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^Kill joy

 

So uh, I read chapter 4 cause Im a late noob

I have nothing to say about the story itself, except that it seemed to move very quickly, which is.... fine for me. The grammar nazi in me is having a hard time with these spelling errors and stuff lol

I wish I was around to edit it for you ;-; It isn't that much of an issue since I am coherent enough to understand what is being said heh There's also a few parts that are missing quotation marks but eh, whatevs~

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11 hours ago, TheSilentChloey said:

Nym, I would think that puns are the last thing we need right now...

Awwww okay

1 minute ago, Arcanite said:

^Kill joy

 

So uh, I read chapter 4 cause Im a late noob

I have nothing to say about the story itself, except that it seemed to move very quickly, which is.... fine for me. The grammar nazi in me is having a hard time with these spelling errors and stuff lol

I wish I was around to edit it for you ;-; It isn't that much of an issue since I am coherent enough to understand what is being said heh There's also a few parts that are missing quotation marks but eh, whatevs~

Yea sorry, it's so difficult to see them once you made that chapter a few months ago XD

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15 hours ago, Arcanite said:

^Kill joy

 

So uh, I read chapter 4 cause Im a late noob

I have nothing to say about the story itself, except that it seemed to move very quickly, which is.... fine for me. The grammar nazi in me is having a hard time with these spelling errors and stuff lol

I wish I was around to edit it for you ;-; It isn't that much of an issue since I am coherent enough to understand what is being said heh There's also a few parts that are missing quotation marks but eh, whatevs~

I don't want to have the inner punmonster getting out.  Especially since like my older brother Henry I have a nasty habit of making rotten puns that are not needed here at this time.  Of CAWs there are some INteresting ones that that are better left OUTresting...

 

Also I am looking forward to seeing what the next chapter brings :XD: hopefully not much in the pun department...

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This chapter is ... a little bit special.

12 hours ago, TheSilentChloey said:

*laughs at the Shepherd's shenanigans :XD:*

As you can see, it seems to work quite well.

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4 minutes ago, TheSilentChloey said:

I loled way too much on the extra Vaike antics...

Its only the beginning

Should I do an off series just of shenanigans?

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1 minute ago, TheSilentChloey said:

Oh dear...

(Hell yes!)

Next up, someone is mad because they got their clarinet stolen!

On the Rp or just here

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It has been a good run but it's finally was the last chapter of ''Skills''.

Thank you for reading my story, I appreciate that you read my little mess.

See you later!

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