Emeraldfox Posted October 28, 2008 Share Posted October 28, 2008 It's 12:10 A.M.... The moon is high..She's in my arms..And there's a corpse pile around us... Why is there a corpse pile around us? There is something in this girl that would make an entire country powerful. So it's beneficial to me, but I don't care about that... I love her too much. In order to get the weapon inside of her, one must kill her... I won't let that happen. So I'm in a lot of fights, to protect her. So that would make me her knight, I'm happy with that, I guess. Although I don't like to kill.. But, I will if I must. So every time I raise my sword... It's to protect the love of my life... Hope you all like it.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 28, 2008 Share Posted October 28, 2008 =o THAT'S A GREAT MONOLOGUE EMERALD! =) IT'S ALSO SWEET =D <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noremaC Posted October 28, 2008 Share Posted October 28, 2008 :D cool you're a good writer i don't really know what a monologue is though..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emeraldfox Posted October 28, 2008 Author Share Posted October 28, 2008 =o THAT'S A GREAT MONOLOGUE EMERALD! =)IT'S ALSO SWEET =D <3 :D coolyou're a good writer i don't really know what a monologue is though..... Thanks you two. ^^ And Nore, a monologue is like some sort of speech a character gives. To him/herself or to someone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midnight Nightmare Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 (edited) I felt a deep sense of respect, justice and honor...!!! IT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!! Edited August 11, 2009 by Karith Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Wright Posted July 27, 2009 Share Posted July 27, 2009 :D cool you're a good writer i don't really know what a monologue is though..... A monologue is a speech being said to the audience, or characters in a play (or movie). It's like the King speaking to his people.Because of that definition, I think what Emerald has here is a soliloquy. Whatever it is, I liked it. ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emeraldfox Posted July 27, 2009 Author Share Posted July 27, 2009 Whoa.. I almost forgot abut this. Ha ha. Anyway, thanks for the correction. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Wright Posted July 28, 2009 Share Posted July 28, 2009 Whoa.. I almost forgot abut this. Ha ha. Anyway, thanks for the correction. Will you be writing more? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emeraldfox Posted July 28, 2009 Author Share Posted July 28, 2009 When I'm in the mood. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kedyns Crow Posted August 9, 2009 Share Posted August 9, 2009 A monologue is a speech being said to the audience, or characters in a play (or movie). It's like the King speaking to his people. Because of that definition, I think what Emerald has here is a soliloquy. I'll expand on that, not because you're wrong, but because I'm bored and feel like it. A monologue is when a character in the play reveals parts of his/her emotions, intent, and personality to the audience. While sometimes there could be other characters witnessing the monologue, it is usually for the benefit of the audience members. Shakespeare would often use monologues to reveal the personalities of his characters. For example, the Queen Mab speech in Romeo and Juliet shows exactly who Mercutio is. The example you gave of a king addressing his people could possibly be a monologue. Staying on the theme of Shakespeare, a good example of a monologue taking the form of an address like the one you mentioned would be Marc Antony's famous monologue in Julius Caesar, where he speaks to a large crowd. This speech however, isn't considered a monologue because it is a long speech, it's a monologue because of what it reveals about Marc Antony. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikahil Posted August 23, 2009 Share Posted August 23, 2009 Damn, that's good, it's able to convey tons of emotions and personality about that character in just a few sentences (which is what it's supposed to do anyhow.) Characterization at its best. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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