Masu Posted June 29, 2008 Share Posted June 29, 2008 I fell out of my chair when i read it! *goes to make a favorite line from this story topic* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 29, 2008 Author Share Posted June 29, 2008 I fell out of my chair when i read it! *goes to make a favorite line from this story topic* Lulz. We could probably just do it here, I mean it's not like this is used for much anymore. Plus I don't think everyone read this. I know Kiryn hasn't finished it. She left on vacation before she could. *Misses Kiryn.* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted June 29, 2008 Share Posted June 29, 2008 Hasnt it already been a week? *also misses kiryn* Well my favorite lines were: Lyle:*goes behind a building*....HOLY FUCK!!! Arc and Lyle(after saying that me and princess share a room):Touch the princess and YOU DIE Lyle:What do you mean? Hikari hasnt changed! Hey hikari can i have the next week off? Namine:Sure. Lyle:HOLY CRAP UR RIGHT THATS TOTALLY NOT HER!!!!! My favorite scene (besides from the obvious) was: Masu: Uh-oh. This isn’t good. Arc: No kidding Masu. Masu: Now what? Lyle: *Eye twitch.* I’ll tell you what......*He attacks Masu ad starts choking him* I’M GONNA KILL YOU FOR SCREWING THIS UP!!!!! Damon: Lyle! Masu: ACK!!! Lyle: YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!! *It takes Damon, Fireman, and Arc to pull Lyle off of Masu.* Arc: Lyle! Calm down! Lyle: That bastard screwed up and killed us all!!! Damon: Is killing him going to solve anything? Lyle: You never know!!! One thing i thought of though......Fireman saved me...FOR FREE. XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 29, 2008 Author Share Posted June 29, 2008 Hm. That's a very good note. I guess he just got caught up in the moment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted June 29, 2008 Share Posted June 29, 2008 i guess.......... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 29, 2008 Author Share Posted June 29, 2008 i guess.......... You know, Masu, if you liked this then you might like my history to. It's in the creative topic. It's longer than this was, but the topic is smaller cause no one read it other than Kiryn and Nightmare. (With the exceptions of a few people.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted June 29, 2008 Share Posted June 29, 2008 okay......but not tonight. its almost 2 am and i have work at 8 am. But im fucking sick of these continuous 9 hour shifts so i went like "I HAVE CHURCH AT NOON!" so im only working 4 hours thank god! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 29, 2008 Author Share Posted June 29, 2008 -Damon: But I did this cause I love you Lyle! You’re like a brother to me!THIS GUY IS SO SWEET! He just missed you, Lyle! XD I'm sure you'll forgive the 47 kills eventually... He's so sweet, but he's the one who murdered Taro violently...... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songbird Posted June 29, 2008 Share Posted June 29, 2008 He's so sweet, but he's the one who murdered Taro violently...... D: Good call. Damon isn't so sweet anymore. =( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 29, 2008 Author Share Posted June 29, 2008 D:Good call. Damon isn't so sweet anymore. =( Lol. And so ends the trend. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songbird Posted June 29, 2008 Share Posted June 29, 2008 (edited) I'VE FINISHED. Awesome story, Lyle! Now, my favourite parts from page 14-16: -....Damon....just appeared...out of a seed....that Masu was pregnant with... That is the coolest idea ever. XD -Namine reappears! -Namine: Thanks! *She envelops in a glow of light, which blinds everyone temporarily.(Well, except Nightmare.)* <--- Lol. -And awww at the kisses between Lyle-Hikari and Princess-Masu. -YAAAAAY! MASU GETS TO BE THE CHOSEN ONE! -Wait what. Masu just missed. Silly brother of mine. XD -LOOOOL. Only Fireman could leave so easily in the middle of a crisis. -Ew ew ew ew the Demon King ate you! And you're stuck with only Lich for company! D: I'm feeling kind of bad for you right now... -Aww. Hikari seems to have a constant faith in Lyle. =P -The final battle with the Demon King is epic. Also, I like how Arc can keep his bow but Masu isn't allowed to keep his sword. XD -Nightmare and Knife went on a killing spree NIGHTMARE AND KNIFE ARE BFFS! IT'S CANON! And finally: -OMG. YOU GAVE ME AN APPEARANCE! Though I'm surprised Fireman didn't charge me 10,000 for hitting on him. XD Overall, incredible story, Lyle! I'm looking forward to your next one! Edited June 29, 2008 by Songbird Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 29, 2008 Author Share Posted June 29, 2008 I'VE FINISHED. Awesome story, Lyle!Now, my favourite parts from page 14-16: -....Damon....just appeared...out of a seed....that Masu was pregnant with... That is the coolest idea ever. XD -Namine reappears! -Namine: Thanks! *She envelops in a glow of light, which blinds everyone temporarily.(Well, except Nightmare.)* <--- Lol. -And awww at the kisses between Lyle-Hikari and Princess-Masu. -YAAAAAY! MASU GETS TO BE THE CHOSEN ONE! -Wait what. Masu just missed. Silly brother of mine. XD -LOOOOL. Only Fireman could leave so easily in the middle of a crisis. -Ew ew ew ew the Demon King ate you! And you're stuck with only Lich for company! D: I'm feeling kind of bad for you right now... -Aww. Hikari seems to have a constant faith in Lyle. =P -The final battle with the Demon King is epic. Also, I like how Arc can keep his bow but Masu isn't allowed to keep his sword. XD -Nightmare and Knife went on a killing spree NIGHTMARE AND KNIFE ARE BFFS! IT'S CANON! And finally: -OMG. YOU GAVE ME AN APPEARANCE! Though I'm surprised Fireman didn't charge me 10,000 for hitting on him. XD Overall, incredible story, Lyle! I'm looking forward to your next one! Lol. Thank you very much. I have to come up with an idea first though..... Me and Nightmare might be doing a joint story though. In the mean time, you could read the sitcom or on of the histories of one of the characters. (I wrote the Lyle Dayek one obviously.) Plus there is The World Ends With Us by Metal Arc that you could read. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songbird Posted June 29, 2008 Share Posted June 29, 2008 Lol. Thank you very much. I have to come up with an idea first though.....Me and Nightmare might be doing a joint story though. In the mean time, you could read the sitcom or on of the histories of one of the characters. (I wrote the Lyle Dayek one obviously.) Plus there is The World Ends With Us by Metal Arc that you could read. Alright, I'll be doing that then. XD Man, I have a lot to catch up on... And if it's not spoilerly or anything, do you have a brief summary about the story you're writing with Nightmare? =P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 29, 2008 Author Share Posted June 29, 2008 Alright, I'll be doing that then. XDMan, I have a lot to catch up on... And if it's not spoilerly or anything, do you have a brief summary about the story you're writing with Nightmare? =P I wish I did. I have no clue what it's supposed to be about. We haven't decided anything yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songbird Posted June 29, 2008 Share Posted June 29, 2008 I wish I did. I have no clue what it's supposed to be about. We haven't decided anything yet. Ah. Well then, good luck brainstorming! XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 29, 2008 Author Share Posted June 29, 2008 Anyway, thanks for reading the story. I appreciate it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted June 29, 2008 Share Posted June 29, 2008 Actually, I've told him what it's about, but it seems he didn't understand. I won't be able to write any time soon, though. Got to finish RD and my own history first, plus the movie I'm making with Fireman...lots of stuff! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 29, 2008 Author Share Posted June 29, 2008 Actually, I've told him what it's about, but it seems he didn't understand.I won't be able to write any time soon, though. Got to finish RD and my own history first, plus the movie I'm making with Fireman...lots of stuff! Ah. Well in that case, I'll try to make another story in the meantime. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Florete Posted June 29, 2008 Share Posted June 29, 2008 Is this story over? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 29, 2008 Author Share Posted June 29, 2008 Is this story over? Yeah. Though some people might still be reading it. I know Kiryn hasn't finished it yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted June 30, 2008 Share Posted June 30, 2008 ..... <_< ..........im keeping that damn sword. SCREW THAT I GOT SCREWED OVER THE ENTIRE STORY (besides princess and knife) IM KEEPING THE DAMN SWORD!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 30, 2008 Author Share Posted June 30, 2008 ..... <_< ..........im keeping that damn sword. SCREW THAT I GOT SCREWED OVER THE ENTIRE STORY (besides princess and knife) IM KEEPING THE DAMN SWORD!!!!! Oh? You mean: This sword? *Plays keep away.* Up! Can't get it! Can't get it! Can't get it! Maybe you should count your blessings? At least you ain't dead. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted June 30, 2008 Share Posted June 30, 2008 Oh? You mean: This sword? *Plays keep away.* Up! Can't get it! Can't get it! Can't get it!Maybe you should count your blessings? At least you ain't dead. Or someone didn't screw up with your title Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted June 30, 2008 Share Posted June 30, 2008 Or someone didn't screw up with your title *in lyle's voice* GET OVER IT. And i dont need to jump for it! *wraps kendama around the sword* VICTORY. You know i fight with kendamas right?(EPIC GENIS FANBOY) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted June 30, 2008 Author Share Posted June 30, 2008 *in lyle's voice*GET OVER IT. And i dont need to jump for it! *wraps kendama around the sword* VICTORY. You know i fight with kendamas right?(EPIC GENIS FANBOY) That applys to you to Masu. *Punches Masu. Takes sword. Tosses it into the planes. Closes portals.* There. Now only Rov can get it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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