NICKT™ Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Fail. Hair is shit and the clothing really needs better shading. Plus it barely looks like Yazoo. XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 (edited) merry xmas people. etc Yazoo FF7 Advent Children. .pft The armor is shaded a bit oddly, and the face seems a bit stretched, but I like it. And merry Christmas to you too :3 Edited December 27, 2010 by Spy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Fail. Hair is shit and the clothing really needs better shading. Plus it barely looks like Yazoo. XD Nickt, don't be so rude. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 You mad? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 27, 2010 Author Share Posted December 27, 2010 Well that was honest critique to say the least. Got any advice how I could fix it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Not mad, Nickt, it's just morally rude to see someone's artwork and say "FAIL". And no, I'm not just saying that because it's Reaper... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 The jaw is really saggy. Try to make it less curved on the left(OPV). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 27, 2010 Author Share Posted December 27, 2010 Thanks~ I dunno when I'll next be able to edit it since I've got a new laptop with nothing on it, or paint D: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eCut Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Maybe reference someone has similar clothing? Oujay comes to mind so maybe he would be able to help you with him . :) As for the hair, maybe some of Joshua's hair would be a helpful reference? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted December 27, 2010 Author Share Posted December 27, 2010 *nods* awright! Thanks. I think the hair might need a fourth shade, I used Orsons armor for the hair colour. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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