[Crimson Flair, Rose Scented Air]

The chase lasted about fifteen secondsthe two were in for a long quiet walk home.OK.I dunno, this is really short, feels like it's got too many small inconsistencies, and could really use some more polish and a little bit of expansion and elaboration. Definitely a kernel in there for a fuller, riper story sometime down the line, though.

Idk, when I wrote the initial piece, the only feedback I got was to include more dialogue and have less build up. This is mostly due to the nature of the Awakening support conversations. All of them had what seemed to be short interactions (IRL time) but could have taken days in game time. I see why it seems like it's fifteen seconds and I would definitely love to polish it, but as a support conversation I think it gets the job done. If you want, I can send a more "completed" version for you to read. Thanks for the feedback.

[Crimson Flair, Rose Scented Air]

Thank you so much @PeaceRibbon if you ever want to talk about writing or fire emblem (or anything else) just inbox me!

[I have a confession...]

Why do you want Kisaragi's name changed? Pronunciation issues? The Blazblu Kisaragi?