Truthblade Posted December 3, 2015 Author Share Posted December 3, 2015 Not to be offensive, but the SU is kinda done poorly. It is not very detailed at all, and the Sol Katti doesn't exist in this world. There is also not much said about their persnalities either. The retainer's is even less so (aside from the fact that each lord is supposed to have TWO retainers here) . Also, Elwave and Elfreeze don't exist in this realm either, as you are only allowed to use canon weapons (with the exception of.....oops, almost spoiled). Again, I am not trying to be mean, and I do not mean to be offensive, but I am not sure how well you would exactly do in this rp. Try expanding the SU if you think you'll have a better chance. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enaluxeme Posted December 3, 2015 Share Posted December 3, 2015 The baron has been changed to a marquess. So... Mercenaries and myrmidons can't promote anymore? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Truthblade Posted December 3, 2015 Author Share Posted December 3, 2015 Oh no, I think I accidently deleted a few classes (curse you nook that is not as good as browsing as a PC!). I'll have that fixed. Thanks for pointing that out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castello Posted December 3, 2015 Share Posted December 3, 2015 (edited) Name: Wilhelm Lorielle [spoiler=Appearance] (Yes, he's a dude. He's got Lucius syndrome. o.o') (And here is what he wears, don't mind the face. >.>) Gender: MaleRace: HumanAge: 22Class: Acolyte Weapon: Thani (and if that's not okay I'll start off with a Divine) Personality: Wilhelm is a rather laid back and patient individual. He rarely is ever phased by anger and often comes off as a priest-like fellow with his peaceful and helpful demeanor. However, his desire to help everyone leads to his biggest downfall. He must always do the righteous thing even if it hurts himself in the process. He is always very against getting help from mercenaries or anyone that seems suspicious and can be very unforgiving to those who have committed wrong doings. Wilhelm is a rather outgoing guy and enjoys to socialize amongst the army.Backstory: Wilhelm is the third child of the well-regarded priest Simon, who was often referred to the Archbishop of the Celestials. For all his life he had been raised under the idea of the celestial's and their origins. Wilhelm was especially close with his older siblings: his older brother Klaus and his year older sister Cerise. His fondest memory includes them playing in the backyard of the church along with the orphan's his father and mother raise adamantly. He was raised quite well and his father eventually reached lord status when Wilhelm turned 14 years old. By this time Wilhelm was already notorious for taking the church over at a young age, but his sister and brother had vanished, on the search for adventure. Wilhelm did all he could to stop them, they even offered to take him along, but he refused and stayed home at the church, helping his sick father and depressed mother. With a rather lacking family, Wilhelm took up light magic in order to help protect the town he was raised in, becoming quite good because of his close connection to god. With the uprising of a new guild, Wilhelm was called fourth for his skills. Leaving his best retainer behind, he took one of his close friends along to fight the war, though reluctantly.Role: LordTalents: Light magic, knowledge of the Celestials, sewing, cooking, singing and taking care of children. Skills: Charisma and Miracle Fun Fact: Sleeps better on the hard ground rather than a bed. Edited December 4, 2015 by DietCocaine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midori Mage Posted December 3, 2015 Share Posted December 3, 2015 Question. If it's still possible can I change my lord? As much as I like mine, it kinda bothers me that there are no female lords. I have an idea, and I can always just tweak the retainers a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Truthblade Posted December 3, 2015 Author Share Posted December 3, 2015 Name: Wilhelm Lorielle [spoiler=Appearance] (Yes, he's a dude. He's got Lucius syndrome. o.o') (And here is what he wears, don't mind the face. >.>) Gender: MaleRace: HumanAge: 22Class: Acolyte Weapon: Thani (and if that's not okay I'll start off with a Divine) Personality: Wilhelm is a rather laid back and patient individual. He rarely is ever phased by anger and often comes off as a priest-like fellow with his peaceful and helpful demeanor. However, his desire to help everyone leads to his biggest downfall. He must always do the righteous thing even if it hurts himself in the process. He is always very against getting help from mercenaries or anyone that seems suspicious and can be very unforgiving to those who have committed wrong doings. Wilhelm is a rather outgoing guy and enjoys to socialize amongst the army.Backstory: Wilhelm is the third child of the well-regarded priest Simon, who was often referred to the Archbishop of the light. For all his life he had been raised under religion. Wilhelm was especially close with his older siblings: his older brother Klaus and his year older sister Cerise. His fondest memory includes them playing in the backyard of the church along with the orphan's his father and mother raise adamantly. He was raised quite well and his father eventually reached lord status when Wilhelm turned 14 years old. By this time Wilhelm was already notorious for taking the church over at a young age, but his sister and brother had vanished, on the search for adventure. Wilhelm did all he could to stop them, they even offered to take him along, but he refused and stayed home at the church, helping his sick father and depressed mother. With a rather lacking family, Wilhelm took up light magic in order to help protect the town he was raised in, becoming quite good because of his close connection to god. With the uprising of a new guild, Wilhelm was called fourth for his skills. Leaving his best retainer behind, he took two of his close friends along to fight the war, though reluctantly.Role: LordTalents: Light magic, religious recitement, sewing, cooking, singing and taking care of children. Skills: Charisma and Miracle Fun Fact: Sleeps better on the hard ground rather than a bed. When I was hoping that the last applicant would be a female lord, this was not what I had in mind :p (That's not an issue though, so don't worry about that.) The only issue here is the religion. It is not that I hate religion (I am a christian myself) but that I already had an idea for the celestial side of the lore (The celestial world is inhabited by angel like races (think the heron tribe in RD) but getting too far into it may include some spoilers.) But if you want to keep it, I can let you in on some of it since he is a priest and would know about it. Question. If it's still possible can I change my lord? As much as I like mine, it kinda bothers me that there are no female lords. I have an idea, and I can always just tweak the retainers a bit. I feel the same way. If it bothers that much, go ahead (please :p). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castello Posted December 3, 2015 Share Posted December 3, 2015 I would appreciate it! :) I could probably just take religion out of it and replace it with your celestial idea. Shouldn't make a huge difference. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enaluxeme Posted December 3, 2015 Share Posted December 3, 2015 (edited) First retainer:Name: QuinnGender: FemaleRace: HumanAge: 26Appearence: Quinn is 5'8" tall. She has long red hairs held in a tail and light blue eyes hidden by a large pair of glasses. She wears a yellow dress with silver lace.Class: TroubadourWeapon: Heal staffPersonality: Short tempered yet kind hearted, Quinn is a serious woman. She isn't shy, but can sometimes have problems socializing.Backstory: Quinn became the pupil of the sage Isaac around fifteen years ago. She was born in a poor family, but the sage saw potential in the child and asked the parents the permission to take her on his travels and teach her the arts of magic.With time, she became less of a student and more of a personal assistant to the scholar. After years of travelling spent visiting academies and learning more about the many fields of knowledge, Isaac decided to settle down, and accepted to work as a teacher to a certain marquess's son.Quinn, sixteen at the time, was allowed to live in the castle with her mentor, thus she met Orland. The two had never gotten along, with the girl scolding him for slacking off, and the boy often picking on her in response.She left the castle when she was twenty years old. After visiting her family, Quinn settled down in a town in Gohln, working as a medic.She was summoned by Isaac himself: having to send his son in a mission for the king, the marquess wanted a capable healer with him. However, the sage is now too old to take this role, and thus sent a letter to his former student to ask her the favor to take his place.Role: RetainerTalents: Quite knowledgeable about magic and other fields.Skills:Fun Fact: Often uses her staff as a sort of mace weapon. Not that useful (read: completely useless) in actual fighting, but enough to keep young, pert lords at bay. Edited December 5, 2015 by Enaluxeme Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Truthblade Posted December 3, 2015 Author Share Posted December 3, 2015 Retainer accepted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castello Posted December 3, 2015 Share Posted December 3, 2015 Name: Alena [spoiler= Appearance] Gender: FemaleRace: HumanClass: Knight Age: 26 Weapon: Iron LancePersonality: Alena is more of a motherly figure, who is always trying to look after everyone else. She hates the sight of those in pain and will do anything to prevent her allies and lord from getting hurt. She is incredibly honorable and fights by a set of strong rules and despises those who are undisciplined in their ways. Alena is an incredibly introvert and is often found by herself. She's incredibly awkward and struggles to understand other's emotions.Backstory: Alena grew up in the same village as Wil and was one of the orphans he played with when he was young. As Alena was 4 years his senior, she often did her best to protect him from the evils in the world. At the age of 17 she joined the guard and served to fend bandits off from their village, but was always sure to give Wil a visit back at the church and be his crutch when he needed her. When the wars cooks up, it is Alena who offers to accompany to him on his journey. Even though Wil declined her request, she came along anyway. Role: RetainerTalents: Painting, Long distance runner, Good at Math and History and can read exceptionally well.Skills:Fun Fact: Alena doesn't seem to ever show signs of fatigue or tiredness. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midori Mage Posted December 3, 2015 Share Posted December 3, 2015 (edited) Alright. I changed Azar with our female lord. See how you like her! I put her in the spot where Azar's profile used to be. Edited December 3, 2015 by MidoriMage Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B.Mage Posted December 3, 2015 Share Posted December 3, 2015 Are there any spots available? You just update the cast list when you accept them. If there are any spots, I'd probably like to join Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Truthblade Posted December 3, 2015 Author Share Posted December 3, 2015 (edited) New lord and retainer accepted Note for anyone else who wants to join. We are out of spaces, so I am not accepting anymore signups for now. But don't worry, I may open oportunities for more heroes in the future, but the signups are closed for now. As for my retainers... here they are Finally, I have my retainers. retainer 1 Name: Calboun Gender: Male Race: Human Age: 28 Appearence: Callhoun has fair skin, blue eyes, neatley grromed brown hair (in contrast to his lord's shaggy unkempt blond hair) and a brown goatee. Consistent with his class, he is pretty muscular (but not as much as his lord, strangely) . He wears turqoise armor that covers much of his body, but as a result, does not allow much movement. Class: Knight Weapon: Steel lance, Javelin Personality: Unlike the master he serves, Callhoun is not very stubborn, and is very flexible and adaptable. Though he is a bit reserved and seemingly emotionless, he still thinks inwardly a lot, and comes up with great ideas as a result. He is also very self reliant, as expected of a retainer. Backstory: Callhoun was at a time best friends with Lord Korval. Though they butted heads at several times, they were still loyal to each other, and Fawsus was always there to restrain the lord whenever he lost his control. When Callhoun finally becomes a squire, he asks Korval to make him his retainer one day so if he becomes a knight. Korval agrees, and eventually keeps his promise. Role: Retainer Talents: Tactical genius, Mount: none. Skills: Personal Skill: battle observer: If he waits one turn and is not attacked, he will have increased evade for a turn. Fun Fact: Day dreams the most. Retainer 2 Name: Tegan Gender: Male Race: human Age: 17 Appearence: Has platinum blond hair, brown eyes, fair skin, a few freckles, and a lean build. He has mostle yellow colored armor with white trimmings, and a light green scarf. Class: Wyvern Knight Weapon: Javelin, Iron spear Personality: Tegan is a very radiant individual. Very outgoing and social, one can never excpect to get bored in his presense. Bold and fearless, he takes on anything without really giving it much tought, resulting him in rushing into things. Dispite the negative flaws, he really knows how to light everyone else's faces whenever he has too. Backstory: Tegan was a squire training under Calboun, who was a bit impatient with the boy's brash antics. Tegan always had been looking for the opportunity to finally prove himself worthy of being a knight. Then one day, his day came. A dragon attacked the palace and was carrying away the marquesses's wife*. The dragon attempts to fly off with her, but Tegan leaps on his wyvern and flies off to fight the dragon in an intense air battle, ending with the dragon falling into the ground dead, and the wife into the back of Tegam's wyvern. After the amazing rescue, Korval was certain that he found a new retainer. Role: retainer Talents: Good with animals, wyvern training, dragon "nerd". Mount: A yellow male wyvern named Fly Skills: Personal Skill: Rusher: If user is the leading unit, their attacks will have more accuracy Fun Fact: The biggest early bird. Accepted (do I really need to accept my own retainers?) Now Cocaine just has to finish their second retainer, and we can begin the final step. *Kinda cliche'd, I know, but I was in a hurry :p. Edited December 3, 2015 by Blade_of_Light Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castello Posted December 4, 2015 Share Posted December 4, 2015 (edited) I think I'll just go with one Retainer, I don't really have any good ideas for another one- I Hope that is okay. Edited December 4, 2015 by DietCocaine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Truthblade Posted December 4, 2015 Author Share Posted December 4, 2015 Well, if you really can't come up with one, I guess that's ok. Enaluxeme, are you stumped too? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enaluxeme Posted December 4, 2015 Share Posted December 4, 2015 No no, I have another retainer in mind, I'll post soon. By the way, remember that I live in EU, so I'm inactive when it's late evening in US. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enaluxeme Posted December 5, 2015 Share Posted December 5, 2015 (edited) Second retainer:Name: JeanGender: MaleRace: HumanAge: 23Appearence: Jean has a muscular, yet not too bulky figure 6'1" tall. He has blonde hairs with a fringe to the left and black eyes. He wears a green shirt, a black headband and white shorts. He also has leather boots and iron shoulder pads.Class: FighterWeapon: Iron AxePersonality: Jean is usually calm, but can't stand people who harm or look down to others. He can be serious, but he usually isn't strict and tries to be funny.Backstory: Son of an innkeeper, Jean lived a relatively calm childhood in a town near the castle.Though he never liked to work at the inn, Jean used to help his family by cooking or splitting wood, as he never had been good at dealing directly with the costumers. In fact, Jean was a troublemaker before meeting Orland and joining the military, and often started fights and brawls.During an evening in winter, the inn's tavern was full of people, and his mother was too sick to work as a waitress. While he was serving at the tables, he ended up having an argument with a rackety costumer. The two started yelling and eventually fighting, until they were divided by some armed men, who appeared to be some sort of escort. One of them called the man "my lord". After calming down, the man told Jean: "You know what? You are actually pretty interesting. Why don't you come and join the military? Maybe you'll serve under me in one or two years!". Jean wasn't impressed at all, and promptly responded that he would never serve a spoiled child who doesn't even know what it means to work.He was impressed the next day, though, when he found the same guy splitting wood on the back of the inn. The noble greeted him in a friendly way, then asked him if he would now consider his offer....Eventually, Jean joined the military, and was recently assigned to be Orland's bodyguard under specific request by the young lord.Role: RetainerTalents: Very good at cooking and recognizing edible fruits and vegetables. He is learning how to use bows in order to hunt wild animals by himself.Skills: GuardFun Fact: When cooking, he prefers to chop vegetables with his axe rather than using a knife.Sorry for the wait, I had problem with my internet connection. Edited December 5, 2015 by Enaluxeme Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Truthblade Posted December 5, 2015 Author Share Posted December 5, 2015 Is he a fighter? You forgot to list his class. Other than that, everything else is fine. Alright, now that all the SUs are finished....LETS GET THIS PARTY STARTED!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Truthblade Posted December 5, 2015 Author Share Posted December 5, 2015 Is he a fighter? You forgot to list his class. Other than that, everything else is fine. Alright, now that all the SUs are finished....LETS GET THIS PARTY STARTED!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enaluxeme Posted December 5, 2015 Share Posted December 5, 2015 Seems like I accidentally erased that field. I also fixed Quinn. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackzero Posted December 5, 2015 Share Posted December 5, 2015 I could take the second territory near the town mentioned in the IC thread, if nobody else wants to. If someone does though I'd be willing to wait for another chance though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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