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The year is 1679. On the continet of Valciana, There are three major countries:The first, and largest, is the Queendom of Laquen, led by Selena, the face of power and wealth. Laquen focuses on strength through water and land routes, allowing easy trade with other countries. The second, The Kingdom of Cuss, led by His Majesty Erik the VII. Erik follows his fathers' footsteps and focuses his country on military strength, allowing for a strange balance of military and sociaital balance. The last and smallest country, is the Republic of Celestra, led by a Parliment of High Ranking officials, mostly of the upper class. In July, 2020, the Queen, Selena, declares war on the Kingdom of Cuss. Realizing that the war is lost without numbers, She orders Her black ops agents to infiltrate the Parliment of the Republic and vote to ally themselves with the Queendom.
Why would the Queen take focus on such a small country? It has no strong military or many people. Has She gone insane? Or do her methods have a purpose?
Well, that is a story for another time. For now, I want to tell you of a story of one person, a soldier, who almost single-handedly defeated the Queendom's army. His name was Aren, and he was brave and loyal. You've probably heard the stories. But what were his origens? Well, sit down, and I will tell you his story; From the begining.
So yeah. Thoughts comments? What do you think of the prolouge? What could I work on and whatnot?