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@Apostle Heinrich
Ah that. As for the ending, it was the closest I could get to without writing a full-blown short story, since the recommendations for length was less than 1k words, I think? (Though apparently I thought differently from other writers on that end, lol)
I guess I left it vague there, but I meant for Emperor Erick to be outside of the cell, peering in at his old teacher. The thing is, the old Druid isn't dangerous at all. But his spouting nonsense has some uncomfortable matter, particularly his thoughts on "the answer" of Grado's problems. He hasn't done anything "wrong" per say, but the fewer that know about the Demon King's power, the better--which is why he's locked up in a cell. I believe that Erick is reluctant to execute Galalilei for simply knowing that the Demon King isn't destroyed, but on the other hand, he can't let the Druid out of sight--lest someone take him seriously and start an uprising/revolution of sorts.
And no problem! I'm glad you thought my story was worth commenting on. I didn't think I'd get any comments tbh :'D
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The Answer
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The Emperor was imprisoned, maybe overthrown, potentially by an heir of his, because Magvel has learned not to abuse the power of the Sacred Stones... not to underestimate the lingering powers of the Demon King... Is that the general idea?
Great piece by the way :)
Actually it's the emperor's old teacher, a Druid. It's mentioned in the first section. It's something akin to that, though...I'm not sure if I'll write a follow-up prequel/sequel/something to it, aha... And thank you!
Definitely needed another run through the proofreader, but other than that a pretty nice piece! I really envy your talent for working in accents or slurs, or whatever you call it, into the speech patterns. That's something I fear I'll never get a good handle on.
Oh yeah. I realized a few hours after sending it in that copy-pasting it directly from Word did not translate well. I fixed up the italics and bolds where they needed to be, for emphasis, and didn't think to edit the rest. It's been a long week.
Thank you for the comment! I really appreciate the comments here. I didn't think my writing was worth much, to be honest ^^
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It was so hard to vote, but here's to hoping for the best to those that gave their best!
I didn't think I had much of a chance either, but this was a fun contest to join.
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After putting in my submission, I felt pretty happy. It's been so long since I've sat down to write--much less something FE related!
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I just might expand on it. I had notes written up on the current leaders of the nations before reigning myself back to focus on this simple exchange. Although on that note, I'm not sure where I should publish such a fanfic. Segments of a story posted in a forum seem unorthodox, but not out of the question either.