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Do Me A Solid, And Grade These Sprites For Me

My sprites  

15 members have voted

  1. 1. which is the best

    • First One
      5
    • Second One
      6
    • Third One
      0
    • All were shit
      0
    • All were meh
      4


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So I recently made these sprites and I just wanted some feedback on them to see how good or not so good they are.

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Image 3

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5997d3482e75e_Sarah.png.0168cca17fff1bf1bc96379b1d73844a.png Sorry no battle sprite done yet.

Thanks all feedback is appreciated.

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I really like the first. The only problem with it is that the neck is just too long.

The second is just Tirado, so I don't know what's there even to rate.

The third one can definitely be improved: the mouth is weird and the palette for the hairs is all messed up.

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I like the first one a lot. The neck is a little long, though.

The first one looks really edited. The beard looks too blurry, kind of looks like you dragged and dropped a beard on.

The third one has a messy mouth and it looks like the hairbands are bleeding into the hair. I would outline the hairbands better and change the hair color so you can see the outline of the hairbands.

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The first one looks the cleanest, but I agree that the neck is too long. (Unless he's a teenaged Giraffe)

The second one needs a touch of shading around and on the sideburns.

The third needs the most work. The hair needs better shading, the mouth looks a little wonky and the shoulder guard is too big for the body. I would recommend to remove the belt like part and show more of the tunic underneath.

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First one looks like it had the most work done on it. Second and third are a tad too vibrant with the color palettes, more so in the portraits rather than the battle sprites.

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