeated and captured. Instead of being executed, he was to serve the royal family that the lord descends from. Though a bit cynical, his heart has changed over the years, growing soft and all that. Especially when tasked with taking care of the lordling. Though this doesn't put a stop to his morbid sense of humor. As the story developes, Blayek must face the darkness that may still reside within his heart. Edited August 15, 2016 by Vicioushero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 10, 2016 Author Share Posted August 10, 2016 (edited) Holy crap these look awesome. My only critique is that the images appear small until you click them. I suggest making the images appear larger at least. Do you have an art page as well? Thanks! How do? And yeah, I have a few. I'll put them up here shortly. Edited August 10, 2016 by Vicioushero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 10, 2016 Author Share Posted August 10, 2016 Very nice, I especially like the third one. I second making the images a bit bigger on the page. Take my criticism with a grain of salt, but the second characters pants look a bit off. Almost a little too wrinkly, more like crinkled paper than baggy pants. Maybe someone better versed in the natural folds of clothing could explain it better than me. But overall, very nice. Thank you very much! I'll get right on that as soon as I figure out how. Don't sweat it. I see what you mean. I guess I might have over done it a bit, but I also strictly made it one dimensional. It would've turned out differently if I added some shades and highlights and not so much relied on line art to convey wrinkles. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rezzy Posted August 10, 2016 Share Posted August 10, 2016 (edited) biggymctubinstein.png Name: Blaek (Like blay-ick. Someone help me with a more proper spelling if that doesn't make sense) Height: 6'4" Level 5 Lance Armor HP - 40 (85% Growth) Affinity - Wind STR - 10 (35% Growth) MAG - 0 (1% Growth) SKL - 8 (45% Growth) SPD - 2 (30% Growth) LCK - 2 (20% Growth) DEF - 13 (65% Growth) RES - 5 (20% Growth) CON - 15 MOV - 4 Lance - C Skills - Wrath Items - Heavy Spear, Javelin Recruitment: Automatically from the start of chapter 1. I imagine Blaek as an ex-outlaw. Once a feared criminal, Blaek was defeated and captured. Instead of being executed, he was to serve the royal family that the lord descends from. Though a bit cynical, his heart has changed over the years, growing soft and all that. Especially when tasked with taking care of the lordling. Though this doesn't put a stop to his morbid sense of humor. As the story developes, Blaek must face the darkness that may still reside within his heart. Maybe Blayek or Blayok. Blaek looks like it would be Blake. Thank you very much! I'll get right on that as soon as I figure out how. Don't sweat it. I see what you mean. I guess I might have over done it a bit, but I also strictly made it one dimensional. It would've turned out differently if I added some shades and highlights and not so much relied on line art to convey wrinkles. I've only recently started to even try shading, so I know it can be tough. I think you have real talent. Are you making your own fan game? Edited August 10, 2016 by Rezzy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 10, 2016 Author Share Posted August 10, 2016 Maybe Blayek or Blayok. Blaek looks like it would be Blake. I've only recently started to even try shading, so I know it can be tough. I think you have real talent. Are you making your own fan game? Blayek it is. Oh no. I'd really like to, but I'm just doing this for fun. All the details stuff is just tropey Fire Emblem junk. I plan on doing at least one character a day if I have the free time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dangerus Posted August 10, 2016 Share Posted August 10, 2016 Thanks! How do? And yeah, I have a few. I'll put them up here shortly. Great! I was going to ask if you do art trades and such and whether or not you have any requirements first. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 10, 2016 Author Share Posted August 10, 2016 Great! I was going to ask if you do art trades and such and whether or not you have any requirements first. Perhaps! What would you have in mind? http://viscioushero.deviantart.com/ http://viscioushero.newgrounds.com/art/ I don't submit very often and I haven't seriously used DA in years. I have have NSFW content in either link. So yeah. Also, how do I make the images bigger in my posts? I'm trying and looking up answers but finding none. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dangerus Posted August 10, 2016 Share Posted August 10, 2016 Perhaps! What would you have in mind? http://viscioushero.deviantart.com/ http://viscioushero.newgrounds.com/art/ I don't submit very often and I haven't seriously used DA in years. I have have NSFW content in either link. So yeah. Also, how do I make the images bigger in my posts? I'm trying and looking up answers but finding none. I sent you a PM with my references, since I didn't want to clutter the space of this thread. Also, Blayek looks pretty cool! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 10, 2016 Author Share Posted August 10, 2016 I sent you a PM with my references, since I didn't want to clutter the space of this thread. Also, Blayek looks pretty cool! Thanks! He's a lot bulkier than the previous iteration, but he goes better with the rest of the gang. I derived inspiration from the old concepts of the armor knight for his armor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dangerus Posted August 10, 2016 Share Posted August 10, 2016 Thanks! He's a lot bulkier than the previous iteration, but he goes better with the rest of the gang. I derived inspiration from the old concepts of the armor knight for his armor. You're welcome. And hey, I did enjoy how he actually is an older character in your universe! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 10, 2016 Author Share Posted August 10, 2016 You're welcome. And hey, I did enjoy how he actually is an older character in your universe! "Not older, just better." You know, the thing old people say. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dangerus Posted August 10, 2016 Share Posted August 10, 2016 "Not older, just better." You know, the thing old people say. OH WOW. That's a laugh! I might try to draw these units as well. Are they characters for your own story or are they fan characters based on any particular Fire Emblem game? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 10, 2016 Author Share Posted August 10, 2016 OH WOW. That's a laugh! I might try to draw these units as well. Are they characters for your own story or are they fan characters based on any particular Fire Emblem game? Characters for a yet to be written story. I dunno. I might do something with them eventually. You totes should! I'd look at them so hard. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dangerus Posted August 10, 2016 Share Posted August 10, 2016 Characters for a yet to be written story. I dunno. I might do something with them eventually. You totes should! I'd look at them so hard. Neat! I hope you do! The roster so far looks very promising! Thanks! Also, best of luck to you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 11, 2016 Author Share Posted August 11, 2016 (edited) Name: Malkyn Height: 5'9" Level 4 Mercenary Leadership ★★★★★ HP - 18 (80% Growth) Affinity - Thunder STR - 9 (70% Growth) MAG - 0 (3% Growth) SKL - 11 (50% Growth) SPD - 12 (50% Growth) LCK - 7 (40% Growth) DEF - 6 (35% Growth)RES - 1 (10% Growth) CON - 8 MOV - 5 Sword - C Skills - Moonlight Sword Items - Iron Blade, Red Gem Recruitment: Enemy, in chapter 9 he must kill the NPC you're suppose to escort. I sorta of imagined Malkyn the son of an impoverished noble. Due to some unknown "Amazing Spider-Man"-like circumstance, his father leaves because of the current war. Now Malkyn is out traveling the world and looking for leads on his father. During the chapter, Malkyn and the escortee are linked. Protecting the NPC gives you more material rewards and chapter 10a. If Malkyn kills the NPC, you get him as a recruit and chapter 10b. Edited August 15, 2016 by Vicioushero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dangerus Posted August 11, 2016 Share Posted August 11, 2016 (edited) Woah, nice twist. I mean I like that there is an option to opt out of an escort mission. Edited August 11, 2016 by Dangerus Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 11, 2016 Author Share Posted August 11, 2016 Woah, nice twist. I mean I like that there is an option to opt out of an escort mission. Thanks! I know right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dangerus Posted August 11, 2016 Share Posted August 11, 2016 Thanks! I know right? You are welcome. And yeah, I hated the escort mission in Mario and Luigi: Superstar Saga so this is a breath of fresh air for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicioushero Posted August 15, 2016 Author Share Posted August 15, 2016 (edited) Name: GregoriaHeight: 5'3"Level - 8Leadership ★★★★★HP - 22 (80% Growth)Affinity - Dark STR - 9 (60% Growth)MAG - 5 (30% Growth)SKL - 9 (70% Growth)SPD - 15 (65% Growth)LCK - 6 (40% Growth)DEF - 7 (40% Growth)RES - 12 (40% Growth)CON - 5MOV - 5Bow - DSkills - Skill +2 Items - Iron Bow (Heracles -> To Recruit her Brother, Atticus)Recruitment: Joins your army in the first Paralogue she is introduced to. If she kills the boss in the Paralogue, she stays in your army in the end. Design and concept created by Dangerus. Edited August 16, 2016 by Vicioushero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dangerus Posted August 16, 2016 Share Posted August 16, 2016 I love how you colored her in! I especially enjoy the fact her colors are more muted so she fits the setting more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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