risingSolaris Posted October 10, 2012 Author Share Posted October 10, 2012 Fixed the collar...and added a new sprite. I know the headband thing needs to be worked on (a lot), but I don't really know how to fix it...anything else? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted October 10, 2012 Share Posted October 10, 2012 I don't see a difference in his collar. I mean make the top of it parallel to the trim on his armor, in that the collar is equally high all around. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted October 11, 2012 Author Share Posted October 11, 2012 Oh, that's what you meant...well then, here it is. And a fix on the girl's headband. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted October 11, 2012 Share Posted October 11, 2012 That's it. Though the back still dips down, not a big deal though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted October 20, 2012 Author Share Posted October 20, 2012 Made some fixes to some of my sprites. Hopefully they look better... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted November 17, 2012 Author Share Posted November 17, 2012 (edited) Trying my hand at battle spriting... Well, it probably sucks, but critique? Please? Edited November 17, 2012 by risingSolaris Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 17, 2012 Share Posted November 17, 2012 He looks like he is leaning a little towards the right. Maybe angling his right leg (our point of view) further away would help? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt Snow Posted November 17, 2012 Share Posted November 17, 2012 (edited) It's/He's a magic user right? And it looks pretty cool but I can't tell if he's looking left or right =p. Edited November 17, 2012 by Matt Snow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted November 17, 2012 Author Share Posted November 17, 2012 It is a magic user. Its supposed to be looking left (our left)... Fixed the leaning issue. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted November 18, 2012 Author Share Posted November 18, 2012 (edited) Can't...stop... So I made a whole sheet! Probably needs tons of work, but I think this is good for my first battle sprite in maybe a year...and even then I sucked at that time... Edited November 18, 2012 by risingSolaris Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 18, 2012 Share Posted November 18, 2012 It would be easier to see any problems if you can animate and show us. At a first glance though, it's hard to recognize what he's doing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted November 18, 2012 Author Share Posted November 18, 2012 Okay, tried animating the basic attack... So, I know the shadow needs to change when the scarf is flying around, and there's a lot more to fix. Critique? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt Snow Posted November 18, 2012 Share Posted November 18, 2012 I like it but honestly I think it would be better if he was looking the other way. I get what your trying to do, but it looks kinda like he is casting away from the enemy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted November 18, 2012 Share Posted November 18, 2012 It's also kinda boring, even for a basic Mage... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted November 18, 2012 Share Posted November 18, 2012 I wouldn't use black outline on the scarf. I like it scarf thing and colors makes me think of a sothe/miciah child Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted November 21, 2012 Author Share Posted November 21, 2012 (edited) Okay, tried to do what you guys told me to (casting towards the target, adding a few more frames to make it a bit more interesting, and changing the black outline on the scarf). Before I animate this, does anyone know a good free animator? The one I use currently requires a pretty slow process to align every single sprite, and I can't zoom in and out (don't know if this is common for other animators as well). Edited November 21, 2012 by risingSolaris Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 21, 2012 Share Posted November 21, 2012 It's still kind of simple. I think that using two sets of arm movements would spice it up instead of just one movement. As for animating, I would suggest that you just use FE Editor Adv and make a script for the animation. It's not hard and you can fine-tune it really easily. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted November 22, 2012 Author Share Posted November 22, 2012 Okay, so put in two arm movements during the attack instead of one, but now it looks...a bit weird. Help with fixing this a bit? (P.S., decided to stick to my old animator) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt Snow Posted November 22, 2012 Share Posted November 22, 2012 I think (not sure) that it's because his shoulder doesn't move. The pad(?)/armor piece he has kinda stays put the entire time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted November 22, 2012 Share Posted November 22, 2012 Yeah, shoulder needs to move more, he looks rather static, otherwise. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted December 1, 2012 Author Share Posted December 1, 2012 I CAN'T SPRITE! But really, I can't Supposed to be Catria. It's an FC. The biggest mistake to me right now is the head size...anything else? I know there are probably tons of other mistakes, but I'll need help finding and fixing them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted December 1, 2012 Share Posted December 1, 2012 well the hair is not terrible, but you seriously need to redo that armor and resize that head XD her eyes are kinda derpish and scary too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted December 1, 2012 Share Posted December 1, 2012 try referencing seph1212's maybe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted December 2, 2012 Share Posted December 2, 2012 Yeah her body is so badly proportioned. Widen those shoulders. I picture her about the size of Fiora/Syrene. The eyes are pretty derpy, as Niharu said. The nose looks off-angle with the rest of the head, too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted December 22, 2012 Author Share Posted December 22, 2012 New sprite, still a WIP (Wil's face is just a placeholder). Anything that needs to be fixed? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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