Thor Odinson Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Pent = Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kriemhild Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 So, can anyone post my Myrmidon in FEM? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Lux, if you aren't gonna EA, Support write. ... What what are you talking about I'm a suckish writer. And I'll EA when YOU finish the text. [spoiler=what I have so far, but A is BS. B and C have so far been approved by Kit so those are fine] C: Inari: Hey, you! You don't belong out here, I'm supposed to be the black-haired swordfighter girl of this army! Lumi:… I’m pretty sure I was here before you. Inari: Huh. Still, this is my job. Lumi: There’s no rule against two black-haired swordswomen fighting on the same side, is there? Inari: S--- Lumi: Behind you! Inari: Wh- *turns, dodges, kills enemy* Lumi: Hm. Not bad. Care for a spar sometimes? Inari: You set the date. Lumi: In three days time, then. Inari: Don’t stand me up! Lumi: I won’t. In the mean time, don’t die on me. Inari: Hah! As if! B: Inari: You from the other day! I have come for our spar! Lumi: Name’s Luminis. Lumi for short…Excellent. Let’s begin. *lunges* Inari: !*dodges, but barely**counters* Lumi: *dodges, attacks again* Inari: *dodges, counters* Lumi: -dodges, but the end of her shoulder-pad was chipped off- Lumi: Impressive… to be able to chip off parts of my armor like that. Inari: Hah! And why do you even wear armor anyway? Shouldn’t us swordfighters be able to dodge everything? Lumi: I am not so dependent on my dodging skills that if I were to be hit, I would still be able to take the hit and move on. Inari: Huh. Lumi: Anyway, I still have not gotten your name. Inari: Inari. Lumi: Well, I better get my armor repaired before the battle. See you around, Inari. *leaves* Inari: Hm. I’d best get prepared, as well. A: Inari: *jump attack* Lumi: -Turns and dodges- What was that for? Inari: To see if you’re prepared or not. Lumi: I’m alert at all times. Been trained that way since I was a little. Inari: So you’re from a mercenary family or something? Lumi: N— Inari: Funny, you don’t look it. Lumi: Th— Inari: Your armor is way too ornate for a mercenary’s. Lumi: Y— Inari: Looks more like a noble’s too me. Huh. But you don’t talk like a stereotypical noble. Lumi: Why should I talk like them? Too stuffy and serious. And if you’d let me get a word in, I’m not a mercenary. Inari: Eh? Then what are you? Lumi: Just some traveler from some place. ---and unfinished. I may change A entirely depending on what people on FEM say, Kit might have an idea. For now it's all BS and I feel it's a bit disconnected from C and B. Critiquing enclosed in the spoiler... C support -How are you gonna show that one killing an enemy? -Sometime, not sometimes -Meantime is one word B support -Only critique is again, how are you gonna show this battle? (I know a way if you want me to chip in) A support -Well, it doesn't really connect, as you said. A supports are usually the "confession time. let's be best friends/lovers yay" scripts. So you should try something like: "why did you take up swordfighting?" or have them reveal their pasts. I don't know much about either character, so I can't provide proper perspective on a model conversation. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 You should just log in. It's not that hard. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Critiquing enclosed in the spoiler... C support -How are you gonna show that one killing an enemy? -Sometime, not sometimes -Meantime is one word B support -Only critique is again, how are you gonna show this battle? (I know a way if you want me to chip in) A support -Well, it doesn't really connect, as you said. A supports are usually the "confession time. let's be best friends/lovers yay" scripts. So you should try something like: "why did you take up swordfighting?" or have them reveal their pasts. I don't know much about either character, so I can't provide proper perspective on a model conversation. I'll fix that. Do you? How? Hm... I'll see what people on FEM say, then put these all together and hopefully get something decent out of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 I'll fix that. Good. :> Do you? How? I'm sorry, what do you mean? Hm... I'll see what people on FEM say, then put these all together and hopefully get something decent out of it. Again, I'm from FEM too... :< Answers in the quote because I was too lazy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Well, the people who are online, since I'm asking them as well. How to show killing random enemies. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 I want to be the SM version of Pent. You wish. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kriemhild Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 (edited) Eh? Edited September 22, 2010 by Proto Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 (edited) I haven't, but most of the active users are from SF now. You'll be fine. WUT Edited September 22, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Well, the people who are online, since I'm asking them as well. How to show killing random enemies. Am I not here? > Then again I really know nothing about the story. Or the basic plot of the game. I just know I get to do the EA. ~ Well it's not exactly showing, but it's more like proving a fight through script. Like, Inari turn around then have their mugshot dash through a soldier that appears and make a sword sound. Then have him say "Grah!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Am I not here? > Then again I really know nothing about the story. Or the basic plot of the game. I just know I get to do the EA. ~ Well it's not exactly showing, but it's more like proving a fight through script. Like, Inari turn around then have their mugshot dash through a soldier that appears and make a sword sound. Then have him say "Grah!" We're just talking through the Chatbox, so it's whoever that's online. That works. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kriemhild Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Character posted I love kitties Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 You smartass. Also, name for character Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kriemhild Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 You smartass. Also, name for character I'm guessing Hawke is already taken for that Visharan Hero? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Yeah. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 You smartass. At first I honestly thought you meant me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 At first I honestly thought you meant me. You too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Rey León Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 You wish. I know. That's why I'm redoing my base stats. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lux Aeterna Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 You too. Now when have I ever acted like a smartass? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Now when have I ever acted like a smartass? True, that's me, still you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kriemhild Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 *uses Water of Life on thread* This better work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Huhuhuhuhuhhhhhhhhh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 BACK. ... Where's everyone? >: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 sleeping. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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