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  1. This seems really cool! This looks like its much better than trying to remember everything and spending more time than I should on planning marriages to get the child units I want! Fire Emblem Fates: Revelations needs something like this because dear god the amount of possible pairings its hard to remember all the good pairs and not be stuck with not getting all the child units.

  2. I'm not gonna start right off with the story because there are a few disclaimers I'm gonna say first. Because everything needs disclaimers right? So this is being written to be made into like an actual fire emblem game but sense I have a hard time trying to make roms and have never made one because my attention span is really short. So I'll be posting all the dialog from the chapters and eventually support logs when i get around to it

    \/ Story \/

    Spoiler

     

    Prologue (Inside Castle, Throne Room) (Lundren & Illiad)

     

    Lundren: “Illiad you are going have to rule the kingdom some day and with are enemies ever searching for our weaknesses you must learn to defend yourself.”

    Illiad: “Yeah, Yeah but that time isn’t gonna be anytime soon you and I both know that. Grandpa retired at 50 you are only 40! I still got time.”

    Lundren: “You still need to take your training more seriously, If i were to be killed before I officially pass the crown to you, you wouldn’t be ready and I would have failed one of my biggest responsibilities…”

    Illiad: “What staying alive?”

    Lundren: “No, securing a good future for our kingdom. As it stands I have it set so my lead advisor would temporarily take the throne until you are ready.”

    Illiad: “You mean Esri? Why would you leave the kingdom to him? I bet I could lead the kingdom twice as good as he could!”

    Lundren: “Esri is my most trusted advisor and wouldn’t be prone to the mistakes that you would being an inexperienced leader. Now off with you, head to your sparring session with Nida.”

    Illiad: “Yes Father.”

     

    *Tutorial battle with Nida as Enemy* (Sparring Grounds) (Illiad & Nida)

     

    *Tutorial battle ends*

     

    Illiad: “I can’t believe my father would leave his kingdom to Esri before he would me!”

    Nida: “Esri is your father’s most trusted advisor, I can understand why he may leave the kingdom in his hands while you’re still taking your lessons.”

    Illiad: “What your on his side Nida? Normally you are on my side with these things. Why this sudden change of heart? Would you rather serve Esri than me?”

    Nida: “No you are my liege and I wish for it to be no other way, but I do see your father’s point of view.”

    Illiad: “I’m done with this I’m going to go talk to Destrik.”

     

    *Ends Prologue*

     

    *Chapter 1 Part 1* (Inside Castle, Hallways) (Illiad)

     

    Illiad: “I can’t believe Nida agreed with my father! She can be such a…”

    Ambient Noise: BOOM

    Illiad: “What was that?” (Destrik Enters)

    Destrik: “My Liege your ok! Thank the gods!”

    Illiad: “What is going on Destrik?”

    Destrik: “The city came suddenly under siege!”

    Illiad: “Those…”

    Ambient Noise: BOOM

    Destrik: “We need to make our way to the safe house Illiad.”

    Illiad: “Right.”

     

    *Scene change* (Inside Castle, Ruined Hallways) (Illiad, Destrik, & Lafander)

    Destrik: “Drat! Some of them have already made it inside!”

    Lafander: “Prince is that you! Why are you here, shouldn’t you be at the safe house?”

    Illiad: “That is where we are headed.”

    Lafander: “Then allow me to help you kill these enemy soldiers in your way.”

     

    *Battle Begins* (Win: Rout the enemy)

     

    *Battle Ends*

     

    Illiad: “Thank you for fighting at are side Lafander.”

    Lafander: “I’m just doing my duty my lord.”

    Illiad: “I request you follow us to our destination in case more scoundrels show up.”

    Lafander: “It would be my honor.”

    Destrik: “Illiad, commoners are not suppose to know where the safe house is.”

    Illiad: “Yes, but until Nida shows up we aren’t exactly the best fighting force to make it there while under siege.”

     

    *Part 1 Ends*

     

     

     

    *Chapter 1 Part 2* (Outside Castle, South Courtyard) (Illiad, Nida, Destrik, Lafander, & Anadra)

     

    Illiad: “Nida! Where have you been?”

    Nida: “I was looking for you my liege.”

    Destrik: “Who is this with you?”

    Nida: “This is Anadra, she and I trained under the same master. She became a sellsword and I became a royal guard.”

    Anadra: “Hello my lord. I heard you need some help getting through the city.”

    Destrik: “We’ll need it to get through this warzone.”

    Lafander: “With all do respect should we really be letting someone that would betray us for a few more coins join us?”

    Illiad: “If Nida trusts her I’ll trust her. Nida?”

    Nida: “I would put the fate of my life in her hands, she is the first person I would call to have my back if I could ask anyone.”

    Anadra: “Your the same as ever Nida, don’t worry I got yah.”

     

    *Scene Change*(Inner City, Ruined Streets) (Illiad, Nida, Destrik, Lafander, & Anadra)

    Illiad: “F…”

    Ambient Noise: BOOM

    Illiad: “More scoundrels!”

    Destrik: “Those look like goblins, what are they doing here?”

    Anadra: “They bleed like anyone else, say the word and I’ll slaughter ‘em”

    Illiad: “Everyone attack on my orders… NOW!”

     

    *Battle Begins* (Win: Rout the Enemy)

     

    *Battle Ends*

     

    Anadra: “There were a lot of those little f…”

    Ambient Noise: BOOM

    Illiad: “There were…”

    Destrik: “We need to keep moving, if we stop more will definitely show up.”

    Illiad: “Right.”

    Anadra: “If I may ask why the safe house is not inside the castle? Wouldn’t it be safer to get and easier to defend?”

    Illiad: “When the safe house was built it was assumed that no one would make it that far into the city.”

    Anadra: “Why was it never moved?”

    Illiad: “Everyone assumed it would never be used anyways.”

    Anadra: “Well we all know that is cow’s manure now.”

    Illiad: “The point is we need to get there soon.”

     

    *End of Part 2*

     

    *Chapter 1 Part 3* (Inner City, Inside the Safe House) (Illiad, Nida, Destrik, Lafander, Anadra, Edgar)

     

    Illiad: “Edgar what are you doing here?”

    Edgar: “I came here to help protect you.”

    Illiad: “Shouldn’t you be with father?”

    Edgar: “That is the thing… your father was struck by an arrow to his chest… he probably won’t survive.”

    Illiad: “WHAT!”

    Nida: “The king has fallen?”

    Lafander: “I pray to the gods he lives.”

    Anadra: “Da…”

    Ambient Noise: BOOM

    Edgar: “I hate being the bringer of bad news but as one of his closest friends and one of his top advisors I feel I’m the best person to bring this news to you.”

    Ambient Noise: DOOR BANGING NOISES

    Nida: “Ready yourselves sounds like they are trying to break in!”

     

    *Battle Begins* (Win: Illiad survives 9 Turns)

     

    *3 Turns in*

    Nida: “I thought you came to help defend Illiad.”

    Edgar: “I’m helping in ways you don’t even know you ignorant swine!”

    Nida: “Well whatever you are doing currently is not quite as important as preventing Illiad’s head from being detached from his shoulders.”

    Destrik: “Nida watch out!”

    Nida: “Nyah!”

    Nida: “Thanks Destrik!”

     

    *6 Turns in*

    Anadra: “What in the gods blazes are you doing?”

    Edgar: “Nothing that concerns a sellsword such as yourself.”

    Anadra: “It concerns me if it means you’re sitting on your arse and not fighting!”

    Edgar: “This does not concern you so leave me be!”

     

    *Battle Ends*

     

    Nida: “So what were you doing that was so important you couldn’t help fend off the goblins?”

    Edgar: “I was maintaining the magical forcefield around the safe house so that no one could detect us un here.”

    Anadra: “Cow manure, I’ve worked with plenty of mages and I ain’t heard of nothing like that before.”

    Destrik: “Neither have I.”

    Edgar: “That is because only high sages have use for such a spell.”

    Illiad: “Regardless I am safe, need we continue this conversation?”

    Edgar: “I agree with the prince let us put this to rest.”

    (whispers)

    Anadra: “I don’t trust this man, he rubs me the wrong way.”

    Nida: “Agreed.”

     

    *End of Chapter 1 Part 3*

    I would appreciate feedback in this topic also I made all the class in skill stuff but I think I'll post those later.

  3. 4 hours ago, Mutsu said:

    So after lurking around for way too long, I decided to make an account. And that's pretty much it, hi people!

    I used this site awhile before ever making an account and honestly only did so I can join the discord group(I'm more comfortable using instant messaging than forum posts back and forth.) but welcome!

  4. This is an interesting idea personally I liked the unique skills that reflected the characters personality and/or role on the battlefield. Although some of the ones I didn't like were ones that were more generic (such as Corrin's which just gave a bonus to all C support or higher allies)

    Personally I think Robin from Awakening should have something like Tactical Support +5% chance to activate a dual attack or dual guard.

  5. I haven't played Echoes yet but a woodcutter from the country excluding the options you gave would make sense to be a fighter or barbarian personally BUT of the options you gave and how you made Atlas sound it sounds like of the options Mercenary to personally make the most sense. Cavalier doesn't make  as much sense most cavaliers in previous FE games are more like stereotypical knights and considering you mention that Atlas mentions crushing skulls that doesn't sound like something a knight would say. However mentioning the crushing of skulls does seem to fit a Mercenary class better as mercenaries generally follow a looser moral code(if one at all) and even in some cases might be more brutal encases. This is all based purely of opinion but I hope this helps you make a decision/come to a conclusion.

  6. 8 hours ago, Heruseus said:

    Welcome!

    Glad to welcome you!

    I'm shy and awkward, but yeah, have fun here, and get ready to be told to play the GBA games. A lot.

    Yeah I have the emulator on my PC some were. I did started playing a couple of the GBA games awhile back but never really continued them but guess I should try and do that sense I'm on summer vacation now.

  7. 41 minutes ago, Levant Mir Celestia said:

    What are your plans for these four?

    Anyways, I'd consider... Luna for Brady, Renewal for Laurent, Despoil (if you're into that) or Gamble for Yarne (you know that the male exclusive class skills suck if these are my recommendations for inheritance), and maybe Dual Guard + for Gerome.

    I forget what class passes Counter but I seem to remember it being Male only and counter can be a helpful skill(All though when it would be most usefull is usually when your character dies and then it can't activate) and on fast characters it can punish those that actually manage to hit them

  8. Hello everyone. I am Redapple777, but you can call me Red. I have been playing Fire Emblem for a couple of years now (actually about sense the time of Pokemon X&Y release) and my first game is Fire Emblem Awakening. After Fire Emblem Fates was announced I had wanted to buy it but the money I had been saving to buy a girl i knew a minecraft account, later she would betray me and delete my main awakening save file sense I let her barrow my awakening game, but my mom on Valentines Day pre-ordered me Fire Emblem Birthright. Some time later after beating the game a few times I would buy Revelations and fall in love with it. I currently do not own FE Echos but wish to do so.

    Now that we got my FE history out of the way just a few things about myself. If I don't know anyone(like here on serenesforest) I tend to come off as shy, while when I'm with people I know I tend to be very talkative and enthusiastic. Another my spelling and grammar is horrible despite being a native English speaker(I blame the US school system... jk) I'm sorry in advance to all those who are grammar freaks and non-English speakers that translate this as it will come out horrible. I'm very random, this comes from being diagnosed with ADHD but at this point its ingrained into my personality and it feels wrong when I'm not random. Also this is I like to come up with ideas for various things such as D&D and even FE stuff from time to time but I tend to get bored if it takes to long(Which it usually does). Finally I love to play video games and I play a wide variety from FE Fates to Pokemon, Overwatch to Civilization 5, Warframe to Terraria; all of these I bounce between from time to time and I enjoy all of them and feel free to talk about video games I'm always open to new games(Especially when they are free).

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