[Fire emblem another generic plot about mercenary's [Placeholder name]]

9 hours ago, Parrhesia said:

I absolutely agree that a small, well-executed hack is a lot better (and more achievable) than a flabby 30-chapter saga. That said, making it deliberately extremely generic is shooting it in the foot. Make it stand out. I'd also be inclined to say that the scale of the story is too large for something so short. Centre it on your group, try and explore their characters in a way that broader-scale FE stories largely fail to. You don't need to start off killing bandits and finish off with killing a king.

Yeah you are right i think my idea is a little to much there are two ways to think that one make it longer with more chapters which i am not doing and two rework the story into something simple i think i am going with the latter maybe instead of killing a king i could go with the group is trying to stop the most powerful bandit gang on the continent from destroying villages and towns by tracking them down and defeating them once and for all maybe something like that also i will try to explore my characters i do not want my main character to be a generic  goody two character like "You don't need to pay us even though we need money"  i want my main character to be a bit more real a normal person would not risk there live fighting a bunch of people for free that always bothered me fire emblem protagonists being to much of saints angels that can do no wrong that's why hector is my favorite lord BECAUSE THEY GAVE HIM A PERSONALITY sorry this is turning into a bit of a rant but... circling back i agree that my ten chapter plan is a bit short for killing a king so i think the powerful bandit plot i brought up earlier is more achievable i will also try to give my characters personality oh and since i did not mention it in my post i will be using fire emblem 8 for this because it has the most assets for me to use still on the fence if i will use the skill system... ANYWAYS this reply is getting long so i just stop here... wait if i just changed the plot I HAVE TO EDIT MY TOPIC NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO well if i  do change the plot which i probably will but yeah that's all this reply was way to long for my own good

[Fire emblem another generic plot about mercenary's [Placeholder name]]

Hello everyone you may have noticed the title yeah... i have not been able to come up with a good name for this yet but anyways i am trying to make a fire emblem fan game but first i will give you some plot "Ahem"

The continent of idgaf was once a peaceful place until a war broke out between the kingdoms of villiad and the neighboring kingdom of andria although the attacks were unexpected andria did not fall and launched a counterattack against villiad with the two kingdoms clashing seemingly even it seems the war would be a stalemate but there is still a deciding factor the two kingdoms rush to get the other kingdoms to support them in there war efforts with all the attempts to get the other kingdoms to join there side andria has no soldiers to spare so when fort trig requests reinforcement they can not send any out of options fort trig hires a small group of mercenary's to help them defend the fortress 

Okay for you're knowledge a lot of this is still debatable i might change a lot of stuff about this basic plot in the future i know this is pretty bare bones i have my chapter ideas down i just had no idea how to execute them and i did not want to make a hack of just a bunch of random chapters with no plot but for now i will give a quick summary of the chapters i have planned

Chapter 1: A village near fort trig is under attack by bandits with no soldiers to spare the leader of the fort send the mercenary's to deal with them

Chapter 2: On there way back to the base the mercenary's notice a group of villiad soldiers walking through the area they over hear the commander talking about how they are going to help keep fort trig under there control while the main force of the soldiers already there will move on to conquer more andria lands hearing this the commander of the mercenary's decides that they will ambush and take out the group of soldiers which they do

Chapter 3: Upon arriving back at fort trig they see it is indeed been taken by enemy soldiers they realize they are the only people who can take back the fort so they decide to fight there way inside the fortress but not before they see a cleric escape from the castle and head towards them they learn all the soldiers and the commander of the fort had been captured and he was the only one who escaped after hearing they start fighting

Chapter 4: After defeating the forces outside the group heads inside to take back the fort with the others being inside cells they attack to take the fort back

Chapter 5: Andria successfully makes the kingdom of iskard join them in the war and because of this they have soldiers to spare so after healing of what happened of fort trig the king sends reinforcements to the fortress and reassigns the mercenary's  to the front lines to help fight villiad head on they quickly encounter a force of villiad soldiers and battle against them 

Chapter 6: The group makes good progress pushing back villiad back but they notice a village under attack by bandits and decide to take a slight detour to fight off the bandits they believe it will be easy as there are only a few bandits but during the battle villiad soldiers find that they are in the village the commander of the group says the bandits will weaken them then they will finish them off they surround the village and force the group to fight against them too

Chapter 7: The group and andria soldiers get ready to attack fort emperium because it the place where most of the captured soldiers of andria are being held they promptly begin there attack on the fortress in a attempt to free the prisoners

Chapter 8: With the prisoners saved they gain a lot more soldiers so they are able to get a big push in there attacks on villiad they are told by one of there companions that they know a shortcut through the woods to get to the capital and the castle quicker but it turns out to be a trap set by a spy of villiad of infiltrated andria outnumbered and at a disadvantage the group decides to fight anyways 

Chapter 9: Arriving at villiad castle the group knows that victory is near and fight to get inside but villiads most powerful and trained soldiers are defending it with their lives it will be a fight to the death

Chapter 10: The group makes it inside villiad castle preparing themselves since the final battle is near the king of villiad prepares all his soldiers holding nothing back it will be the fight of the century its do or die time

There you go there is my general outline i know its a little short but its better to make a good 10 chapter hack than a bad 30 chapter hack now this is just well a concept and it most likely will not be ready for a while but i just wanted to say i was going to work on this any help would be greatly appreciated but i will not be able to give anything for you're help but its just a option trust me this is not a plea for help now constructive criticism is welcome this is just a rough draft of my story now i do not have screenshots because i have not started i know screenshots are important but this is my first real hack okay and that is all this is most likely going to be horrible when it releases but i have to start somewhere...

 

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Update time!

Chapter 6 part two Overpowered boss is overpowered

Spoiler

Here is our position from last time

Lute performs her special jumping death stab move

Yeah i am not going to be able to save them

Black glowy things of death ACTIVATE!

Yes seth I NEED MORE SPEED TO FEED MY ADDICTION

Hey stop crouching you jerk and get hit by my attacks

And stop taking cheap shots from afar

Yar har ye be messin with me crew i hope ya enjoy this ere axe to yer face

BARD POWERS ACTIVATE

Seth glows a radiant purple to power up his attack

Things are going well everything will be fi-

I have garcia rescue neimi and he gets a bad level while fighting back enemy's

Lute you might look like you have a horrible disease but you sure don't fight like you have one

That hurt a bit but lute will be fin-

See i tole you it would be fine!

Why did this hit RNG is not in favor please forgive me RNG gods

Seth helps out garcia the results are nice

The dancer dropped this

The spear is so powerful this soldier pure white 

Here is a position update 

EIRIKA i know you suck and all but try to hit something ONCE in you're life!

Ah finally mr short bow is gone now for his friend

STOP MISSING

Pain=profit now

OH NO that archer has come back as a skeleton for revenge

His friend takes revenge too ugghhhhh

Shifting reality to a few turna ago lute lives

Joshua runs away from this wimpy soldier because he is scared of him

I wonder what caused artur to stray from the light and become a pirate

That hit i am honestly amazed also eirika gets the three most useless stats

Lute keeps making her muscles bigger 

I'm going to have seth scout ahead WHAT COULD GO WRONG

Oh i am right next to the boss well... While we are here i guess we will look at his stats

WELL this is the first boss that is actually a threat i think seth might die 

Okay seth hope you finished writing that will of yours 

 

Yeah seth is definitely dead now

Well consider how powerful you are you should have done everything yourself from the start

I am not showing the battle because there was way to much blood to show yeah seth died...

THIS SEEMS LIKE A GOOD PLACE TO STOP yeah this the end of the update

 

Next time Actually beating the boss

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Hey i am sorry for dying and giving no new updates but yeah i will try to post updates again now

Now lets get straight into

Chapter 6 part one ROSS DIES 

Spoiler

As we will soon see the only victim will be me and also ross

I hand out some stat boosters to the characters who i see worthy of them

Here we are lets do this 

Ok i am sure saving these people will be easy

Seth moves bard train is here to make him move again and ross gets a bad level

Seth seems a bit surrounded eh it will be fine

Seth is tormented by the ghosts of who he has killed but eventually he decides not to care anymore and kill MORE

YES SETH SHOW YOU'RE NEWFOUND EVIL POWER

Ross begs for mercy while hitting this guy with fire 

He decides not to murder ross

That guys dead well there was nothing i could do yeah we are not getting the special reward on this one

Well at least it can't get wor-

. . . FINE SAVESTATE TIME

Ross gets his level again and its slightly better

Seth kills the girl on the flying pony

ALL SHALL PERISH FROM SETHS ALL POWERFUL GAZE NOTHING WILL SURVI-

S-S-S-Seth was just showing his humanity by sparing this girl thats all 

I did not expect that to hit well ross took some damage but he will be fine

I WANT MY PREVIOUS STATEMENT STRICKEN FROM THE RECORD

Ross gets his level again...

Aha lute will enjoy this very much later 

Here is a update on our position

Here is some combat because i had nothing to say about them well at least seth is doing w-

SON OF A BI-

Ok calm down calm down ross gets his level yet again and its better

Since i had to restart the item we got from the village was different its now a zanbato

Hey stop rubbing it in our face we do not have a healer yet

SETH DOES NOT ACCEPT YOU'RE PLEAS FOR MERCY PATHETIC MORTAL

Seth does some good damage to the man who killed him

And eirika finis- no eirika decides to be a disappointment as always

Joshua kills a soldier with his massive battleaxe

He gets some small benefits from it

Now eirika finishes and gets access to tomes that will just weigh her down and make her get doubled by everything yay

Garcia is as mad as i am that we do not have a healer yet and kills the enemy healer

Because if we can't have one nobody can

Here is our position once again and that is the end of the update

 

 

Next time Figuring out what class the boss is

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Okay i feel absolutely horrible so no updates today

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Okay the votes are in with a overwhelming 100 percent of the vote it seems kyle will be our shaman well enough introductions lets get into

Chapter 5x part 2 No healing items is so much fun

Spoiler

Here is our current position lets start progressing through this castle

Orson that bow is not a sword stop wielding it like one

ORSON STAND UP STRAIGHT... hunching is bad for you're back

And this was PSAs with Fortron do you're part and believe what a random stranger on the internet says

It seems orson took my message to heart good

Lancereavers mean nothing when i do not have a single lance user

Mmmm you're soul tastes good

Hey do not fire arrows at kyle he will murder you for it

Don't say i didn't warn you

 

Magic magic is good defense resistance and speed are also good try to get them next time

We continue crawling through amelias castle of doom!

I managed to catch the arrow why is the soldier flashing before the arrow even hit

The battle of the shamans who will WIN!

Apparently not Ephraim

HEY! i am suppose to be stealing you're life force not the other way around

A lady dies that's all i have to say about this

HEY i do not like getting swords lodged in my elbow think of the hospital fees

...Kyle all of one person voted for you please be better

This soldiers tries to throws blats of energy at orson he misses...

And now he no longer exists

We engage this wyvern couldn't screenshot it though

Kyle kills a wyvern and gets a bad level out of it

Oh cmon uggh i am starting to get living legend flashbacks

See kyle forde is killing things

Orson kills a shaman i do not know why they all have nosferatu either

Another update on our position

Forde summons all the dark energy making his body purple nah he is just poisoned

Forde levels up and gets a new skill 

A lot of orson centered combat happens i had nothing to say about some of these images so i clumped them together

Kyle does some fighting and glitches the exp bar 

Yep things are going well i am sure nothing can go wr-

WELL THAT'S JUST LOVELY 

WHEN YOU'RE UNITS DIE WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO LOAD SAVESTATE

I play about back to where i was kyle kills a soldier

Kyle the guy with the cape that floats 

Boom nearly dead things are going well

Then orson dies i load a savestate blah blah blah

Here is our new position i had forde stay back

A doog attacks kyle he lives

Kyle fights his evil twin in a death match

Kyle gets a slightly better level

Orson misses TWO 88 PERCENTS YEAH I AM GETTING MAJOR LIVING LEGEND FLASHBACKS FROM THIS

Kyle kills the evil puppy of evil

And since orson failed to hit those two 88 percents i die and load a savestate

I am just going to skip forward for you're own sanity

We make it through and are ready to fight the boss

Trust me i already have

WAIT ORSON DON'T GET A CRI-

And he is dead i wanted to give that kill to someone else but nope

I end the chapter without grabbing orsons bow like a moron

And we are done 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Okay that's the end of this one and before we do the conclusion i have to say

There will most likely not be a update tomorrow if there is it will be a short one why?

Because tomorrow is my birthday

Back to the same old grind

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Hello everyone lets just do this

Chapter 5x prelude you already have a shaman WELL TO BAD

Spoiler

Its time to play everyone's favorite fire emblem 8 gaiden chapter why is it everyone's favorite well that's because

ITS THE ONLY ONE IN THE GAME

Lets look at our new units because i did not screenshot the map here

Yeah ephraim has bad bases like eirika but unlike eirika he has the growths to counteract those bases

Next up the man with with the plan F O R D E

I am still new with imgur so a screenshot did not upload properly here and i am to lazy to try to upload it again also forde

Is another shaman lets look at kyle

His weapon is a nosferatu so i decided i did not need to show it again honestly i do not know which of the three shamans i will use so you decide

Yep i am having a poll the poll will be open for three days the winner will be used the others will be benched

Oh yeah we also have to look at the traitorous bastard orson

Well orson has 21 one attack he will one shot everything and if he does not he has that consecutive attack ability and 20 plus crit

When starting battle and if the enemy survives that the poison will be more than enough to finish them off so yeah nothing will survive orson

Well lets look at the boss

This guy will not be much trouble and if he is orson can kill him now lets start playing this chapter

Here is our starting position not to good we have some wyverns that will murder our squishy characters unless we murder them first

Yeah i was being really serous about that they will murder us part

Orson you are going to betray us later but for now KILL THEM ALL

Orson got a critical so that's one wyvern we have banned from existence

We start our assault on the other wyvern as well

MORE HEALING

Some more combat happens we try to dig our way out of our starting position

Ephraim turns into a rainbow to help combat this wyvern rider

Here is a position update things are looking good

I steal this poor guys life essence to heal kyle

ORSON WATCH OUT FOR THE BLUE STREAKS OF DEATH

Orson shoots little girls confirmed

Orson fires a bird from his bow to finish the job

Bad screenshots are bad

We slowly start progressing while making sure to attack this enemy

Ephraim bows to this mercenary but accidentally scratches him with his sharp claws

If you want to give me a million dollars raise you're hands

One last screenshot of me showing you my position and we are done for you're knowledge each update will contain about 50 screenshots make

Sure to vote on that poll and lets do the conclusion i do not know how this sites polls work so here is a link

To a strawpoll https://www.strawpoll.me/17546814

Next time PROGRESS

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The siegfried is the worst weapon in the fire emblem series

2 minutes ago, Emperor_Siegfried said:

Canas had nothing to do with the final battle of Blazing Sword.

Yeah canas has nothing to do with the final battle i just happened to use him with a luna to kill the fire dragon in my first run

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I only like camilla because i want to fit in i actually hate her

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I hate severa

PS we share the same location unfortunately i am not a tsundere 

 

 

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My favorite fire emblem is gaiden

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I waste my life away playing a stupid game on a stupid forum

3 minutes ago, Espurrhoodie said:

I am a 40 year old lesbian!

 

What how did you guess

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Camila is a trash character

11 minutes ago, Emperor_Siegfried said:

My username needs capitalization.

You were right so i changed it so now i have capitalization 

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Eevee is not cute 

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Okay i want to announce that i have updated the last update it is now finished updates will take a little longer to put out now but i do not care just wanted to say the hiatus is O V E R so enjoy

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does anyone know how to fix this the problem that is causing the hiatus is that serenas says i can not upload files bigger than

0.01MB so yeah that is quite a problem all my screenshots are bigger than that so if you know how to fix this please tell me

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Whats a shadow

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I like repeating points i already made because i am a unoriginal potato 

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Fire emblem is a bad series

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10 minutes ago, Emperor_Siegfried said:

I'm a lousy Playthrougher.

First off you are totally right i am still um perfecting my trade also

Camilla is a overrated waifu and a bad unit

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Eevee belongs inside a volcano

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I HATE CAMILA