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After the War of Heroes


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Something feels wrong to me about just a pair of unconnected stories. If you were going to do a bunch of short tales across the spectrum, I feel it would work better with more of them. Also the timing in the second one seemed a little forced, a little too convenient, as if done for dramatic effect.

As far as the tales themselves went, I found I far preferred the first, but the second definitely did some good work too.

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