CobyTheGoober Posted July 9, 2016 Author Share Posted July 9, 2016 (edited) EDIT: Just noticed a dumb typo at the bottom right screen shot for chapter 2, will be fixed lmao. Edited July 9, 2016 by CobyTheGoober Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tequila Posted July 9, 2016 Share Posted July 9, 2016 There's a few more than just villan -> villain. From left to right, top to bottom: "woes" should be capitalized. Fine. Formatting is a bit weird; try putting 'big bucks' (or at least 'big') on the top line. Ok. Ok. 'sort of ish' should be hyphenated ('sort-of-ish') Ok, Keyword isn't one word, I don't think. Try "A crazy man. The key word being 'crazy'". Needs a comma after "too". Next 5 are ok. "quite" doesn't quite (har har) work in this context. I'd remove it. "tomohawk" should be "tomahawk". Fine. See previous comment. Ok. "on" should be "about". Put '--' after "the" to indicate being cut off. Should be a comma after "Yeah". No comment. Ditto. Fine. Fine. You already pointed this one out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted July 9, 2016 Author Share Posted July 9, 2016 (edited) Thanks for noticing those :D I'll get to fixing them quickly. Edited July 9, 2016 by CobyTheGoober Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted September 16, 2016 Author Share Posted September 16, 2016 *blows off the dust* Well uh... progress report I guess. We are currently working on the writing for chapters prologue to 2, and we are working on the eventing for chapter 3. Chapter 3-4 will hopefully will be done around... the end of the month. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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