OreoStyx Posted December 20, 2012 Share Posted December 20, 2012 Here's some sprite work that I had floating around on my laptop. I'm thinking of making a FE7 hack of my own. But for now, I'll work on sprites. [spoiler=Lots of Pictures] First Row: Isaiah, Maddox, Dyna, Zemira, Haben Second Row: Kiandra, Caius, Hadley, Fanella, Jamie Last Row: Rishan, Omari, and Xycann (Might as well throw in a Kingdom Hearts OC) Before and After of Walter Before and After of Riley, decided to change the eyes and fix the shading of his wing a bit Before and After of Christena, needed changes in the colours Before and After of Andros, decided to go green, lol. Before and After of Darah, first one is really creepy looking. Second one was an improvement, and the last one I added more wrinkles to make her look more realistic and not just adding wrinkles to make her look old. I'll be posting more in the near future. =D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted December 20, 2012 Share Posted December 20, 2012 I'm too lazy to type up a decent critique so I'll work on that later. For now, be sure to watch colors (FE6/7 and FE8 style colors need to be separate), and watch some angles on the splices, especially with hair. At the least you do decent proportions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OreoStyx Posted December 20, 2012 Author Share Posted December 20, 2012 I'm too lazy to type up a decent critique so I'll work on that later. For now, be sure to watch colors (FE6/7 and FE8 style colors need to be separate), and watch some angles on the splices, especially with hair. At the least you do decent proportions. Thanks for the advice Hamlet, will definitely keep that in mind. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted December 21, 2012 Share Posted December 21, 2012 Jamie and Omari looks weird cause of the neck size. I like the first row and the first three on the second. the fourth one on the second row should have her left shoulder raised a little to make it look better. I agree with hamlet and you need to work on the colors since that's the only thing hurting my eyes. idk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OreoStyx Posted December 23, 2012 Author Share Posted December 23, 2012 Jamie and Omari looks weird cause of the neck size. I like the first row and the first three on the second. the fourth one on the second row should have her left shoulder raised a little to make it look better. I agree with hamlet and you need to work on the colors since that's the only thing hurting my eyes. idk Thank you for your input, I tried to make edits to the ones that needed fixing. I also added more stuff. [spoiler=More Pictures] First Row edits: fixed Zemira's hair a bit fixed Haben's colours so it doesn't burn the retinas off of people (can't believe I didn't notice it earlier tbh) changed Omari's eyes so it's not just Percival's face, fixed his collar, slimmed down his neck a bit, and changed the colours to stick to FE8 made Fanella's left shoulder higher a bit, hopefully that looks better than before made Jamie's neck not as thick as before fixed Riley's skin tone to match FE8 standards Second Row: Jubal, Illeana, Elias , Uriel, Annette (I referenced from Eyemiya from Fire Emblem: New Mystery of the Emblem), Eira (I referenced Eira's hair colour from Lumi's entry in Round 19 of the splicing contest) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted December 23, 2012 Share Posted December 23, 2012 Eira's mask bothers me a lot. Too bright for the dark color she has going on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted December 24, 2012 Share Posted December 24, 2012 move Jamie's neck to the left. Maybe that would help. There's still something off with Jamie's neck angle. Idk. for now try moving his neck to the left like what I said. The rest looks better than before and only needs a little more fine touches. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OreoStyx Posted December 26, 2012 Author Share Posted December 26, 2012 Eira's mask bothers me a lot. Too bright for the dark color she has going on. Oh ok, so is this better then? move Jamie's neck to the left. Maybe that would help. There's still something off with Jamie's neck angle. Idk. for now try moving his neck to the left like what I said. The rest looks better than before and only needs a little more fine touches. I shifted Jamie's neck to the left as you suggested ninjamoeba. And now for something new, Andros's battle sprite. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted December 27, 2012 Share Posted December 27, 2012 Smooth out the eyebrows on Jamie, and the colors on his shirt are really clashy. The face and neck shading can be improved in a few parts, but the proportions are good now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted December 27, 2012 Share Posted December 27, 2012 that battle sprite is quite excellent :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted December 27, 2012 Share Posted December 27, 2012 Oh that's a pretty neat battle sprite. Yes it does looks better, but black mask with black hair? ;| Gonna be rough to see difference. You don't have to change that. I don't see any suitable color from the mug to make it be different other than that shoulder armor. (IF THAT IS AN ARMOR NOT A HAIRBAND WRAP.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OreoStyx Posted January 24, 2013 Author Share Posted January 24, 2013 Smooth out the eyebrows on Jamie, and the colors on his shirt are really clashy. The face and neck shading can be improved in a few parts, but the proportions are good now. Tried to make the changes that you suggested, and again thank you for the tips. that battle sprite is quite excellent :3 Thank you. I plan to make more soon; that is if school doesn't weigh me down. Oh that's a pretty neat battle sprite. Yes it does looks better, but black mask with black hair? ;| Gonna be rough to see difference. You don't have to change that. I don't see any suitable color from the mug to make it be different other than that shoulder armor. (IF THAT IS AN ARMOR NOT A HAIRBAND WRAP.) *Facepalm* I don't know what I was thinking. Fixed the mask colour to match the shoulder armour. I fixed the shape of the shoulder armour and also tried a bit in shading it differently. Not sure if this version of armour shading is better than the first one though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted January 24, 2013 Share Posted January 24, 2013 For the first sprite, I wouldn't use the outline color for his eyebrows. Also, his head is the size of a child's, and it doesn't really fit with Ross' body. For the second sprite, the custom stuff looks really pillow-shaded. Also, the mask is still almost the same color as the hair, so maybe make it a bit brighter? Or cover the mouth altogether. Otherwise, these aren't bad. Keep up the good work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Gabriel Knight Posted January 24, 2013 Share Posted January 24, 2013 Jamie's head does not fit the width of the shoulders. And his chest is way too big for a child (if that's what he's supposed to be). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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