O_O Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 (edited) --------> Any better? Edited June 5, 2011 by O_O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Ichigo+ Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 (edited) The part above the headband looks weird, why don't you better fill that up with some hair? It will look better that way Also, the armor part in his shoulder looks reeeaally tiny, why don't you expand it to the whole shoulder? Edited June 5, 2011 by +Ichigo+ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excellen Browning Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 I'm not sure what this is a splice of, but it's definitely nicely done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 (edited) The headband needs a border all the way around it, and, well, better shading. If you fix that, it'd make a good splice. Edited June 5, 2011 by deranger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O_O Posted June 5, 2011 Author Share Posted June 5, 2011 (edited) I'm not sure what this is a splice of, but it's definitely nicely done. If I can recall correctly..it's Lloyd (obviously), a little bit of Jerme, Pent, Legault, and Guy. Edited June 5, 2011 by O_O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Ichigo+ Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 The head band looks plain, give it some shading on the borders and where the hair is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
O_O Posted June 5, 2011 Author Share Posted June 5, 2011 (edited) The head band looks plain, give it some shading on the borders and where the hair is. I suck at shading, but I tried. Edited June 5, 2011 by O_O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 (edited) I suck at shading, but I tried. Reference other mugs, that's part of the learning process. Also, what'd you do to the hair, it looks weird and the colours don't differer enough, so it looks like a big blob. Take your color sets from other FE mugs (from FE8 if you're using FE8 colours) Edited June 5, 2011 by deranger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 (edited) Some shaping. Issues: - What happened to the third hair color? - Extra shades along pauldron from Pent's cape, and part of Lloyd's old hair color left in the back of his head - Beard and collar blending together; result of lack of third hair color - Scar is too straight and too sudden; kind of choppy - Forgot to circle, but the bangs coming over the headband are choppy, too Edited June 5, 2011 by · j e a l o u s y · Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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