TheGreatXyz Posted October 13, 2016 Share Posted October 13, 2016 (edited) I'm TheGreatXyz, and I hope you enjoy this gallery. I'm starting this sprite gallery as a way to improve, and I am looking for critique. Credit to NICKTofficial for the NICKT collection with. First Up, I have Xyz, an oc and the namesake of my account. A splice of FE7 portraits and some from the NICKT collection. Next, a personal portrait, though I do not have green hair. Made from sprites from FE7. Then, another original character, this one named Tsabhira. Splice of two FE7 thieves. Next, another character, named Agent Smash. Splice of some NICKT collection and various FE7 characters. Followed by another character, this one named Tik. Splice of FE7 characters. Finally, a semi-custom portrait, the first one I've ever done, Forrest/Foleo from Fire Emblem Fates, Hair taken from FE7 because I couldn't figure out how to sprite the curls. Nose, eyes, and mouth also taken from other portraits, the nose was slightly edited, the eyes were recolored and positioned differently than the original, mouth mostly the same. Edited October 13, 2016 by TheGreatXyz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted October 14, 2016 Share Posted October 14, 2016 Noticed some things when looking at your portraits. For portraits like these, they don't use traditional GBA colors. It's most noticeable with your outlines, and black colors. Try not to create custom colors when you're starting off, it'll most likely end up messy. Good first attempt though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGreatXyz Posted October 14, 2016 Author Share Posted October 14, 2016 (edited) Thanks for the feedback, I'll try to keep that in mind. Now that I look at it again its really noticeable on the white armor that the outline is much darker than normal. Anyways I made a couple more portraits. Green General Yellow Paladin I liked doing both of those, so I'll probably end up making a portrait for each color like that. Edited October 14, 2016 by TheGreatXyz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cornguy Posted October 14, 2016 Share Posted October 14, 2016 Is the grey skinned character inspired by the Mars Clan from Golden Sun by any chance? Either way, I like the look. The yellow palidan's bandana seems to go past his head on the left side. Other than that, its a fine splice. Good work so far. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGreatXyz Posted October 14, 2016 Author Share Posted October 14, 2016 No, I've never played Golden Sun, so I don't know what that is. I see what your saying about the yellow paladin, I think its mostly due to the different perspectives of the head and bandanna. I'll definitely keep that in mind for further splicing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zelkami Posted October 14, 2016 Share Posted October 14, 2016 I can give more feedback later, but one quick thing thats bugging me, is that Tsabihara does not have an outline around his cape. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGreatXyz Posted October 14, 2016 Author Share Posted October 14, 2016 (edited) After the feedback, I have decided to redo Tsabhira, so here's Tsabhira Mark II. I couldn't find any references for skin that dark, so I used Hawkeye's instead this time, I also gave her a new set of clothes. In addition, I have another portrait. Blue Wyvern Knight Edited October 14, 2016 by TheGreatXyz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted October 16, 2016 Share Posted October 16, 2016 She's looking alot better, good job! This guy can use some touch up though, His head seems to be jutting out a lot. It looks really uncomfortable. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGreatXyz Posted October 17, 2016 Author Share Posted October 17, 2016 (edited) Fixed him. Before on left After on right. Gif showing the difference because I thought it was funny. Edited October 17, 2016 by TheGreatXyz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted October 18, 2016 Share Posted October 18, 2016 The gif makes him look like he's dancing lmao. And the neck should be more straighter , not at an angle like that. There wasn't much of a difference between the original, and the edit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGreatXyz Posted October 19, 2016 Author Share Posted October 19, 2016 (edited) So something more like this maybe. Also, got a purple armored guy. Edited October 19, 2016 by TheGreatXyz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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