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I'm not gonna start right off with the story because there are a few disclaimers I'm gonna say first. Because everything needs disclaimers right? So this is being written to be made into like an actual fire emblem game but sense I have a hard time trying to make roms and have never made one because my attention span is really short. So I'll be posting all the dialog from the chapters and eventually support logs when i get around to it

\/ Story \/

Spoiler

 

Prologue (Inside Castle, Throne Room) (Lundren & Illiad)

 

Lundren: “Illiad you are going have to rule the kingdom some day and with are enemies ever searching for our weaknesses you must learn to defend yourself.”

Illiad: “Yeah, Yeah but that time isn’t gonna be anytime soon you and I both know that. Grandpa retired at 50 you are only 40! I still got time.”

Lundren: “You still need to take your training more seriously, If i were to be killed before I officially pass the crown to you, you wouldn’t be ready and I would have failed one of my biggest responsibilities…”

Illiad: “What staying alive?”

Lundren: “No, securing a good future for our kingdom. As it stands I have it set so my lead advisor would temporarily take the throne until you are ready.”

Illiad: “You mean Esri? Why would you leave the kingdom to him? I bet I could lead the kingdom twice as good as he could!”

Lundren: “Esri is my most trusted advisor and wouldn’t be prone to the mistakes that you would being an inexperienced leader. Now off with you, head to your sparring session with Nida.”

Illiad: “Yes Father.”

 

*Tutorial battle with Nida as Enemy* (Sparring Grounds) (Illiad & Nida)

 

*Tutorial battle ends*

 

Illiad: “I can’t believe my father would leave his kingdom to Esri before he would me!”

Nida: “Esri is your father’s most trusted advisor, I can understand why he may leave the kingdom in his hands while you’re still taking your lessons.”

Illiad: “What your on his side Nida? Normally you are on my side with these things. Why this sudden change of heart? Would you rather serve Esri than me?”

Nida: “No you are my liege and I wish for it to be no other way, but I do see your father’s point of view.”

Illiad: “I’m done with this I’m going to go talk to Destrik.”

 

*Ends Prologue*

 

*Chapter 1 Part 1* (Inside Castle, Hallways) (Illiad)

 

Illiad: “I can’t believe Nida agreed with my father! She can be such a…”

Ambient Noise: BOOM

Illiad: “What was that?” (Destrik Enters)

Destrik: “My Liege your ok! Thank the gods!”

Illiad: “What is going on Destrik?”

Destrik: “The city came suddenly under siege!”

Illiad: “Those…”

Ambient Noise: BOOM

Destrik: “We need to make our way to the safe house Illiad.”

Illiad: “Right.”

 

*Scene change* (Inside Castle, Ruined Hallways) (Illiad, Destrik, & Lafander)

Destrik: “Drat! Some of them have already made it inside!”

Lafander: “Prince is that you! Why are you here, shouldn’t you be at the safe house?”

Illiad: “That is where we are headed.”

Lafander: “Then allow me to help you kill these enemy soldiers in your way.”

 

*Battle Begins* (Win: Rout the enemy)

 

*Battle Ends*

 

Illiad: “Thank you for fighting at are side Lafander.”

Lafander: “I’m just doing my duty my lord.”

Illiad: “I request you follow us to our destination in case more scoundrels show up.”

Lafander: “It would be my honor.”

Destrik: “Illiad, commoners are not suppose to know where the safe house is.”

Illiad: “Yes, but until Nida shows up we aren’t exactly the best fighting force to make it there while under siege.”

 

*Part 1 Ends*

 

 

 

*Chapter 1 Part 2* (Outside Castle, South Courtyard) (Illiad, Nida, Destrik, Lafander, & Anadra)

 

Illiad: “Nida! Where have you been?”

Nida: “I was looking for you my liege.”

Destrik: “Who is this with you?”

Nida: “This is Anadra, she and I trained under the same master. She became a sellsword and I became a royal guard.”

Anadra: “Hello my lord. I heard you need some help getting through the city.”

Destrik: “We’ll need it to get through this warzone.”

Lafander: “With all do respect should we really be letting someone that would betray us for a few more coins join us?”

Illiad: “If Nida trusts her I’ll trust her. Nida?”

Nida: “I would put the fate of my life in her hands, she is the first person I would call to have my back if I could ask anyone.”

Anadra: “Your the same as ever Nida, don’t worry I got yah.”

 

*Scene Change*(Inner City, Ruined Streets) (Illiad, Nida, Destrik, Lafander, & Anadra)

Illiad: “F…”

Ambient Noise: BOOM

Illiad: “More scoundrels!”

Destrik: “Those look like goblins, what are they doing here?”

Anadra: “They bleed like anyone else, say the word and I’ll slaughter ‘em”

Illiad: “Everyone attack on my orders… NOW!”

 

*Battle Begins* (Win: Rout the Enemy)

 

*Battle Ends*

 

Anadra: “There were a lot of those little f…”

Ambient Noise: BOOM

Illiad: “There were…”

Destrik: “We need to keep moving, if we stop more will definitely show up.”

Illiad: “Right.”

Anadra: “If I may ask why the safe house is not inside the castle? Wouldn’t it be safer to get and easier to defend?”

Illiad: “When the safe house was built it was assumed that no one would make it that far into the city.”

Anadra: “Why was it never moved?”

Illiad: “Everyone assumed it would never be used anyways.”

Anadra: “Well we all know that is cow’s manure now.”

Illiad: “The point is we need to get there soon.”

 

*End of Part 2*

 

*Chapter 1 Part 3* (Inner City, Inside the Safe House) (Illiad, Nida, Destrik, Lafander, Anadra, Edgar)

 

Illiad: “Edgar what are you doing here?”

Edgar: “I came here to help protect you.”

Illiad: “Shouldn’t you be with father?”

Edgar: “That is the thing… your father was struck by an arrow to his chest… he probably won’t survive.”

Illiad: “WHAT!”

Nida: “The king has fallen?”

Lafander: “I pray to the gods he lives.”

Anadra: “Da…”

Ambient Noise: BOOM

Edgar: “I hate being the bringer of bad news but as one of his closest friends and one of his top advisors I feel I’m the best person to bring this news to you.”

Ambient Noise: DOOR BANGING NOISES

Nida: “Ready yourselves sounds like they are trying to break in!”

 

*Battle Begins* (Win: Illiad survives 9 Turns)

 

*3 Turns in*

Nida: “I thought you came to help defend Illiad.”

Edgar: “I’m helping in ways you don’t even know you ignorant swine!”

Nida: “Well whatever you are doing currently is not quite as important as preventing Illiad’s head from being detached from his shoulders.”

Destrik: “Nida watch out!”

Nida: “Nyah!”

Nida: “Thanks Destrik!”

 

*6 Turns in*

Anadra: “What in the gods blazes are you doing?”

Edgar: “Nothing that concerns a sellsword such as yourself.”

Anadra: “It concerns me if it means you’re sitting on your arse and not fighting!”

Edgar: “This does not concern you so leave me be!”

 

*Battle Ends*

 

Nida: “So what were you doing that was so important you couldn’t help fend off the goblins?”

Edgar: “I was maintaining the magical forcefield around the safe house so that no one could detect us un here.”

Anadra: “Cow manure, I’ve worked with plenty of mages and I ain’t heard of nothing like that before.”

Destrik: “Neither have I.”

Edgar: “That is because only high sages have use for such a spell.”

Illiad: “Regardless I am safe, need we continue this conversation?”

Edgar: “I agree with the prince let us put this to rest.”

(whispers)

Anadra: “I don’t trust this man, he rubs me the wrong way.”

Nida: “Agreed.”

 

*End of Chapter 1 Part 3*

I would appreciate feedback in this topic also I made all the class in skill stuff but I think I'll post those later.

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